^THE JADED PRINCE^{II}-sk (ch-194,pg-148) - Page 45

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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry i am not able to comment regularly...i get busy with my studies and that is y...

but i do press like button...

will try to be more regular in comments...
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Posted: 14 years ago
i missed the stories written by the writer n my firend who forgets me for forever..well take care and ..dont be disheartned ache stories pe comment kia bina log reh ni paenge jyada..ha bich main aise jhatke jaroori hote hai for readers unhe be apne luxury time se thoda time comment n like karne ko nikalne ke lie.. bye
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Posted: 14 years ago
dear really sorry for not commenting...

I know it has hurt u but last 6 months hv been realy busy but still in between i give a small comment ...

Most of the time i read the update on the mobile and thr the like button doesnt work cant even click on it...

But i know this not an excuse but in the future wl try n comment on each part but dont promise u as the next 3-4 months going to be really busy most of the times i read the fic at night just before sleeping on the mobile life is really hectic looking after the house and my part time work and to top it up hv an exam iin june for which i hv to study...

Sorry once again but i promise wl try n comment more often...
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part (s) πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† i didn't miss much πŸ˜›πŸ˜†...

pt 135

🀣 poor sujal πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† chotta sa joke bhi samjh nahi aaya πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...

kashish has a valid point "apne saath bhi nahi dekha" πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Godd πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† in what direction Sujal's mind runs πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† she was asking for a simple photo as a couple... the wedding photos πŸ˜³πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† & sujal bhi πŸ˜†πŸ˜†kya kya soch raha tha πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† & smart boy ulta teasing kashish πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

pt 136

Good understanding b/w SK 😊😊 ...

kashish darling batane ki kya zarut thi u returned at 11 πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† now his fuse will be Off considering how short fuse he has πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†








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Posted: 14 years ago
hey awesome part, last mai 11 baje aayi thi batane ki kya jarurt thi kshish ko. ab dekhe hai sujal kaise react kaenga but nice part
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey waiting...wen r u gng 2 updt...updt soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 136
wow this is really progressing between them...
Sujal has raised his voice again at the last...
but liking the way now they are...
cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 137


k-Waise main kal interview ke liye gayi thi

s-Kaisa raha?

k-Thik tha. Dekhte hain

s- Konsi company hai?

k-Fashion house hai. Fashion magazine ke article writer ki post hai

s-Good good...tumhe intrest ayega

k-Mujhe laga tha ki kal tum gussa karoge, main kal 11 baje jo aayi thi

s-What?!!!! 11 baje!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

She pouts

s-Kashish 11 baje?!!!!! Are you nuts???? Tumhe pata hai kuch ya nahi???

k-Nahi...matlab...wo jagah bohot durr thi...aur mujhe zyada pata nahi tha raasta...aur interview bhi late hua to...to..late ho gaya

s-Please tum bacchhi nahi ho ki main tumhe samjhaun why it is not safe for a woman to be outside at 11 o clock alone in the night!!!

k-Par main kya karun? Kya karti main?

s- Aur tumhe rasta bhi nai pata tha?!!! Unbelievable!!!

k-Tum gussa kyun kar rahe ho? Aa gai naa main

Sujal khada hokar idhar udhar ghoom raha hai

Kashish is following him with her eyes...pachta rahi hai ki mooh hi kyun khola

s-My God Kashish! Mujhe pata hai tum idiot nahi ho aur how can you be so naive? Aise kaise kar sakti ho?

k-Main kya karti late go gaya to? Uske upar jam tha... bohot durr bhi tha

s- Agar jagah ke bare main nahi pata tha to mujhse ek baar kehti to. Mujhe kyun nahi bataya?

k-Kaise kehti mere paas phone nahi hai

s- Bas naraaz thi isliye you will take silly risks? Ghar ka phone nahi hai? Main ghar par nahi tha kal office jane se pehle?

k-Main kahan se karti auto mein baithkar phone?

s-Kashish! Agar tumhe wahan jaane se pehle ye nahi pata tha ki jagah kahan hai, kitni door hai to mujhe kyon nai bataya? Aur whan pohoch kar to pata hoga naa, wahan se bata deti

k-Mujhe laga main dhund lungi aur maine dhund liya

s-You are impossible!

k-Kya bata deti? Mujhe laga aa jaungi. Mujhe kya pata tha itna bada jam lag jayega

s-Tumhe samajh aa bhi raha hai ki main kya keh raha hoon yaa nahi?

He walks upto her...pulls her out of her chair and shakes her hard

Kashish hairaan si ho gai hai

s-Phone nahi hai to kaha??...10 phone de dunga. Wahan pohoch kar kaha?...Sab chod kar aa jata! Par nahi! Tumhe laga ki sab kar logi apne aap! Ek baar nahi socha ki raat ko late ho sakti hai! Ek baar nahi socha ki raasta nahi pata, kho sakto ho...akeli ho. Tumhe nai Pata ki akeli ladkiyon ke saath kya ho sakta hai? Tumhe seriously nahi pata to main bata deta hoon!


k-I mean mujhe laga raasta auto wale ko to pata hi hoga aur mujhe laga main pehchaan jaungi raasta , aai bhi to thi

s-Are you even listing to your own lame excuses dammit!!! Agar tumhari beti aisi harkat karti to tum usko ghar mein band kar deti!

Sujal leaves her and starts rubbing his head as if he is gettng another headache

k-Kya tum mujhe ghar mein band kar doge? I am sorry Sujal

She manages to utter

s-Tum batao kya karoon?

k-Nahi...sorry...par...tum..over-react nahi kar rahe...aa gai naa main sahi salamat

s-Tum meri jagah hoti to kya karti? Shabashi deti ki arre wah...kitni himmat hai... rasta bhool gai par dari nahi, akele aa gai...!!!!

k-Main? Tum hamesha hi late aate ho

s-Main Kashish? I have car. No one can touch me or harm me. Tum ek auto mein thi, uss auto wale ka bhi bharosa nahi. Agar wo serial killer hota to? Yaa rapist hota to?

k-Wo to auto driver tha

s-Agar tumhe raaste mein rokkar chori kar leta to?

k- Par main uski auto mein 7 baje baithi thi

s-Tumhe kahin aur le jaata, tumhe to raaste bhi nahi pata tha, tum kya kar leti?

k-Maine to 7 baje ka calculate kiya tha, ki 8 baje tak aa jaun gi

s-Now, you decide what I should do with you

k-Mujhe tumhe batana hi nahi chahie tha

s-Haan bilkull theek...great mat batao... mera to dimag hi kharab hai hamesha bura hi sochta hoon.. tum to theek thaak aa gai, main faltu tention le raha hoon. Imposible!

Sujal keh kar wahan se jane lagta hai

k-Sujal

s-Yaa to iska dimag kharab hai ya main pagal hoon [bad bada raha hai]

k-Sujal wait...wait. Achcha I am sorry. Ab se tumhe phone kar diya karungi. Thik hai naa

s-Nahi mujhe mat batao...as you said that would have been the wisest course

k-Arre Sujal, wo to aise hi keh diya

s-Aise hi?...

k-Yaa to maine to kaha hi tha ki apne office mein rakh lo. par nahi

He is shaking his head...kahan phodu wali condition ab Sujal ki hai

k-Achcha achcha ba guss nahi karte, [uska gaal sehlaate hue]. Hai naa, nahi gussa karte'

s-Don't try and pacify me as if I am a stupid kid, Kashish...who is having an absurd fit

He says coldly

k-No no, I am stupid. You are very intelligent. Par jo ho gaya so ho gaya, baat khatam naa

s-Don't try the guilt ride with me

k-Sujal, ho gaya naa wo, aage se nahi hoga

Sujal closes his eyes...trying his best to calm down

Edited by storywriter - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update..he is sooo worried for her...love him like this..
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsm updt...n thnx 4 gvng lng updt...sujal cared 4 kashish ...lvd d part wer su is saying agr tmri bti aisi krti toh...tm use bnd kr dti...n our kshish is toh 2 naive 2 undrstnd su dilema...

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