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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

what a beautiful piece you have writen sadaf, you have caught each and every emotion so accuretly and penned it so poeticly, loved it.
thank you for the pm and look forward to the next piece,

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trina2010

@trina2010

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

OMG Sadaf . It's wonderfull. You penned down Arnav's emotions so beautifully. Hats off to you. Thanks.
Thank you for the PM.

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sidhu285

@sidhu285

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

very well written..and thanks for pm

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

this was fantastic Sadaf...Arnav's every emotion described with perfection...totally loved it...

The man who never cared , give heed on the philosophy of fretfulness and afraidness, bursted out from the bubbles ardently, ensued and splashed the most poignant, deteriorating repercussion of loosing her with self-assurance, reflection of agony on his face, forlorn of being harmed on his lips by seeing her in calmness, a silent declaration on his tongue, 'If you could know how much I love you '

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chammak_challo

@chammak_challo

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Beautiful post Sadaf...!! Well said...!

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Uswah

@uswah

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

I really enjoyed to read ur posts always Sadaf ...ur synopsis about them is just amazing ...thnx for PM

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subiscs

@subiscs

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

This is super cool!!! loved it 😊

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Richa :D

@Richie-Rich

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Omg!! Sadaf! You have written beautifully! Yet Again!

The man has converted into an inaccessible device, for which he cannot stride, he cannot smile, he cannot enlighten himself, only due to, its Khushi who holds that key in her hand.

Sometimes, a person doesn't know from which anguish and torture he's going through. Because, only he knows the thousand deaths he died in those few seconds of fear, while swallowing it bit by bit. ' A heart knoweth its own sorrows ' so does Arnav's state has been elicit.

I love these two lines particularly, so much of truth they convey!
You have done downright justice to each of Arnav's emotions!!
Brilliant post! 👏