IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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hemvb

@hemvb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#391

i wanna smack arnav for what he did!! thats no excuse to treat a woman like that..hell he too had a sister!!!! but cant hate him...still love him much ;);) anxious to know how khushi will forgive him..plzzz upadte soon

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oh.petite.one

@oh.petite.one

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#392

lovely update and wonderfully written...

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#393

You made me cry like hell... I hope noone ever has to go through this, but thestatistics aren't really in my favor... I hope Khushi will eventually recover 😭

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mali

@mali

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#394

I can see how draining it would be to write this. How do forgive someone who violates you in such a manner?

it's interesting that both Khushi and Arnav are guilty of the same thing, not telling about Shyam to protect Anjali, but instead of protecting her, it ended up hurting her.

thanks for sharing your work.

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#395

Though not explicit but a rape is always a rude and violent part to rude..!

You've written that well..!

Finally Arnav came to know the truth! Please update soon..

Thanks for the PM😊

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#396

I absolutely love this update!
You described Arnav's condition well! The guy can really do anything for her sister and even in the show, khushi will always be the second one!

The rape was merely because of his over raged attitude over Shyam! I love how the tory' proceeding!

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sweetygirl28

@sweetygirl28

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#397

Very well written Hiru.. Totally i can understand that his brains stop working when he is angry and also when he is on the verge of losing his sister...

Shyam is such a ********* i hope arnav does something to him...

poor khushi she had to suffer.. but i also wont say there isnt her fault at all.. she should have let arnav know abt shyam...

thanks for pm!!

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#398

awesome update felt so bad for kushi pls continue soon

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karisma

@karisma

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#399

i begun reading n involuntarily i opened my eyes wider n sat up straighter when i realised who was going to rape whom.

i think you cdnt have handled that point any better than u did!!👏 👏 👏

i didn't feel bitter towards arnav ..just sorry that he got caught in the lies spun by sham.that became even more obvious with the self-talk going on n leading to that pinnacle