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Posted: 14 years ago

#441

I just looove this FF !!!

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Mehek25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#442

Awesome update..

But Vicky in love with Geet...

Omg hope he does not turn negative...

Pls continue soon...

Thanx for such a lovely FF and the pm also

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Posted: 14 years ago

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(created by Piya)

I know guys I shud hv updated yesterday but sry guys phir late ho gaya n thank u sooo much for bearing wid me guys...
Thanks a million for all of your love and support!!
Your comments and likes really make me feel special and motivates me to write more for u all'.
I'm really sry for not being able to reply to each one of your comments but thanks a trillion for appreciating and commenting on my work''''
My special thanks for all of ur amazing comments.
I really luved each one of dem guys...Luv u all!!!!
Guys i've given english translations in black but if u r comfortable pls do read in hindi...
THANK U ALL SOOO MUCH!!!!!!

Guys dis part is dedicated to my dear Ritzy di(m sure u all know her as amazing writer of Til Death Do Us Part n now Vivah) n abi(abinash079) its juz coz of dem I managed to giv dis update within a week lol...luvya both...

PART 24

Sheena worked quiet hard on herself before coming to Taj Cafe as she wanted to look presentable in front of the MSK totally oblivious to what this meeting have in store for her...
Sheena entered Taj cafe bit nervous bit excited about meeting MSK...
Sheena reached the table where Maan was sitting comfortably and forwarded her hand...

Sheena: Good afternoon sir! I'm glad to get the chance to meet you...

Maan didn't move a bit just looked at her...

MAAN: Trust me there is nothing good about this afternoon and i loathe the reason of being here...

Sheena was flabbergasted and didn't know what to say or do next she just took back her hand that was still forwarded in front of him...

MAAN: Now stop acting lunatic and sit..

Maan said firmly with a harsh tone...
Sheena immediately followed his instruction and took the seat in front of Maan...

MAAN: Now miss Sheena just listen to me and speak only when you need to get that??
Sheena: Ye...yeeesss sssir...
MAAN: Now if you really love your career and don't want it to be destroyed then do as i say samjhi(understood)??

Sheena just nodded her head nervously not getting what does MSK want from her...

MAAN: I know someone must have given you the lead for the scoop thats making rounds on every channel today so better just spit out the name of your informer else say bye to your still establishing career...
Sheena: But sir...w..
MAAN: Uh uh...miss Sheena just the name i don't want any shit from you...get that?? SPIT OUT!!!

Maan shouted in rage...
Maan's sharp voice and ferocious eyes were enough to intimidate already terrified girl...
She immediately opened her mouth...

Sheena: D...DDDia...Dia Mathur she studies in the same college with Jai Singhania...
MAAN(thinking): Oh Dia...shayad kal meri baat par ghaur nahin kiya usne par is baar ghaur karne ka koi mauqa nahin hoga uske paas bas apni is harkat par afsos karegi zindagi bhar ye MSK ka wada hai...
[Oh Diya...may be she didn't think upon my words yesterday but this time she won't get anytime to think upon she'll just regret her act for her whole life and thats MSK's promise..]

MAAN: Hmmm ab tumhein mera chhota sa kaam karna hoga aur phir tum apne newspaper ke zariye poori duniya ke saamne us ladki aur Jai se maafi mangogi apni is bebuniyad news ke liye...
[Hmmm now you need to do a little work for me and then through newspaper you are going to apologize to that girl and Jai in front of the whole world for this bullshit news of yours..]

Sheena: J...ji sssir..

Maan tells Sheena his plan and explains what she has to do... Sheena had no option but to agree to execute Maan's plan... Maan told her that he is going to call her after sometime and then she'll have to do as Maan said... She nodded her head in agreement terrified and they left Taj cafe...

AT COLLEGE

Nupur: Yaar mujhe chinta ho rahi hai Geet aai bhi nahin aur uska phone bhi switched off hai aur wo stupid news... Uske aur jiju ke beech sab theek hoga na??
[Guys I'm getting worried Geet didn't come to college and her phone is also switched off and that stupid news... Is everything fine between her and jiju??]

Dia: Fine?? Mujhe to lagta hai ab tak Khuranas us behenji ko apne ghar se bahar phek chuke honge afterall waise bhi use as Mrs. Khurana hardly koi janta hai aur ab to usse naam jodna Khuranas ki beizzati hogi... Infact lagta hai mobile bhi chhin gaya uska tabhi its off.. Bura hua bechari ke saath na??
[Fine?? I think by now Khuranas must have thrown that down market out of their house afterall hardly anyone knew she is Mrs. Khurana and now linking their name with her's will be shameful for Khuranas... In fact I think her mobile is also snatched away thats why its off... Poor soul! I really pity her...]

Jai got all the more tensed hearing Dia...

Jai: Please yaar Dia achcha nahin bol sakti to bura to mat bolo waise hi main bahot guilty feel kar raha hoon subah se...
[Please Dia if you can't say good atleast don't speak out bad I'm already feeling so guilty...]
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Maan had this feeling it is someone from college and very close to Geet's group who informed Sheena so he switched off Geet's mobile and made her promise that today she'll just relax and all studies talk from tomorrow...

Maan called Jai...

MAAN: Jai its Maan don't speak just listen to me...
Jai: J...ji...
MAAN: Jai tum 1 ghante mein Mayank aur Samrat ko lekar Asoka pahoncho aur ladkiyon ko meri call ke baare mein kuch mat kehna... Baqi ki baat hum wahin karenge...
[Jai you reach Asoka with Samrat and Mayank in an hour and don't tell girls anything about my call... We will talk there only...]

After the call Jai said that his dad is really angry with the buzz and he has immediately asked him to come and meet... He also said that he needs Sam and Mayank to convince his dad that he did nothing to disgrace him this and its all media's fault and they immediately left...
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Meanwhile Vicky and Geet secretively left KM...
Vicky new that their mobile phones and his car could be traced in minutes so they left their phones in KM and before leaving he called his friend and asked for his jeep...
As Vicky's car left the boundaries of KM Geet's view was getting blurred due to the tears that were pouring out through her eyes but it was her pained heart that was shedding the tears of agony...
After taking and executing the most shattering decision of her life her heart and soul was drenched with agony...the girl who has spend half of her life thinking ways and reasons to be with Maan, get a glimpse of him has decided to leave him forever...
She didn't know how to live without Maan... It was always the feel of his presence that motivated her to go through the hardships but now she herself has left her masiha(saviour)... 'Now how is she going to survive???' This question was constantly ringing her mind filling her soul with more and more agony...
Her already weak body finally gave up not able to bear with the extreme mental suffering she was going through and she collapsed...

IN KHURANA MANSION

Annie entered Maaneet's room... The ambience felt a little strange to her than when she left... She felt strange when she found the room empty... She was about to leave the room when her eyes fell on the pictures that was being flashed on the tv screen... She was really enraged seeing that and ran to her mom...

Annie: Mom!!! Mom!! Mom apne aaj new s dekha hai wo Geet...
[Mom did you see today's new theres Geet...]

Gauri's heart skipped a beat in fear...

Gauri: Hey bhagwan! Annie Geet ne to news nahin dekhi na??
[Oh God! Annie Geet didn't watch the news right???]

Annie: Mom ye to mujhe nahin pata par kya bhai ko pata hai aur aap sab ne mujhe kyun nahin bataya??
[I don't know that mom but does bhai know about it?? And why didn't you all tell me??]

Gauri: Annie hum sab ne subah dekh liya tha aur tu so rahi thi isliye reh gayi... Beta mera ji bahot ghabra raha hai agar Geet ne news dekh liya hoga to?? Maine use tere saath chhoda tha wo tere saath nahin to kahan hai?? Geet!! Geet beta!!
[Annie we all saw it in the morning only and since you were sleeping we forgot to tell you... Daughter I'm having a bad feeling if Geet somehow saw the news then?? I left her with you if she is not with u then where is she?? Geet!! Geet beta!!]

Annie: Mom aap shant ho jaiye Geet Vicky ke saath hai kuch nahin hoga main abhi dhoondh ke aati hoon aap tension mat lijiye...
[Mom please relax nothing will happen Geet is with Vicky I'll just go and find them you don't worry..]

Gauri: Main bhi tere saath chal rahi hoon Annie mera dil baitha ja raha hai...
[I'll also come with you Annie my heart is sinking with anxiety...]

They both called out Geet's and Vicky's name several times roaming around KM... Their loud calls reached dadima's ears and she also came out and joined them in finding Geet but all their efforts went in vain since Geet was already gone quiet far...

Dadima: Hey bhagwan ye Geet kahan chali gayin?? Aur ye Vicky bhi kahin dikhayi nahin de rahe hain??
[Hey bhagwan where has Geet gone?? And Vicky is also out of sight??]

Gauri: Mujhe pata tha Geet koi aisa hi qadam utha legi janti hoon main apni bachchi ko par ye bewaqoof Vicky usne Geet ka kaha kyun maan liya??
[I knew Geet will take such kind of action I know my child very well but this idiot Vicky what was the need to agree with Geet??]

Annie: Main bhai ko phone lagati hoon...
[Let me call bhai first...]

Annie called Maan but his phone was on silent and he was busy in his meeting so he didn't notice...
On the other side Gauri called Pratham and informed him... His heart sank but holding his emotions he immediately took the required action and called the commissioner of Delhi police and told him Vicky's car number and sent him Geet's and Vicky's pictures through mail... Pratham also tried calling Maan since his meeting was not in office but his tries went in vain as Annie's...
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On their way Jai told Mayank and Sam about Maan's call... The meeting just finished when they reached...
Maan signalled Adi to call Sheena and ask her to do her bit and asked the trio to sit...

MAAN: Thanks tum log aa gaye... Actually wo media scoop ke peeche Dia ka haath hai aur maine use sabaq sikhane ke liye plan kiya hai but I need your help...
[Thanks for coming guys... Actually Dia is behind all this media scoop and I've planned something to teach her a good lesson but I need your help...]

Jai: Jiju hum bhi uski aqal thikane lana chahte hain... Dost ho ke asteen ke saanp wali harkat ki hai usne... Aap bas bataiye kya karna hai... Waise jiju Geet theek hai na??
[Jiju we also want give her a piece of mind... She has done the act of a sweet poison... Just tell us what we have to do... Jiju is Geet alright??]

Maan nodded his head and told them how he has kept her away from all this news and then he explained the whole plan and their role in it...
The trio left to do their respective bits...

MAAN(thinking): Dia waise to tum bas ek ghamand mein choor sarphiri ladki ho par Maan ki Geet ko apna nishana bana ke aur MSK ki baat ko nazarandaaz karke tumne apni zindagi ki sabse bari galti kar di... Geet main sab theek kar doonga aur jab tum kal college aaogi to tumhein in sab baaton ki bhanak bhi nahin hogi...
[Dia you are nothing but a proud and mental chit but you did a big mistake by striking Maan's Geet and not giving thought to MSK's words... Geet I'll resolve everything and when you'll come to college tomorrow you won't get a hint of all this...]

With that thought Maan left to set the climax stage of his plan...
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Seeing Geet collapsing Vicky panicked he tried to get her back to conscious state by calling and shaking her but all in vain her weak body had already given up with the suffering she was going through... Vicky knew he was running out of time so he again started the car and he reached the place where he took his friend's car and left his car on roadside... Moving at a distance from his car he bought a bottle of water and sprinkled some on Geet's face but that also didn't help it felt that her body has completely given up...
Vicky hurriedly analyzed his options and decided to take her to a friend's home who was herself a doctor... He called his friend from a PCO and asked her to meet him at her place... His friend's place was nearby so it didn't take much time to reach there...
He lifted unconscious Geet in his arms and reached his friend's flat... He rang the bell somehow... His friend opened the door...

Friend: Oh god Vicky whos she???
Vicky: Shefali ye meri friend hai aur yaar interrogate baad mein kar lena abhi pehle ise check karo achanak se behosh ho gayi hai...
[Shefali shes my friend and now please check why she fainted suddenly you can carry on with your interrogation later...]

Shefali: Ok yeah...

She checked Geet...

Shefali: Yaar iska BP bahot high hai and ye pregnant bhi hai... Tujhe ise kisi gynaec ke paas le jana chahiye... Main koi risk nahin le sakti she needs a gynaec's consult...
[Yaar her BP is really high and she is pregnant too... You should take her to a gynaec... I can't take risk she needs a gynaec's consult...]

Vicky was extremely shocked hearing that Geet is pregnant and his blood boiled at the extent his brother has gone to torcher Geet... He somehow controlled his anger and decided to give it a thought later first Geet should be alright and away from Maan...

Vicky: Shefali yaar its complicated but I can't take her here and there so just consult some gynaec on phone and treat her please...
Shefali: Bu...
Vicky: Please Shefali help me yaar...
Shefali: Ok..

Shefali called up and consulted a gynaec... The gynaec suggested some medicine and an injection for lowering Geet's BP to normal...
Shefali did as instructed and asked Vicky to let her rest for sometime but Vicky wanted to get out of Delhi as soon as possible and now he was eager to know the true reasons behind maaneet's marriage...
Geet was still unconscious since the injection she was given had sedative...
He made Geet lie at the back of the jeep and started driving...

Vicky(thinking): Mujhe Geet aur bhai ki shaadi ka sach sahi se janna hi hoga aur agar mujhe is baare mein koi sahi se bata sakta hai to wo hai Meera... Aisa karta hoon hoshiayarpur chalta hoon Delhi se bahar bhi hai aur Meera se sab pooch bhi loonga...
[I need to know the truth behind Geet and bhai's marriage and only Meera can give me the true details... I should leave for hoshiayarpur its outside Delhi and I'll ask everything from Meera...]

I know dis was short but guys promise i'll defo try n update d nxt in 2-4 days...
Hope I lived upto all of your expectations!!!!!!
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Zahra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#444

me first...hehe...

awesome update AG...

ek toh maan scared the hell out of that sheena...

that was jsut awesome...

i really loved that part...

poor sheena...kare koyi...bhookte koyi...hehe...lol

and then maan...i just love him...

he is so hell bent on teaching that dia her lesson...me with u maan...c'mon...hum honge kamyaab...

and now he even has the boys on his side...

poora boys gang gonna show that dia her aukaad...hehe...

but yeh kyaa...

geet deciding to leave maan...but why?????

aisa kyun,,,

me gonna cry now...

and vicky...am gonna smash his head...how dare he think ke maan is torturing geet...jee karta hain k abhi abhi k abhi ek doon donon gaal pe...hehe...

awesome update...continue soon n thnxxx...

Edited by zahra15 - 14 years ago

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Abreshmina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#445

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Me love d update Appi.. U truly rock...!!!!!

I luvd d beginning wala scene hi whr Maan takes d hell outta Sheena... Hahahaha... Bechari k paseene choot gae... Hahahaha... Beta.. MSK ki Pari k sath pange kaise le lie tumne... Hehehehe... I luvd dat entire scene .. Hahahha...
Dia to gone hai... Muuuhahahaha...

I luvd hw Maan handles d entire situation...
Called up Jai... N asked hm to meet him along wd Mayank n Samrat... MSK ka dimag... Usne aasteen me saanp wala kaam kia.. To uspe bhi waar andar se... Hehehe... Dats d way to go MSK... Hehehehe...

But ye kya.. Ye Geet bhi nah.. Ye kaisa decision le lia... Aise thori na hta h.. Itna ku sochti hai.. Huh...
Dis stupid Vicky.. I feel lyk strangling him.. Gadha ullu... Puri baat pta ni h... Apne dimag me stories make up kie ja rha h.. Pehle puri baat to jaan leta.. Idiot kahin ka.. Huh...

Me vry tensed bout Geet's health... Bevkoof ne decision to le lia.. Bt she cnt stay away from Maan.. N luk.. She collapsed.. OMG.. Shes olrdy sooo weak.. Ab kya hga...
Vicky to sara kaam itni secrecy se kr rha h.. Jaise saalon se Geet ko bhagane ka plan bana rkha tha.. Huh...

Chalo atlst ghrwalon ko pta lg gya dat Geet is missin.. Bt ye Maan meetin me busy uff... Cumon Maan.. Fon ka dhyan to rakho... Uff...

Me eager to knw further...
Update soon plzzz...

Luv ya loadsss Appi...
Muuuaaahhh...

Edited by AbbyluvsMaan - 14 years ago

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AvNeil123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#446

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wow Gina...i came 3rdbig improvement...i hd loadz of problems with my phone today hehe

coming 2 d update...

it was amazing...out standing...superb...mind blowing👏👏👏

i just loved the extent 2 which maan is going to mke evrything smooth 4 geet

this vicky is irritating me tho😡 he doesnt know what d truth is...n making his own assumptions...nw i really feel like banging his head 2 a wall😡😡

n this dia is arrrggghhh😡😡

n poor geet😭

cnt wait 4 d next update..Gina..

ur a fab writer 👏

Edited by luv_GurTi - 14 years ago

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lively-piia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#447

nice update...

dia toh gayi...

oh no ab yeh vicky...uff

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tia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#448

ye dia toh nhi bchegi
ye vicke kitni planng ke sath geet kobahar leke ja rha hai
bt
woh bhool gya ki
GEET KO MAAN SE DOOR KRNA MUSHKIL HI NHI NAMIMKIN HAI...😊
plz yaar maaneet ko juda mat krna
hate vicke,,😡