AshNi FF:LOVESTRUCK complete;LOST IN LOVE Ch1to24 - Page 38

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Lizzie. I think DK is too strongly etched in our minds and so is Dr. Ahmer. There would always have been questions about your A even if you had written the character sketch at the outset. A small suggestion. Perhaps a mention of city and year in the sketch itself might go a bit further in making his characterisation more acceptable to those who feel that his behaviour in your FF is unnatural. Having said that, I am sure there is an audience for both the characterisations - original as well as contemporary. I, for one, enjoy both. Original gives me nostalgia but I relate more to contemporary. As an aside, I hope this does not count as your promised Republic Day update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yes, Lizzie ..as Mimoha said , we want the promised one today...😊 😊
...Otherwise as a breach of contract you will be sentenced to write two more FFs ( Do I need to mention full of _______ ☺️ ☺️ , you are free to fill up the blanks, as you know us..😉) within saturday...😆 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Mimsy..suggestions appreciated, noted and acted upon! 😆..Please see the updated ckt sketch for time and city.

@all: update coming up soon..watch this space!
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Posted: 14 years ago
nyc character sketch...👏
ya, i too wondered why not a girl in ashu live ever come before...as its impossible...to let such dashing man left alone by the girls...

its not like the girls always knew that ashu is being haunted and being spelled by magician malika😆 to not let other girls touch him or love him...and nidhi is like a fairy who could only broke the spell...😉

Nidhi made her own space in ashu's heart coz of her attitude n style...coz of her simplicity...

waiting for the update...wanna see more of daring ashu

luv ya
ana

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennett

@Mimsy..suggestions appreciated, noted and acted upon! 😆..Please see the updated ckt sketch for time and city.


@all: update coming up soon..watch this space!


Thank you Lizzie. I am glad you found the suggestion useful. I hope I am eligible now for 0.5% cut in royalty, should you decide to publish this FF.

Waiting for the update.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mimoha


Thank you Lizzie. I am glad you found the suggestion useful. I hope I am eligible now for 0.5% cut in royalty, should you decide to publish this FF.

Waiting for the update.


Ha Ha!! Published eh? Like your sense of humour... And you'll like Ashu's in this next update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok I missed this one! HAve to go out to pick up my son frm school. will come back and read
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Posted: 14 years ago
Liz.. this is one awesome holiday gift... 🤗

super sweet update.. and a super sweet side of Ashu revealed..!! u hv proved again.. that not jus passion.. ur a great writer for emotions and conversations too 👏

and .. lmao on Nidhis 'live-in' bit... bet it was impulsive.. but i loved Ashus reply..😳

& the whole.. series of questions she had drawn up mentally.. jeez i do that all the time..🤣 thinking something historic is gonna happen n then ..its either... 'wuld u like to hv a pizza ? or pasta?' 🤔 dear silly me... m happy to meet silly nidhi 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
Do u like hip-hop?????????

it nearly even made me fall off my chair😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

how could that question change there lifes...man, ashu is really in funny mood today😛😉
😆😛

cared the poor soul...😆😆😆

and there she was thinking that he is going to propose her😕...but that will come soon i think😉 with the current rate of emotions he is showing...

Ashu really shows his believe on this relation and openness to accept it publicly today😛

the jokes they crack were so cute...hats off dear😆😆

waiting for Nidhi's reaction to ashu's question😛

luv ya
ana





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