^THE JADED PRINCE^-{MANEET FF} next thread pg 151 - Page 43

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Geet is not making matter worse by confessing she was dreaming abt something.. waiting to read Maan's reaction..
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i just hope that things will get better between maan and geet!
continue sooN!
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loved your ff
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Arre yaar itz too short..
Wel awesomee updatee..
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Awesome update dear loved it... comtinue soon..:)
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Superb...Aww man...wat condition both r stuck in😭😭😭U know wat...i was crying wen Geet was singing dat happy birthday😭😭😭...I cudnt relate 2 maan's pain...But I cud relate 2 Geet.as I am too a very next door girl like her...😭rhough i even felt bad for maan😭
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just went through this ff
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Hey yaar update d next part plz...I lovd ur FF👏👏👏😳
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PART 60



Its morning

Geet wakes him in her usual sweet manner

Maan wakes up in his sudden... lazing around one moment not wanting to wake up and wide awake the next manner

He opens his eyes and gets up

M-Good morning

G-Good morning [she smiles]

Keeps his tea morning tea on the side table

G-Quickly take a shower, you are late

Maan nods and goes and gets ready quickly

He comes back out, has his tea and settles down for breakfast which she had already served

He can see that she is back to normal and he is relaxed that he doesn't have to worry about her mood

G-Mujhe kuch puchna tha

M-What?

G-Nah...ghar aaoge tab puchungi

M- You should ask now...

He is curious now..

G-Na baba

Actually, now he wants to know...tilli laga di Geet ne...

M-What is it? Just say it. If you could have asked in the night then why bring it up now?

G-No baba...we'll talk in peace when you come back. You are late now

M-It's peaceful right now and I am not late

G-You are. We will talk later

Maan huffs and puffs internally in silence and gets ready to go

G-Bye bye [She waves with a smile]

M-Bye

He goes

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He comes around his usual time

She happily opens the door

G- I have a surprise for you [She declares with a huge ear to ear grin]

M-oh?

He comes in...he has surprise sorta too...he has a present for her actually...

He walks in and sits on the couch, puts his brief case on table and starts opening it

G-No no no...first you freshen up and relax

M- I will in a moment. Let me first take this out...

He takes out a paper bag...one of those branded ones with a glossy paper and logo and all and hands it to her

M-Belated happy birthday

G-What is it?

She asks with an amused yet surprised look

M-Your gift

He is total serious...having a fluttery anxious feeling inside his stomach...wondering if Geet would like it or not

G-ohhh Thanks

A sweetest smile comes over her face

She takes it out delicately and cautiously...unwraps it slowly

He bought her a diamond pendant and earring set

He picked it up personally...it's not a very big thing... but you can wear it on parties and get together...diamonds are not small enough that you can wear it all the time

She looks at it...nihaar rahi hai Geet

She is awestruck seeing it that she forgot to react

M-oh! and this too.

He hands her another bag ..a smaller one...in it there's a simple ring..

G-oh I...eh...

He never gave her a proper engagement ring...it's something she can wear everyday but I'ts very beautiful and suits her perfectly

She presses her lip between her teeth in admiration

G- It's...it's a

M--is it...ok?

G-It's...beautiful...so beautiful...I loved them...I..Maan

She is in loss of words to explain what she is feeling

She extends her left hand towards him

Maan takes her hand and presses it gently

M-Good then.

Geet gasps with surprise seeing his weird reaction

G-Nooo

M-No? The ring

She waves the ring in front of his face and hands it over to him

M-I thought you said you liked it?

He says taking the ring from her...not looking so cool

G-Yesss! I do!

Maan gives her a puzzled look

Her mouth is slightly open with a surprised frown that he is unable to understand what she is trying to say

G-Put it in my finger

PART 61



M-I thought you said you liked it?

He says taking the ring from her...not looking so cool

G-Yesss! I do!

Maan gives her a puzzled look

Her mouth is slightly open with a surprised frown that he is unable to understand what she is trying to say

G-Put it in my finger

Maan obediently puts it on her finger

She is looking at her finger as it was a dream come true...her eyes are filling up with emotions

M-ahem...look It's not a big deal, you don't have to pretend to like it if you really don't...we can get it changed... I just thought it would look good on you

G-I love ittt!!!!!! Its' so...i am sooo happy...so happy!

She has tears of happiness...she is almost crying silently, yet smiling

M-Then why are you close to crying?

G-I am not crying, I am happy! I am happy beyond words

M-There are tears in your eyes

G-These are tears of joy .Are you stupid?

She hits him playfully on arm

M-uff I don't understand you at times...

He says shaking his head in a sigh.

She smiles

G-These are girly things

M-yah yah...I'll go change

He goes and gets changed and freshens up

She is waiting for him

She shows him the pendant hanging from her hand as he comes

She turns back and pulls her hairs to a side

To Maan's surprise there is something on her nape

He moves closer and looks at what it is, brushing her hair aside properly to get a good look

She has a mischievous smile...she knows he saw

It's written in cursive italics...it's his first name- Maan...it's a tattoo

He lightly brushes his finger against it once... he can see what it is but still asks

M-What is this?

G-Surpriseee! Like it?

M-Is this permanent?

G-Answer my question. You like it?

M-Is this permanent?

He repeats

G-Why are you asking?

M-Is it?

G-Why ask?...Don't you like it?

M-Geet... answer me...

His voice is silky and low...brushing against her ears as his face is veryyy close

G-Don't you like it? I thought you will like

Maan sighs and rests his forehead on her neck

M- I don't get you at all sometimes. Why would you want to mutilate your body? or hurt yourself with needles if this is permanent? There is nothing special in my name, there is nothing special about me to have my name written like that

He says slowly...still resting his head like that

G-We are not discussing that. Just answer what I asked. Do you like it?

He straightens and takes a step back

M-It is done beautifully. The writing is very elegant

G-Yes or no?

Maan looks away

M-I don't like you being marked like slave...but I don't expect you to understand that feeling. So I won't say I don't like it

G-It's not about being a slave...I did it coz I felt like doing it. I know you don't like it, isn't it? You just tell me straight...it would be better

M-I never said I don't like it. If I would have had different type of life I would have liked it very much

G-What is the problem? Tell me

She asks in a caring manner

M-You...you wouldn't understand. You would argue in the end that you don't feel that way and you won't like the answer

G-At least tell me, promise I won't utter a word

Maan laughs miserably

M-Fine then...it never happened to me...I am grateful that it didn't...and if it did I probably would have gotten some surgery to get rid of it.

She looks at him questioningly

M-Having someone else's name or sign or any mark...on me...is not something I want...it makes me feel like an object...which can belong to someone...when I turned 21, I promised myself that I would never be in a situation like that again...and I haven't been. I am my own person and no one has a claim on me or mark of a claim on me...my... mistresses often wanted me to get their names or something ... tattooed... they even did temporary ones for their whims...but I...I am still grateful that some older kid brat never took a knife to me...I pissed them off often enough...they could have done it to mark me their submissive...but I got lucky and never had that done..I...it's a small thing now...you probably didn't think that way when you did it...

She looks down

M-But that thing symbolizes total lack of control over my life to me...and I can't do that... maybe you did it to say that you trust me and that you would follow me... so I can't say that I hate it...it would be wrong to say it and if I hadn't lived the life I had.. I would have liked it

Maan keeps looking away from her

G-Can I say something?

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