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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved Smart Mayank sharma the most...
And vikram..what a scoundrel...he killed his father...
btw loved his dialogues like a wicked criminal.
well written...!


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Posted: 14 years ago
that was very good suspense
i was thinking that mihir was the culprit
but here vikram was there boss...
and i loved that atlast you gave chance benji to show his intelligence...


amazing...

Edited by shafyyy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very interesting and Fab updates.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow csi team is gr8
loved benjis one liner scooby doobie dekhte hai ...
superb plot
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww so beautiful n interesting update
loved it
at last culprits pakre gye
yayyy
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 14 years ago

finalyy culprits are arrested but wht will happen to thm any y? they did it nicely and i think they should rewarded fo rthis but y sumtng fishy i feel? 😕

anyways so story is being so close to the end 😔 but y... will u pls start the CSI 3 Kaisa idea hai ... 😉 😊

loved it yar...
Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Api aur kitna wait karna parega????
Update it na!!!!!
kitne din ho gaye...
kya yeh iski last update hogi???????? :(
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Posted: 14 years ago
yup yeah is ki last update hogi..
will update 2morow..
helmit nhi mil raha hai ..mil jay tu i will updates
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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter: 16( last chapter) :

Mayank: …lets go to bureau now we have to face the most….let me do wht I want to

Nupur: what do u mean

MayanK: I am ur boss ..lets go

Nupur: mayank we r a team….

Mayank: and I am team leader…why ru making an issue out of it…I just ask u to let me handle it

Nupur: I know ur kind of handless…

….

COM: wht the hell it is, I never though u guys are gonna do it, u all know wht u have to face

Nupur: sir it is our work, aur hum ny galat kiya kya

Com: mein janat hoon nupur tum logo ny galta nhi kiya per mjhy tu bata tay kam se kam

Mayank: would u have supported us or have taken permission from ministry

Com: u four have acted to stubborn…ministry is hell angry, initially they have no choice else to send them to jail, but my GOD ur lifes can be in danger…

Samrat: common sir woh tu wasy bhi hain, kam se kam humain pata tu hain hum ny thik kiya

COM: han hero bany k buhat shok hai tum sab…now let me handle it, tum log jao, but ur not allowed to leave the city, till the case is send to court and process, get ur lawyers too, and be 200 time more careful ..sigh…goo…

Benji: common boos hum nay itna bara kam kiya aur apny shabash hi nhi di..he fake pouted

Com: he smile..tum charo …uff….I am proud of yet I donot want this team to break or I loss u guys…

Was absolutely intelligent and great work, even working on this case I never came near this kind of result….gr8 work guys..n I hope ur work is regard….bus mjhy fikar hai tum logo gi aur kuch nhi…

Nupur: don't worry sir hum thik rahy gay

Com: Take care

Mayank: sir I have to talk to u….

Saying so he stayed back and all three left

Benji: yeah akaely mein promotion mangy ga..pata raha hoon

Samrat: benji tu bhi na…aray bhabi kya hua…

Nupur: kuch aur abhi garbar hai…yeah kuch aur soch raha hai

Samrat: matlab

Nupur: I don't know but I think there is something….wasy benjii…tu ny tu kamal kiya

Benji: pls mention it mein itni kamal kerta hoon k mjhy yaad nhi rehty..so pls clarify

Nupur: bhabi ki ghar layna

Smarat smile abit,

Benji: hay hay..in ko dkeho Sharma rehy hain..

Nupur: mr Samrat…ap jay aur us se baat kerain…warna ..

Samrat: nupur..per..

Benji: dekh yaar humain nhi pata k tum dono k problem kya hai…but tu baat nhi keray tu kam kasay bany ga…yeah tu dekh ab she needs u the most…

Samrat: I know but

Nupur: ghar rekh apny but ko aur ja..abhi k abhi…warna mein sab bol do gi us ko

Samrat: wht do u mean kya bool do gi

Nupur: koi solid kahin bano gi …tu bhi soch mein par jay ga k kiya….

Chal ghar chal

Benji: aur mayank

Nupur: us ny kaha hai he will join…she said mimicking his authorizing voice

….

Gunjan was still there at mayank's house, n was sitting on bed, with her head resting at the head rest...a knock on the door made her open her eyes…

Come in

Samrat sneak in with a faint smile..and came and sat beside her..

Samrat: ur okay na..

Gunjan: she chukled sarcastically …I don't know actually wht an okay life is, bhai, bhai doing all this, I just cant believe it..whn benji came to take me with him in such a suspious way for a second I doubted him to, but not bhai…n when he told me all..how got bhai do this and wht for , just for a mere position…ahh…

With high hesitant and with fear that she might not like it, he slowly placed his hand on her….

She holded it tightly and start weeping, to wch he move forward and encircle his arms around her, and took her into his embrace, and she went in his arms willingly…

Hugging him tight she sobbed for sometime…whn she heard

Samrat: I am sorry gunjan….

Gunjan: pls Samrat…

Samrat: pls let me say…aj ny bolo tu nhi bol sako ga…I am sorry for letting u go away from my life, I am so sorry for not understanding u more over myself, my feelings for u, I have always yet I was so stupid, I was just scared tht how I am gonna face u after all, I I donot want to see hatred in ur eyes, I always loved u gunjan, always did, can I have u back in my life, he broke away a bit too have glimpse of her, and cuped her face…

She broke in to tears more…and clutch him tightly more, he got his answer and brought her close to him more…

………

Mayank: kya baat hai mrs Sharma ap yaha asay kyun ghari hain,..chalo maa bhi agai hain neechy sab wait ker rahy hain…he said hugging her from back kissing her shoulder softly

She turned, and hugged him

Nupur: mayank wht happened

Mayank: we solve the case and cause for a celebration, and my wife ..he pulled her close..is in mood of a different kind of celebration…

Nupur: mayank I am not in mood of any mazak of urs…pata nhi mjhy kuch garbar lag rahi hai

Mayank: yaar dekho..ek hath se bhi tum pati ko marti hoo, woh bhi injured pati ko….

Nupur: mera pati aj kal mjhy se baatein chopany laga hai…

Mayank: he borke apart, common nupur , tum khud batao agar bata day ta tu kya hota…

Nupur: kuch nhi but mein abhi ki baat ker rahi hoon

Mayank: dekho…he cuped his face, abhi kuch nhi horaha hai…I have talked to com sir, he said abhi foron tu kuch nhi hoga, baki jo kuch hoga he will to handle it…tu hopefully buhat bara kuch nhi hoga…n wht are u fearing of….

Nupur: nthing but…u wont hide

Mayank: uff typically biwi lag rahi hoo ACP nupur bhushan Sharma….nhi chopaoo ga bus…don't worry…

Saying this he sealed his promise with a kiss..

Mayank: neechay samrat aur gujan??

Nupur: sab set hai,…chalo mein ny tu abhi tak sami ko tease bhi nhi kiya

Mayank: choro na ..snuggling close to her…abhi hum celebrate kertay hain….he kissed her neck deeply

Nupur: mayankk…chalo na..maa se milna hai..

Mayank: sigh..bechara pati..acha chalo…ana tu tum ko yahin hain….

Nupur: sigh yeahi tu problem hai…she said encircling her arms around his neck..

The both chukled…

…….

Reaching down they all join on table

SA: mayank teray pair per kiya hua

Nupur: wah wah beta k pair dekh gaya mera hath nhi dekh

Benji: aur mera gaal..socho maa mera kiya hoga …kaun se larki milay gi mjhy

Samrat: yaar khuda k liyan is ki shadi k kuch kero warna hum sab pagal hojay gay

SA: han tu kerao na….yeah…she pointed to gunjan

Mayank was about to say sumthing bt nupur stoped him , saying let Samrat tell maa,

Benji: pata nhi maa kaun hai Samrat kaun hai

Nupur: suppressed her smile seeing Samrat in a condition of what to say or not to say….

Gunjan: anty mein gunjan hoon…

Benji: gunjan kaun..he said taping his fingers on table…

All thre of them looked at both of them keenly..in pls define manner,

Samrat: benji tu zayada nhi bool raha hai

Nupur: aur tu buhat kam nhi bool raha

Samrat: maa gunjan hai yeah…tumhari dosri bahu….

OHOOO

They all screamed

SA: aray wah bhi…yeah tu kamal hogaya….

Having there dinner with smiles and laughter the celebrated ther togetherness and there success too…

…………….

It has been a month of the case, things for not so progressive, the case was still in court and was been stretched like a daily soap… it was evening, nupur was doing sumthing in kitchen whn heard the door bell..

Reaching there she received a letter from government on name of mayank…sumthing struck her…but she didn't open it and let the letter to him in study

Nupur: mayank yeah kiya hai

Mayank: love letter meri ex girlfriend k mjhy kiya paat lao do….tu dekho

Nupur: lo

He opened it and a faint smile appear on his face, he knew it will happen and so it has happen

Nupur: kya hua…he griped her hand

Mayank: sigh jo hona tha…tumhara promotion…. he said with a grin

Nupur" KYA..realy sach bolo mayank….

Mayank; he pulled her close …bulky sach, ab se ap head of Mumbai CSI hongi…

Nupur: REALYY…OMG>…her huge grin disappear in min….ek min..per woh tu tum ho

Mayank: tha…

Nupur: mayank kya hau hai…she snatch the letter from his hand …

He smile and start caressing her cheek with his hand..

Mayank: it okay nupur…

Nupur: it isn't mayank…yeah…tumhain pata tha…mjhy ko promotion nhi chaiy…

Mayank: aray baba its okay…common be practical nupur…koi tu reaction ana tha

It was transfer order of Mayank to Delhi branch, for with a compensation of non transferable position till a year…

So Mayank has to shift Delhi for atleast one year..

When on the day of case solving mayank went to meat COM sir he put this option infront of him, as he was the team leader so its better that all four of them are punished only he is. Com sir find it a grt way as with it thy will be out of scene .

Few days back com sir told that they have selected Nupur for transfers to wch he requested to make it him, and com sir agreed and use his contact and manipulated it saying he was the head, and making him away from family is the biggest suffering one can give to him….mayank asked not to let anyone know the details as nupur will be hell hungry when came to know that it was his idea…

Nupur: mein..tum..mayank mjhy nhi rehna….hum COM sir se baat kertay hain

Mayank: kuch nhi hosakta tum janti hoon yeah baat…

Nupur: kuch kasy nhi hosakt ..we will do sumthing, warna mein resgin ker rahi hoon mjhy nhi rehna asay , mein bhi transfer ker alo…

The only thing he can do clam her nerves to make her loss her sense, sofly taking her in kiss, he got the passion and fear multiplying in return

Broking aprt she hugged him tight

Mayank: nupur pls behave like an ACP not a wife…

sHe move a bit away and glared at him

Nupur: tumahin koi fark hi nhi parata hai na…

Mayank: tumhain asa lagta hai…

Nupur: mayankkk. wincingly

Mayank: he moved her strands of hair back from her forehead….nupur yeah zarori tha, agar mera nhi hota tu kuch bara kertay yeah loog, islayn is problem ko asay handle kerna zaroori hai..tumhain delhi nhi bhaj sakta yaha Samrat aur benji hai mjhy sukoon rahy ga….

Nupur: aur tum waha akely for atleast a year

Mayank: tu mein kaunsa Kashmir ja rahoo hoon Delhi hi tu hai, jab dil chay ga ajao ga

Nupur: u know thy will make u so much involved in work that u wont have time..they will make sure

Mayank: tu tum ajana…socho nupur her month tumhain honeymoon per jany ko milay ga…he pecked her sofly

Nupur: this so cheating ….sahi kam ki bhi saza milti hai….

Mayank: pls jani don't make it difficult for me plss…

Nupur: I don't want to mayank…I donot want u to leave alone again

Mayank: u wont n ur aren't,,,, chalo ap achi biwi ki tarha meri transfer ki packing mein help kero

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It was night before mayank was leaving for delhi, and he cant help but to snuggle in her more n more..

Nupur: and u listen

Mayank: hmm,…ahh he so hate his wife whn she diverted him whn he is loving her, why she always have her discussion session like this…nupurr…

Nupur: kya hai

Mayank: tum hamesha mera moment kyun break kerti hoon…

Nupur: she smile and n blushed abit…kyun tum is waqt baat buhat aram se sonaty hoon

Mayank: kay hai jaldi bolo…n don't disturb me than…

Nupur: tum ny agar waha per raat din kam kiya na tu

Mayank: tu aur kiya kero ga….he pulled her more close and kissed her….tum tu hon nhi waha…he said diping his head in her neck

Nupur: mayankk..pls suno na….u need to take care of urself …galt baat hai yeah….

Mayank: he moved a bit away to take alook at her….he smile…wifey why ur so worried

Nupur: cause u don't take care of urself…she pouted…

N he chukled

Mayank: acha baba…I will take care of myself, nhi rekh paya tu ek tu larki ko rekho lo ga sab mil k mera gayal rekhy gai .kasa

Nupur: qatal nhi kerdo gi mein tumhian…beta yaad rekho delhi mein meray poray office k sary bandy janty hain….ek min k gabar day ga…koi garbar kero tu tum

Mayank: acha aur yaha tu meray bando ko bhi apan kiya hau hai…cheating hai yeah…

Nupur: she smiled and slightly ruffled his hair..i will miss u..

The smile was reflected on his face to, and he leaned down to answer it by his way, kissing her passionately he move down to leave trail of kiss on her neck, moving upto kiss her ear and whispering I love u….let him self n her feel there closeness once again, to seal theses moment in his heart, to give him strength to live away from him

THE END….

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Okay with this I close I CSI SEASON 2…phew never I though I will be writing a sequel, seems so not me yet I did..thnku so much for loving this season also…I hope u all have enjoyed this season too

The ending I know u must be all angry on me, yet it has to happen whn ur dealing with a political case, sumthing has to occur, so I need to give a practical ending to it…I hope u all understand this…

Thnku all for all the nomination for this and previous season…

Waiting for ur comment….pls do wanna know how u felt abt the plot this time

Lov ya

Fiza….

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago

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