FF 'Meri zindagi maan' thrd 2 pt 39 pg 37

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: maanhar
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="2">Feeling really bad for Geet and too scared after seeing the precap...</font>

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: jyothikrish
wow... awesome update...
maan ne nt ko slap kiya... yayyy...
poor geet... hope she is safe...
god nothing should happen to geet...
atlast they came to know that arjun is their bhai...
continue soon plz...
waiting.,
thanks 4 the pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: dona86
loved d update
hope geet is fine

continue soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

awsome

waiting for next...

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kalpna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

oh i just love this story

and i m one of a silent reader

but this story oh i just loved it

and plz update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

pls update soon
hope geet is fine pls

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sehrish79

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Part 36:-

Arjun was shocked what just he had said...A:" maan..tu..geet se.."
Maan looked down and said
Mk:" haa arjun..mujhe nahi pata tha ke geet Teri behn hai...lekin yeh bhi sach hai ke mein geet se apni zindagi se bhi zada pyaar karta hoo...woh meri zindagi hai arjun"
Arjun was very happy..he didn't expect this..but he is happy for his friend and sister...sister that thing came in his mind and tears welled up in his eyes..
A:" geet..meri geet ko kya huwa hai..woh theek hai na..rajji usse kya huwa hai"
Rajji was already crying...maan who wanted to tell him everything had also tears in his eyes..he was not getting courage to tell him...dev looked at naintara..who was crying and feeling ashamed on what she did with poor girl..
Maan start walking and sit on bench...tears were rolling down from his eyes..
Arjun was still asking for his sister and tell him everything what she saw when she went home..geet was lying in pool of blood with bruises all over her arms foots neck and face..tears start rolling down from arjun's eyes.. She also tell him about that person who did this with his sister..arjun looked at naintara angirly...
A:" agar meri behn ko kuch ho Gaya tau mein tumhara woh haal Karunga jo tum sock bhi Nahin sakti.." he said angirly... He noticed maan was not there..he left from there in search of maan..just then he saw he was sitting on bench and crying hiding his face in his hands...
Maan felt a hand on his shoulder and saw arjun was standing there with tears in his eyes..
Mk:" I am sorry arjun...I am sorry meri wajah se aaj meri hi geet is haal mein hai"
Arjun take seat beside him and said
A:" Nahin maan Teri koi galti Nahin hai...Teri wajah se kuch bhi Nahin huwa hai...meri behn Aur Teri geet ko kuch Nahin hoga..kuch Nahin hoga"
Maan looked at him and arjun hugged him tightly...
A:" chal chalte hai..sab tera intezar kar rahe honge"
Maan nodded and both left from there..
They were waiting outside the OT..just then doctor came and said
Mk:" doctor meri geet..woh..woh theek haina..boliye doctor meri geet theek hai na"
D:" no mr khuraana"
Everyone was like someone snatched their breath from their throat
Mk:" kya bakwass kar rahe hai aap" he said angirly..arjun looked at him
D:" mr khuraana please hum apni taraf se puri koshish kar rahe hai..lekin unka blood Buhat zada waste ho chuka hai..hum medcine se bhi koshish kar rahe hai lekin woh medicine ka koi response hi nahin de rahi hai..aur isse baat ka mujhe zada dar bhi hai..unki halat Buhat zada critical ho chuki hai...uske Alawa bhi unke arm neck Aur foot par bhi Buhat zada chotein aayi hai..please mr khuraana Aab wait kijiye Aur upar wale se dua kijiye..hum apni koshshish karte rahenge...lekin ek baat final hai..agar unko agle do ghanto tak hosh naa aya tau kuch bhi ho sakta hai" he said with worried
Maan was standing there like a statue.everyone were crying..especially naintara who was feeling ashamed..she was feeling scared not because maan said he will sent her to jail just because what if something happens to geet
She runs from there and saw little mandir..she covered her head with her saree pallu...and start praying for her..
Na:" meri galti ki saza aap..aap us masoom ko mat di jiye..pese Aur maan veerji ko paane ki hawas mein meine ek masoom ko maut ke moo mein dakhel diya..saza ki haqdar sirf mein hoo..mujhe saza dijiye usse nahin..meine aaj tak aapse kuch Nahin maanga..aaj zindagi mein pehli Baar aap se kuch mang rahi hoo..maan veerji ki geet ki zindagi lauta dijiye..usko bacha lijiye..warna ek Baar phir maan veerji apni zindagi ke kaale andhere mein gum ho jayenge...humari geet ko bacha lijiye..humari geet ko bacha lijiye" she fell on her knees while crying...
Rajji Dev and dadima were shocked at listening her..they were not believing what just they had listened..they looked at each other..
Maan went inside the OT..and saw his jaan his mishty lying on bed like lifeless body...he went near her and very slowly touched her hand just like he is touching some Rose petal..
Mk:" mishty.." he whispers near her ear..tears were rolling down and landed on her cheeks
Mk:" Dekho mishty tumhara maan aaya hai..tum mujhse naraz ho kya...
Aacha agar tumhe mujhe dantna hai tau danto..Jo Karna hai karo..lekin apne maan ko itni Bari saaza mat doo ke woh usse bardasht bhi naa kar paaye...ankhe kholo geet..please ankhe kholo..tumhe kuch nahin ho sakta..ankhe kholo geet" he was kissing her madly all over her face while crying
Maan shook her and start shouting
Mk:" get up geet..utho geet utho..tum mujhe chor nahin jaa sakti..apne maan ko akele tarapne keliye chor kar nahin jaa sakti geet...utho tumhe uthna hi Hoga"
Arjun rajji dev dadima and naintara were looking at them with tears..they were praying in heart
Mk:" utho geet..utho..." maan was feeling angry he was losing his all senses...
Maan left her there angirly and start shouting
Mk:" theek hai geet..tum bhi mere saath wahi Karna chahti ho Jo sameera ne kiya...tum bhi mujhe chor ke chali jaana chahti hoo...jis tarah sab chale gaye...Kyun geet Kyun mere saath aesa kar rahi hoo..yeh jaante hue bhi ke mein tumhare bina nahin jee sakta tum mujhe chor kar chali jaana chahti hoo...sab ne mere saath aesa hi kiya aur aab tum bhi geet...nahin tum aesa nahin ja sakti geet..tumhe uthna Hoga utho geet" he start shaking her again and again...everyone were looking at him with pain and tears
Arjun couldn't take anymore and left from there...dadima went near maan
Da:" maan beta sambhaliye apne aapko"
Maan looked at dadima and said
Mk:" dekhiye na dadima geet meri baat hi nahin sun rahi hai..usse kahiye na ke woh ankhe khole"
Da:" beta geet bilkul theek ho jaiye gi"
Dadima start dragging him outside..but maan was leaving her hand..
Da:" beta chaliye"
Maan was about to leave when he felt someone caught his hand...he turned his face and was shocked to see..geet was holding his hand with her eyes fully open...everyone looked at her with tears of happiness..maan whose happiness were no bound said
Mk:" geet"
Geet smiles with tears...
Maan smiled with tears and hugged her very tightly and start kissing her all over her face...rajji smiles happily she went outside and saw Arjun who was crying she called him happily
R:" Arjun veerji"
Arjun looked at her thought what happen
A:" Kyun huwa rajji"
Rajji smiled and hugged him
A:" veerji geet didi ko hosh aa Gaya hai"
Arjun looked at her surprised
A:" kyaa"
R:" haa veerji didi ko hosh aagaya hai..maan bhai ka pyaar unhe wapis le aaya"
Arjun smiles and hugged rajji..both went inside..and saw them hugging each other tightly
Mk:" geet mujhe pata tha ke tum zaroor utho ge..tumhe kuch nahin Hoga...kuch nahin" he said while smiling and crying
Geet smiled at hugged him more tightly...everyone were looking at them with love in their eyes...naintara was happy..she can't forgive for what she did to geet..she can never be able to forgive herself.. She left from there crying..dev looked at her but ignored her
Mk:" I love you geet..I love you soo much" he kissed her forehead
G:" I love you too maan...I love you too"
Both hugged each other tightly
Arjun came towards them
A:" Geet princess"
They broke and geet start looking here and there
G:" Arjun veerji" she said happily
Arjun smiles at his little princess and hugged her..
A:" princess..tune hum sab ko kitna Dara diya tha...tu theek hai na aab"
G:" haa veerji mein theek hoo...aap sab logo ke hote hue mujhe kese kuch ho sakta hai"
A:" humare hote huwe ya phir maan ke hote huwe" he asked naughtily and everyone laughs while geet blushed
Rajji came and hugged geet tightly
R:" didi aap theek ho na"
G:" haa rajji mein theek hoo" she said with smile..dadima came and kissed her on forehead
Da:" beta..aap Aram kijiye..zada baat mat kariye" she said while caressing her face..geet smiles and arjun said
A:" mein doctor ko bulata hoo"
He left from there to meet doctor..he came back with doctor
Doctor checked her and said happily
D:" she is fine now but we have to keep her here for few days"
A:" ok doctor"
Doctor left from there..
Da:" beta aap Aram kijiye aab"
Arjun rajji dadima and dev left from there...only maan was there with her..he caresses her face with his hand..geet smiles and both hugged each other tightly once again..

Precap:- G:" naintara ko Maaf kar dijiye maan"

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Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 14 years ago

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