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Badra

@SublimeSanaya

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#501

wow .. i just logged in and thanx for updating .. u made my day ...

it was mind blowing ...

the way u began it with a dream was superb and then arnav dragging kushi towards her tht was so sweet ...

the way u shifted from the present to past to the present was magnificent ...

the way u have showed wht love truly is .. fabulous .. the connection of the heart .. the fact tht the heart remembers is wht matters at the end .. the everlasting love tht u displayed in this part .. i am so taken by it .. i am feeling light headed at the moment ...

i think tht is enough for now na ... i am speechless and still trying to embrace the feelings again ..

update soon ...

see u around babes .. btw sorry for being a bit late to read .. was stuck with the research and also preoccupied as my cousins were over here yesterday ...

- - badra

Edited by 143badra - 14 years ago

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like_ipk

@like_ipk

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#502

Thanks for the PM lyraa. It is beautifully written.

I loved the ending - ' its the heart that remembers'. Also how khushi feels secure only with Arnav n how gentle he is with her.

Looking fwd to your next update. :-)

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starzyasha

@starzyasha

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#503

loved it!!!amazing update :) thankx 4 d pm :)
👏

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meluhan

@meluhan

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#504

You are a natural Lyraa, i have no words to express your writing, so let me just do this 👏

I am so in love with this Arnav, he is so caring and understanding. He knows his worst fears might come true when Khushi recollects her past, but is still trying to get her back to normal.

I so agree when you say "The Heart Remembers" and it remembers forever as we see in Khushi and Arnav's case.

I wonder who the other person is who helped Shyam in kidnapping Khushi.

I love to read and you make it so much more interesting and I am sad when i come to the end of the update coz i have to wait for a few days for your next update. But then again i am happy coz i know your next update will better the rest.

Thanks for the PM and pls continue to PM me.

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Wah_taj

@Wah_taj

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#505

👏 aww..sucha fab update!!

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#506

Super duper like it 😃 Loved this part. How Khusi voiced about their relationship and agreed what Arnav said coz her hear knew it 's right. Hope Arnav found who helped Shyam with all this ... It pained to see both and the complete family are suffering like this..
The end was perfect and like everybody i couldn't help but loved the line 😳

"Somewhere, Arnav realized, thinking of Khusi, that her lost memories didn't matter.
All she had to do was look into his eyes and read his heart."

Continue soon

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#507

oh wow...very nice update...loved it. especially how khushi hugged arnav and the flashback...

thanks for the pm..:)

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mjsheen43

@mjsheen43

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#508

Such Beautifull story... a refreshment from revenge stories.. i love your other work also... this is very very very passionate hmmm no its wrong word its very very simple word Caring story.