OS:Iss Blanket-Romance Ko Kya Naam Doon?Pt2-Pg.6

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Part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2659750/os-iss-blanket-romance-ko-kya-naam-doon-pt2-pg-6�

My first attempt at writing an OS, so please bear with me in my horrible creative writing skills' It starts right after the end of today's episode :) Another thing' my Hindi is absolutely horrendous because honestly, I can't speak or write hindi at all :)

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Khushi reluctantly slid under the blankets of her bed, her heart racing at the sheer thought of Arnav being less than an arm's length from her. Meanwhile Arnav, already warm under the covers, began to feel a rising source of heat as Khushi's close proximity wrecked havoc to his senses. He felt his heart race as simply her presence was enough bring out the tamed emotions of passion in him. Buaji was perplexed at Khushi's uncomfortable position on the bed as she distanced herself from "Payal" and eyed across the bed in a peculiar manner.

"Aare Sanka Devi! Have you seen Payal's Ghost or something?? Why are you acting so scared of her?? Chalo, apni jiji ke kareeb jao.. Aur jab tak tum log soo nahi jaate hum yahan se nahi hilenge Nandekishor!" Buaji insisted as she grabbed the nearest chair and pulled it to Khushi's side of the bed.

"Lekin Buaji'. Hum kaise!" yelped Khushi as she felt a sharp, angry pinch penetrate her side and knew Arnav was fuming inside the peach-colored blanket.

"Hai re Nandekishowor hume phele hi pata honi chaiyye thi'Tohri sanak toh din bhar chalta reihta hai!" said Buaji as she lightly hit her head, "Chal, hum aaj tujhe aur Payaliya ko loori sunna teh hai jaise bachpaan main karte teh!" exclaimed Buaji as both Arnav and Khushi silently sighed their respective "What the's" and "Devi Maayian's" and prepared themselves for further tensions. Arnav knew that Khushi was going to be the death of BOTH of them today and this was simply the beginning.

Buaji started slowly, singing some faint tune about Nandekishwor, lightly tapping Khushi's head once in a while. However, as she delved deeper into the tune, she forgot the presence of both Arnav (ahem "Payal") and Khushi and had this strange urge to go to the Puja room and continue her "loori". Besides, she was feeling sleepy as well and thus headed for the door. She left them to be, closing the door on her way out.

Meanwhile, Khushi, not having been able to sleep since last night with the fear of meeting Arnav at midnight had fast fallen asleep and was murmuring some nonsense about her laad governer. Arnav however, took in a sigh of relief as he removed the blanket that had caused him to sweat excessively with the combined heat of it and Khushi's presence.

"Khushi Kumari Gupt'" he began with a stern voice only to notice that she was in deep slumber. The anger in his eyes suddenly melted at the sight of this beautiful innocence that was overflowing his heart with new-filled wonder and awe. Under the faint lamp light, he noted a strand of hair that had struck across her face. Ever-so-slowly, he found his hands pulling that strand back behind her ears as he marveled at this beauty with a new-found twinkle in his eyes. His hands lingered on her face, caressing her soft skin. Khushi, still asleep and unaware that it was Arnav's touch, turned to face him. Arnav felt the light touch of her arm wrap around him in her sleep and found himself smirking at this girl's innocence.

"Laad Governer ki shakal nahi dekhni hume'Usse dekhar humko dhak dhak hoti hai'Hume poori sal acidity ki bimaar nahi chaayiye' Nahi dekhni humeee.. Iss se accha yeh hai ki hum Nanheji ke'." murmured Khushi which caused Arnav to snap out of his trance and process what she was truly saying. He was angered by this (of course, he didn't understand this dhak dhak thing she was talking about) and so he jerked away her hand resting at his chest which caused Khushi to suddenly awaken and realize she was inches away from him.

"Aare'" she said, scared for his reaction "humhe pata nahi chala ki kab aak (eyes?) lag gayi" she said hesitantly.

Arnav, still angry at what she had just said, replied "Tumhe kabhi bhi kuch pata nahi chalta Ms. Khushi Kumari Gupta.. Haar waaqt bakwas nikalta hai tumhare mooh se' Neend main bhi tumhari bakwas khatam nahi hoti na!?"

"Lekin' Humne aaisa kya'" Khushi began only to be interrupted by Arnav's harsh words, "Shhh! Just Shut Up! Mujhe tumhari aur bawaks sunne ki aur mera naya saal barbat karne ki bikul maan nahi hai samjhi? Main aab ja raha hoon even if I get caught'" he said in stern voice. Just as he was about to head for door, the lights in the room began to flicker until suddenly, the power went out and complete darkness spread over the room. He continued for the door when he heard a faint sob in the background. It was Khushi, and suddenly the flashback of that night overcame his ego and he felt a tinge of guilt that guided him back to the bed as he felt around for her. His hands came across her shoulders and as he sat her upright against the bed.

"Ssshhh'.Khushi, please don't cry'I'm here don't worry' Khushi, I'm'" he hesitated for a second and then murmured "Sorry". Slowly, his fingers traced themselves to her hair as he lightly caressed it, trying to console her.

Khushi was sniffling and trying to hold back her fears now that Arnav was with her "Aapko abhi bhi yaad hai ki hume undheere se'?"

"Mujhe yaad nahi hoga toh aur kisso hoga Khushi?" Arnav replied.

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That's it for right now' I might write more to this depending on if I get a good response :) I'm sure you all must have been bored out of your minds reading this😆

Edited by -.-RajeevK-.- - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Plz Plz Plz update soon!
I loved ur OS so much dear! Keep up the good work 😃
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that was great!!! loved how u kept the dialogues true to their characters. plz do continue. =)
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That was adorable :) I loved it. Please please do continue ASAP!
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Lovely OS! really liked it 😊..Plzzz continue

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That was great.👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ I want to read more of this. Well done.
Please update soon. Thanks.😃
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it so sweet pls update it and pm me if u can.
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Damn! You have a tremendous power o'er language !!
Just lovely..it was so realistic and the ending was superb!!
Fantastic work, if possible drop me a pm when u update
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I DEMAND THAT YOU UPDATE SOON MISSY! and please PM me when you do! :D😳

I LOVE BLANKET ROMANCE... 😆
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That was awesome for a first try!! Seriously loved the first part!! Plz do continue!! Would love to read more from you!! Plz add me to your pm list!! PLZZ continue soon!!

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