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Posted: 14 years ago
NICE UPDATE...
THANK GOD SHE IS FINE...
WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART CONTINUE SOON

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Posted: 14 years ago
Api...
awesome update...
i loved it lodsss...
dekho toh apne kya kiya...
Nupur ki mom ko akhir goli laga hi diya...
bt m happy ke now she is ok...
i loved d hospital part a looottt...
d way MayUr consoled each other was utterly cute n emotional...
i loved dat...
Beautifully written as usual...
d story has now become full on suspence...
ap na thriller ki queen ban gayi ho...By God!!!
waiting for d next parts...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗

ps: Ap na aj kal bass mujhe rulane pe tuli huyi ho...kyun end kar rahi hoon isse...ek aur nayi case ke sath continue karo na plzzz...i loved it...plzzz end na karo...its so different n something i want to read ek toh ap mere "WWU" ko end kar rahe ho :'( upar se ab yeh bhi.. :'(
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

amazing update...

thank god.. nupur's mom sorry mayank's mom is safe
how fearless is this Man mihir...
i just hope ki koi aur bada.. danger na.. aaye
i just hope gunjan's life to be safe...
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Posted: 14 years ago
nic update...
thank god nupur's mom is f9..
n mayank is more than a son to her..
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 14 years ago
pls send me pm when ever u update send me frnd req also
" HAPPY NEW YEAR 2012 " 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fiza di...I am a bit confused but I think my confusions will be
cleared in further updates...
about that update..It is nice and interesting...but how come Mayank
did'nt knew about Nupur being attacked in delhi🤔

Mayur and shilpa scene was touchy and story is going to be interesting..
cont soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update and thank god shilpa maa is fine but feeling bad for samart past
lets see what happen
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Posted: 14 years ago
Edited my comment on pg.40...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

@ruchi…if u remember season ! Nupur was in delhi before they meet, so he didn't notice it…plus there is something that only he knew no one else do…THT MADE HIM LOOKT TOWARDS HER…pardon errors

Benji: tum log chalo…im joining u in 2mins..

Mayank: why….

Benji: plss…..

Nupur: ok….

Samrat: acha tu briefing tu sun lay ….

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Mayank:

Oki this is the area where we have done surveillance. The area behind the hilli side. The circle area in blue we have done surveillance before to. The red mark house in blue are was the only in wch we found sumthing. But the spot tht now has been pointed out in GPRS is the red house away from the coloney, is our target.

The problem is tht we need to cover it from all side, but the back side is hilly tu be carefull, its very rough area. Plus vikram sirf humain milna chaiya.

Nupur: we donot have sun with us, so we need to have keen eye, very keen eye. This is final and last chance,. We will be attack with load of arms, and we need to be very carefull ok.

SamraT: oki

Mayank: so evry thng clear, any questions..

Ok ..thn best of luck…check ur GPRS devices, voice n evrythng…we cant give chances..yeah buhat bara risk hai..ok…carefully very careful. Ek galti aur hum sab will be jobless….no we will be dead…

Nupur: lets go..

Mayank: ACP bhushan…

Nupur: yes..

She remind back and Samrat and benji went away whn sami was still trying to contact gunjan n he wasn't able to reach her…

Samrat: dam it…

Benji kiya hua…

Samrat: gunjan se contact nhi horaha hai

Benji: do u trust me..

Samrat: kiya…..

Benji: do u trust me….

Samrat: yeah is waqt kis kisam k sawal hai…paal hai kiya

Benji: tu bus chill ker….get ready for lifetime raid….

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Nupur: ok..i know mayank…dnt worry I'll handle tht..aur mjhy pata hai jis taraf yeah case ja rah hai kiya ho sakta hai

Mayank: hmm…

Nupur: chalein…

He forward his hand n nupur looked at him in surprise n hold his, he pulled her close slowly n cuped her face ….n caressed her cheek, while she placed her hand on his hand on her cheek…

Mayank: be careful….

Nupur: mayankkk…..she cuped his face n pulled him close, n kissed him…to which he response with same urgence..he knew he needs tht..

The sprang apart at the knock on door…

Samrat: evrythng ready come soon…

Mayank: ya….

Nupur: wht happen..

Mayank: nthing..tum chalo mein araha hoon…

Nupur: mayank….

Mayank: just be very carefull….

She shocked her head n went outside..

He knew he needs tht, neither he cant tell her what is going on in his mind, nor he can hold it. For the first time in his career he was scared..no im not just a little worried…..shrugging all that was cuming inside him..he went to change n get prepare for the final day ..making a call at hospital to chk also…..the day thy very well know is crucial and may result in a havoc of troubles….

………..

Reaching her cabin she found the fax that she demanded from police agency. Regarding the person in picture that recommended Mihr as chief security office. A huge grin appears on her face knowing they are hitting the bulls eye if just this mission is done perfectly…

…..

I know its very short updated..sorry for that can mange this much….will update soon hopefully…wht r ur guess who can be the kidnapper..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Happy NEW Year API...🤗
May ALLAH bless u...🤗

OMG!!!!
now d case has come to its most crucial point...
m really worried for my MayUr's safety...
awww...
MayUr part was really touchy...
plzzz sab thik rakhna...
kisi ko kuch na honey paye...
i loved dis part lodsss...
loved it to d core...
ab toh yeh bhi end ho jayega...sigh
will miss it lodsss
loved it lodsss
love u API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago

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