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booksfreak07

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: missingremix
Wat abeautifully written scene...it had such an ethereal feel 2 it..i cud imagine myself being there on terrace n witnessing d whole scene..quite nyt..beautiful sky wid stars shining bright n full moon..music being played n pehela nasha is one of my favorites too..manvi singing n dancing along wid it..n virat's joins her..man it was awesome..tranquil..peaceful..n in d quite nyt their feelings coming on surface..d atmosphere u managed 2 create was heavenly..d end of d song so real n funny vicco bajradanti..lol..n virat finally manages 2 win d challenge leaving manvi speechless...jst like u left me speechless (tho i blabbered so much..lol😆)..PERFECT it was!!
Hats off 2 u..u r a briilaint writer..thanx 4 d pm..do update soon, n pm me again ven u do😊

I'm soo glad you liked it, I was really worried that ppl will not be able to see it the way I did in my head.

And I love Pehla Nasha, have heard it about a million times since I started writing this part. 😃

And I did not want to put vicco ad in this, but the moment I tried to think of an ad this was the first one that popped into my head and then I couldnt think of any other ads and so decided to put in this one only!!

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Irum

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Thnx for the pm :) amazingly written cat wait for Ur next pm ,)

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meriyaar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

awww wow, that was really nice!

i could so imagine the whole terrace scene it was too good!

loved it, thank you :)

thanks for the pm too, can't wait for the next part.

xxx

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tina_1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

beautiful part..loved it sooo much

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Aisha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

I totally enjoyed reading this part! The way you've shown how Virat and Manvi's feelings are beginning to gradually change towards each other is great. The way Virat won the challenge - loved that part

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inlvwithehmmbh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

OMG manvi was speechless infront of virat!! thats like the first time!! hehe btw i loved the entire part it was awesome! i thought there would be a kiss after the song, he took the dupatta to win the challenge lol i thought it would get more.. haha okay i'm getting more behsharam everytime i read abt virman ... but i loved the way u ended their staring mode it was cutee the vicco ad was funny... hmm now we need another part soon :) thanks for the PM definitely looking forward to more!! thanks!!

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ashred12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

awesome is d word...loved it...thanx for d pm...

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rev4eva

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Thanks for the PM, really loved your update. Firstly from the phone call to the lovely terrace scene. The song was so perfect for the couple and I could literally imagine them singing and dancing for the song. Manvi speechless and Virat claiming her duppata as his victory was simply superb. The wait for the update was very fruitful 😊

Hope to read the nxt part