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Posted: 14 years ago
omg!!!!!!!!
sajan past revealed...
its painful
n di wat's this..
an attack on mayur house ..y???
hope nupur's mom will be f9..
wonderful update di
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh gosh ...
wht will happen now...
hope mayank mom would be fi9...
wht a relieve after getting to lnow thier past...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow- what a thrilling FF
it was full o suspense and mystery
and mayur- they r just awesome...
loved it so much
plz do cont. it and add me to ur pm list..

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Posted: 14 years ago
YOUR FF IS REALLY FULL OF SUSPENSE ...
READ WHOLE JUST NOW...FUL WITH SUSPENSE AND THRILLER SAME AS SEASON 1...
LOVING THE FRIENDLY ATMOSPHERE IN CSI...LEG PULLING OF EACH OTHER EACH TIME, AND BENJI,S FUNNY TALKS...
ITS THE PERFECT FRIENDS GROUP...
LOVING IT A LOT...
THANKS FOR THE PM AND CONTINUE SOON, BREAK THE SUSPENSE SOON...
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Posted: 14 years ago
plz update this FF
and do pm me
GOD bless
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thnku for linking this one too, those who wants to know, yes this ff wil be closed as soon as the case is solved, its no use stretching it…

Reaching near as he saw the man bring out the gun ….

He shouted

Maaynk: mom down…now

Nupur: maa..

Shot…

Nupur's mom fall on the floor n mayank shot the man in leg, grriping n placing his hand on back…he frozed his moment ..n rashed to her..

Nupur: maa….

Mayank: he came near, blood was cuming out of her body, …im taking mom to hospital..tum is ko bureo pocho…be carful..

Picking her up n place her carefully in car n rushed to hospital , mean while nupur carefully asked police to take him to bureau n strick surveillance around him, asking beji n Samrat to interrogate she rushed to hospital…

He was talking on phone and hanged it when she entered the hospital

Mayank was standing outside the OT with his one foot on wall, n head leaned back to wall with close eyes, his shirt was all in blood, n his expressions were not giving any help to nupur…

She went near him n he opened his eyes

Looking at him she was finding answer in his eyes..he pulled her near, n hugged her tight, to not only relax her but also to console himself…

Mayank: she is fine , she will be fine..shoulder se thora neecahy arm per lagi hai gooli, bullet nikal di hai, she will be shifted to room soon…he said all this caressing her hairs n rubbing her back….moving away …ur ok.

Nupur: han……

He hold her from shoulder n make her set on chair…..tightly side hugging her…n holding her other hand…

Mayank: she will be fine mom ko kuch nhi hoga, dekhna she will be fine…

She looked upto him n found he was saying all this n his eyes where on aimless spot…she squeezed his hand n he looked at her…

Nupur: un ko kuch nhi hoga relax…..

Doctor came out n assure them she is fine but too weak, he ask guard all around her room, n a nurse n a lady police to be inside her room..

Mayank: ma ko ek sec k lyan bhi nhi akela chorana hai…not for a moment, check evrythng thrice before let her go in, no doc other than theses two are allowed to check her got it…much kisi kism ki koi galti nhi chaiya….

NM: mayank…a weak voice broke his scolding session n he rush to her….

Mayank: ji ma..ap thik ho..bus htori weakness hai…

She smiled a bit

NM; im fine…buhat tang kertay ho na tum dono, miltay bhi nhi mjhy se ab dekha kasay bhag ker aay…..

Mayank: ma pls….ap thik hoo..aur hum apk pass hain hamesha bus kam hi asa hina kiya kero….he said all this n his hand was on her…

NM: she smile ..hm pata hai..nupur kaha..

Mayank: tum waha kyun hoo, ma bola rahin hain na

Nupur: kaha …meri kanoo ny tu mayank awaz suni thi..mjhy kis ny boloya..aur ba pa kyun bolo rahin hain mjhy …hai na ap k beta ap k pass….

Mayank: the bth laghed.. jealous….

Nupur: had hai ..meri tu koi value hi nhi hai…..

NM: acha dramy mat ker idhar aa….ab mjhy kitny din yaha asy rahna paray ga…..aur yeah sab kuan hai

Mayank: yeah ap ki security hai ap k sath rahy gi 24/7

NM: kiya ..kyun beta …kiya zaroorat hai..

Mayank: mein ny kah diya na bss…

Ring

Mayank: han Samrat kiya hua

Samrat: bureau ajao…dono quick….

Mayank: thik hai….maa hum bureau se atay hain…jaldi se…ap pareshan nhi hona …thik hai

NM: donot worry abt me, go ur work is important…

Nupur: mjhy bhi jana hai

Mayank: hmm…

Nupur: ok mom we see ya…she kissed her forehead n went out where press was wating for them

Report: ACP Sharma..ap k kiyal se kain loog hosaktay hain yeah,

Mayank: dekhain we donot know …pls leave the place..

Report: kiya yeah ap logo k liyan warning hai, ap ny terrorist k arms aur drugs pakri thi….si this is anykind of a thread

Nupur: in our jobs asa hota hai, we are risking evrythng nt only ourself but our love ones too…

Report: ACP Nupur, is se pehly delhi mein ap per bhi aatck ho chukka hai jis mein ap moot k moo se bahar aai thi..kiya yeah wohi loog hain

With this mayank look at her in surprise….

Nupur: dekhaon we donot know who its is , or wht…han but we know nthing can stop us….pls…

The rashed to car….

" Mumbai police, Drugs aur weapons business rukny mein na kaam aur ab jab special branch is doing this, tu the culprit are making them fearful by torching there families, today ACP nupur sharma's mother was shot in her house, inspite of all security…it's a matter of great thought as if families of ministers, police officials are not safe, so how cum citizen will be.."

At bureo:

Mayank: han Samrat

Benji: oh freak…itna khoon….anty kasai hian

Nupur: she is fine…

Samrat: yaha aao…is ny jis ka naam liya hai buhat bara masal hai

Mayank: kaun..

Samrat: he said he has been asked by Mihir….to go n kill her so tht u guys will be stoped at ur activity

Mayank: Mihir?

Nupur: the security agent of Vikram…..man this is hell..yaar yeah log itnay fearless hain

Benji: k buhat aram se is ny confess kiya infact woh hass raha tha

Mayank: ab we r going to raid tht area now, I want force ready now…benji get evry1 now….i want them here right now..he spashed his fist on table

Nupur: gunjan

Mayank: gunjan kiya..?

Nupur: Samrat kasay bhi ker k gunjan ko us k ghar se nikalo, she is our major support as an alibi…n she is danger..

Mayank: per kyun..

Nupur: mayank jo shakas defence minster k nhi hai, woh gunjan k hoga…

Benji: woh thik kah rahi hai…ek kam kertay hain, gunjan ko us k ghar se utha laytay hain…

Samrat: pagal maaat ban …I'll call her to leave home n cum to her frnds house waha se hum lay lay gay….

Mayank: no don't call her n tell all this…us ko poch kaha hai woh….aur arms se casually ja ker lay ker aa usko..they ur who ur ..

Samrat: what….he nodded in yes….oki…….he tried but she wasn't picking up phone..damit…

Nupur: donot worry we will handle it pehly vikram….

Benji: I WILL get the force ready ….

Mayank: get ready guys…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
edited.

very well written Fiza.

i soo loved it ... hats off to ur writing skill.

thank god nupur's mother is safe ... hospital scene was very nice ... mayur n shilpa scene was very touchy ...

loved it.

nupur got attacked in delhi n mayank dint knw that ... its really surprising ... wht was the matter???

hmmm ... now this story turned into interesting ... full of suspense ...

so that vikram is working for someone ... n that someone is behind dark ...

waiting for next update.

continue soon,

love ya ...



Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice updt fiza
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

thank god nupur mom is safe...nupur got attacked ad dehli and mayank didnt know... surprising...

this case is really full of suspense may be vikram is working for sum 1 else whom no one knows yet... 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow Fiza ji
beautiful update...
Weldone
very nice part
Do cont. it

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