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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

i m not leaving ur ff to read just love it plz pm me next time superb ff

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seabeauty

@seabeauty

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

Chapter 14

Somewhere outside DD, deep in a jungle:

Jeh was walking through the jungle thinking about what the life had given him and what he had done with it. He was thinking about his losses and gains. He had supported his Mom who had just used her children for getting back the revenge of her dead son Gurav. He had been a cause of his brother Neel's death. He had caused his sister to leave her own family and support their enemies just because she never got love and support from her family. They had always ignored her. They had treated her like a servant. Anyways, it was never late for learning from mistakes and trying not to repeat them. It won't be harmful repenting them.

Meanwhile, someone else was also present and thinking about what she had done. She had once loved him like anything. But now she had almost spoiled his life with her own hands. Even killed him just because he did not love her anymore. It was too good that Piya was there with him. How could she have been so stupid to trust Siddharth and her revengeful mind? She almost killed Piya too knowing it will kill himknowing deep that the girl was innocent. She had loved Abhay, taking him out of those dark nights. Gave him company and love which was much needed by him. Now she came to think of it, she decided to return and thank Piya, moreover ask for forgiveness once again.

Mount College:

All are sitting in cafeteria enjoying a free period. Kabir is not there. Piya was resting her head on Abhay's shoulder and he was caressing her hair absent minded all the time. They were all enjoying free time after the PanDa wedding. Kabir messages Piya: I need to talk to you in private for a few minutes. come as quick as you can.

Piya: excuse me guyz. Need to step out for a few moments.

(to Abhay): Don't panick and don't follow me. I will be back soon.

Abhay: Ok. kissing her forehead.

Piya spots Kabir in an empty class room. She goes and asks:

Piya: What's wrong Kabir?

Kabir: Nothing... Its just that... I mean... I.. I..

Piya: Yes??

Kabir: Wo actually Piya, bat ye hy ke... I love Misha...!!

Piya: laughing, right. kya joke hy ye. be serious and tell me?

Kabir: Its no joke. I really love her.

Pia: Oh... well what can I do??

Kabir: Help me in making her believe I am the best guy for her and she loves me too.

Pia: Yes sure and you are the only one whom I can trust regarding Misha.

Kabir: Thanx Piya. you are great. gives her a hug.

Precap: Jethli meeting in the DD Jungle and then...

PS: Guyz I want to finish it soon. After this I will write another FF. I have a great cpncept in my mind.

Anyways, enjoy and tell me how was it..

Edited by seabeauty - 13 years ago

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#213

amazing dr!!!!

jey n maithli thinking about dere wrong move!!!! cool at last dey thought something!!! i loved it!!!

kabeer loves misha cool yr!!!! dats wonderfool... kabeer misha go gr8!!!

waiting 2 see what pia will do 2 prove kabeer best 4 misha!!!

n met n jey will meat.. cool seems that something interesting will occur!!!

cont soon n thanks 4 d pm!!!!

Edited by Akshi0019 - 13 years ago

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Komal Koppikar

@sameerakoppikar

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Me too I am not gonna leave ur ff its awesome I loved it

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cuteteddy

@cuteteddy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#215

res plz update soon ...

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wow dear nice update 😳so jeh n metz here 😳 not bad i like it😳

so finally kabir told pia that he loves misha😳

hope misha usse zinda chhod de🤣

thanks for the pm n update soon😳

i will surely read ur new ff😃👍🏼

take care😳

Edited by cuteteddy - 13 years ago

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#216

coment updated on pg 30!!!!

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ChelseaForEver

@ChelseaForEver

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

nice yaar 😃

Edited by Pavi.Dravid119 - 13 years ago

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sohini

@sohiniluvsmusic

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#218

Awesome update dear i was just thinking bout ur ff nd nw i get the pm so both jay nd maithli are regreting for their mistakes gr8 want to see jaithli together nd will surely read ur new ff when u'll start it nd m definately nt leavng the forum thanks for the pm continue soon tk:-)

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#219

lovely update dear.!!!!

mishka story start now ...dats cool.

jehali meeting interesting . abhiya r cute .

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seabeauty

@seabeauty

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: sohiniluvsabhay
Awesome update dear i was just thinking bout ur ff nd nw i get the pm so both jay nd maithli are regreting for their mistakes gr8 want to see jaithli together nd will surely read ur new ff when u'll start it nd m definately nt leavng the forum thanks for the pm continue soon tk:-)

aww.. thanx so much 4 d encouragement.. :)

Jethli will be together in the end