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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SallyAmanda

Well...d poem was perfect!!! Thanks...I usually dont know how to write poems maybe because I was sooo happy that I got some ideas
I loved d part...
I wish pia s out of d pic soon...:)) don't worry - soon!

Loved it totally..BTW...y r u so happy????

Nd u didn't tel me anything abt my profile pic???? I did tell you your Avi is beautiful, I loved it!
Love

Nice question: Why am I so happy 😆😛
it is because my sister finally got her long waiting results - for going to Middle School now! And she passed with flying colours; her results are sooo good that I start to smile at the thought of it. Her Middle School is my school too!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Author's Note: 3 Dils updated!
Chapter #34
"Are you free tonight?"

"Yeah…why?"

"Well, can we go for dinner?"

"Well, I have to think"

"Why?"

"Because I am going with you"

"Shut up Bani, I am serious" Jai said. "Where are we going, I mean which place" Bani asked. "Kingston Palace" Jai replied proudly. "Already being there; four times with my ex" Bani said in a disgusted voice. "Ex? Did she say ex?" Jai thought surprised. "Okay, what about Royston Reeds, I heard it's new and it's from Germany" Jai said. "Hmmm, okay for Reeds, at what time?" Bani questioned. "Sharp seven, is it alright" Jai said. "Yup" Bani said approvingly. "Bani, who's your ex?" Bani stared lip-tightened at Jai. Her face went pale.

_

"Hey Lizzy, I am hungry" Spiky told Rano. "It's almost finished; just wait for some minutes" Rano said. The doorbell rang and Spiky went to open the door. "Hey Yash" Sahil said standing at the door. "Hey dude, come in". Rano froze at Sahil's voice. "Lizzy time to go home" Spiky called. Sahil entered and saw his wife in a black-above-knee skirt and red tank top. Rano chewed her lips while she saw Sahil checking her out. "She looks younger and more tempting" Sahil thought. Spiky burst laughing loudly "Sorry Lizzy, he did…send you a SMS but I deleted it from your inbox". Rano glared at her useless brother. "What" she said angrily. "Right, it was just a joke, now go and change quickly" Spiky advised. He turned to face Sahil and added "sorry, it was just to annoy her, but if you're getting late, you can go, I'll drop her, I don't want you to scold her for being late, you can go, I'll drop her home" Spiky offered. "No, I'll wait".

_

"Why are you asking?"

"Why are you hurt? When you asked I did answer"

"I didn't pressurize you"

"Nor am I"

"It…" Bani started and sighed "…being long time, it was when I was twenty, that is three years back, he was a jerk". "He used me, you know, all I can say" Bani said pitifully. "I was just a nave little girl who could fall in anyone's trap, but not anymore" Bani said bitterly. Jai could notice her pain so he chipped in "you don't need to continue, if you don't want to" he said squeezing her shoulder. "It's okay, I don't mind opening to you now" she said sighing.

"He was futile anyway, not worth of anything, you know"

"I know it's hard but sharing won't increase the pain but decrease it"

"Thanks, but I already shared it with my sister and Alisha" Bani laughed bravely. Jai noticed she was brave to laugh at such situation where normally girls would cry and tell what's in their heart!

"Just give me a second, I'll tell you"

"Hmmm"

_

Rano came running downstairs in a white salwar kameez. She looked mess up; as she did everything quickly. She slid her drape (dupatta) well; draping her shoulders, and wore her shoes, she gave a grateful look at her brother and said "you eat after some five minutes, okay" she said concerned. He nodded and included "it being fun to irritate you after a long time" and he winked. Rano laughed and without looking at Sahil she said "I guess we can leave". Sahil noticed she wasn't in a mood of looking at him; he was hurt…

Preview: Flashback!

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
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Posted: 14 years ago
So u r deciding to tempt us wid short nd sweet updates..Mmm..(Maan Style..lol)

No prob..I wish Sahil cud hav..u knw..no Spiky..only dem both..(stop blushing Ms.Sally Amanda!)

So bani s deceived by love...interesting..nd Cont soon:)

PS:I'm so happy fr u nd ur sis...I wish dat u both hav gr8 moments of togetherness not only at home bt also at schul!

Convey my regards 2 her:)

Love,
Cute honey
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SallyAmanda

So u r deciding to tempt us wid short nd sweet updates..Mmm..(Maan Style..lol) No Hun, don't compare me with MSK...me and MSK 😲 lots difference 😲 MSK is MSK; different, absolutely out of this world 😳 please do answer about those riddles of GHSP

No prob..I wish Sahil cud hav..u knw..no Spiky..only dem both..(stop blushing Ms.Sally Amanda!) will include next time

So bani s deceived by love...interesting..nd Cont soon:)
Hmmm...
PS:I'm so happy fr u nd ur sis...I wish dat u both hav gr8 moments of togetherness not only at home bt also at schul! right...but wont let her call me "didi" there it would be so embarassing! Lol

Convey my regards 2 her:) Sure but no names 😉

Love,
Cute honey Love ya too, Sugar

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Posted: 14 years ago
There's one similarity b/w MSK nd u guess Wat????
MSK s gr8 at heart nd so r u:)
Love u:))))
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Posted: 14 years ago
Brave girl Bani, @least she can laugh @ her past. Looking forward 2 da next update thanxs
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Sally, never compare me to Maan. Uff…Maan…Maan is outstanding in everything. Hahah…he even has his style to express! Lol, arrogant MSK!!! But comparing me to Maan; lolz, I was blushing like anything! Now if I continue to talk about Maaneet, I'll keep on babbling, here's the next part! The way Geet says "Dust Danav" Oh my God...(laugh...laugh)

Chapter #35

"Well, everything started when I was twenty…at college" Bani shuddered a little. Jai gave her a comfortable pat full of warmth. Bani smiled.

Flashback starts

"Bani! Bani! Bani Dixit! Over here" someone waved. It was Alisha. Bani smiled. "Did you do your Physics homework" Alisha asked while Bani nodded. "Lend me your pad, I will copy, I didn't understand anything about the whole chapter" Alisha said making a dramatic face. "Will you excuse me, I'll go to the library and search for the latest Gossip Girls" Bani winked.

She was walking when she toppled over someone. As usual she was so lost in her la-la land and had collided with a person. "I'm sorry" Bani muttered embarrassed. Her face had turned red. The stranger looked at her and was about to snap and then he stopped looking at her innocent face. "I'm sorry, I got zoomed out in my thoughts" she said giving him a puppy face. The stranger nodded and said in a deep voice "just watch out where you're walking, not everyone is so nice" and he helped Bani to stand on her feet. Bani studied him and said "you're new?" "Yup, I'm, I am in for studying, I came from California you know" he said proudly. Bani nodded and said "well, welcome here" and she gave him a friendly smile. The stranger nodded "Hey, I am Rishi" he said extending his hand for a shake. Bani just grabbed his hand and shook it. "Bani…" Bani mumbled. "Wow, nice name, I love names starting with the letter 'B' and now 'Bani' is on my list" Rishi complimented. Was she dreaming? He was giving her lots of attention and he was even making her blush!

Some days later Rishi had become the popular boy of the school; arrogant and had a lot of attitude. Bani preferred to stay away from him. But Rishi had other plans; he constantly would talk nicely to her; give her lifts, ask her notes and the nicest he could be to her. Soon Bani saw herself falling for him despite her friends warning. Most of the nights; she would be dreaming about him. It wasn't weeks since Bani was asked out.

Kingston Palace was the hang-out of Bani and Rishi. Bani was becoming weak in her studies and the principal had to call home too. He even had kissed her hands a gazillion of times making her blushing like anything, he would tell her how beautiful and innocent she was; how cute she looked. Bani would often bunk classes to spend times with Rishi. Rishi had occupied a very important place in her heart. One day Megha saw Bani and Rishi together and that was the day; she was sent to a hostel far away from home. She hated Megha very much.

_

Sahil pulled in the parking lot. Rano was fast asleep cuddling to the door. He didn't have the heart to wake her up so he walked over and opened her door trying to think how to bring her inside. But with the slightest noise Rano had woken up and saw Sahil standing there, the door left ajar. She brushed her hair, and walked out. Sahil closed the door and turned to her; without looking back, she made her way inside; shivering. He felt bad…she was ignoring him like anything. Sahil tagged behind. It was late; and everyone had retired to their respective rooms.

_

Her life was under control in the Hostel. She hated to spend every single minute there. She was away from her family, Alisha and moreover Rishi. But soon she became friends with those girls there. One of them was Jasmine. Jasmine would constantly talk about her beloved.

"We met recently in California and believe me he proposed me to marry him" Jasmine cooed. Bani smiled. Her every conversation about this 'beloved' stranger would make her think about Rishi. It pained her million of times; how she had cried all night. She only knew how alone she was. She hated Meg till no end. How many bad words she had told her! She herself knew.

"You know 'he' has come to meet me today" Jasmine told her. "I told him about you, I'll introduce you to each other. Come on" Jasmine said.

"Bani, meet Rishi, and Rishi, this is my hostel-best mate Bani" Jasmine said happily. Bani stared at Rishi in complete shock but he made as if nothing happened!

_

Rano changed in her night-dress and without caring for anyone; she went to sleep. Sahil just stared at her his mouth hanging. He got angry; she was the same girl who four days ago had told him that she couldn't live without him and now she was behaving like he didn't exist. It was too much to bear.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Sahil ka bacha...
Once upon a tym u were d one who was angry at her cos of dat damn Pia...

Aur Ab?????u want forgiveness????

It's so heart wrenching u knw...2 c sum1 fail at love:(

Cont soon:-)I know I know yet u r the sweetest frnd ever...:-)
And d guy who plays MSK his name s Gurmeet Choudhary:-)

Geet ended yesterday:-((((
Sad...
Love u
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow great story plz update soon

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