i am so hurt dearsš...my like just fell like anything...and comments...usski baathi mat karo...š...just a page comments!!!š ..
i think people are losing interest in my ff...
one side ghsp is coming to an end news and above it...this...may be people no more want to read ff's on maaneet...š...i m so hurt guys...
i m thinking of ending my both ff's...
now for it...if u people really want to read my ff plz let me know and if want...i will surely continue more...
i have a lot more story in this ff...but as i m feeling that u people lost ur interest i am thinking of ending it...or else i have so much in my mind to pen it down for u...
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Part 59
Yash and misha went to the stage along with others. They both exchanged the rings and all clapped.
The party was in full swing everyone were busy in chatting with some one or the other. That's went geet received a call.
"hello" geet said.
"geet" came the voice from other side.
"meera?" geet asked confusingly.
"haan geet" meera said.
"meera where are u? why are u calling me?" geet asked looking around for her.
"geet I came out to get some thingsā¦but I was stuck hereā¦.actually I am atā¦.do u remember the park near our school???...geet plz yaar its becoming lateā¦.come and pick meā¦..i will be waiting okayā¦ā¦plz come quick okayā¦.bye geetā¦..i will be waitingā¦.." meera quickly cut the call not listening to geet.
Geet quickly ran towards the exit and drove out in her car.
Meera stood at the entrance looking at the car driving out of the gates.
Geet went to the park and stopped the car in front of it.
She came out and looked around but found no one. She took few steps and again looked around but no one was there. the whole road is deserted. She took the mobile to call meera its 11.30. she called meera but her phone came switched off.
She turned to leave but when she turned around she saw a note pasted on her car windowā¦.
Geet,
Don't worry u came to the correct placeā¦.
Just do as I sayā¦..dont panickā¦..u r safeā¦..remember its ur friend who called u and asked u to comeā¦..so u r safeā¦.
Walk into the park infront of u geetā¦come onā¦.
I m waiting for u geetā¦ā¦come geetā¦..
Ur love.
Geet dint know what to do. She read the note again and againā¦.yes whoever it is they are rightā¦.its her friend meera who called her and asked her to come hereā¦so there is nothing to fearā¦.but still she is confused and scaredā¦.whether to go in or not.
Finally she made up her mind and walked forward.
She entered into the park and the park was totally dark. As she kept her first foot inā¦ā¦ the whole place... turned from dark to brightā¦..every where the trees are decorated by lights and color balls, different kinds of flowers etcā¦ā¦the bench are covered with different color decorative items, roses, orchids and candelsā¦..
She looked at the ground and found a path with rose petals leading her to her destiny.
She walked few steps forward and that's when she found another note on a small plant which is near the path wayā¦.
She took the note which is in another color now along with a roseā¦.
Geet,
I know geet u will comeā¦.welcome geetā¦.
Did u like the decorationsā¦ā¦I m not that romantic types like SRK geetā¦..so plz adjust with thisā¦ā¦I know I m bad in these things but a small hope that u will like itā¦ā¦..
Did u like it geet?
Come geetā¦.take another stepā¦..
Waise are u wondering who is this deewana?
Well u know this deewanaā¦..i wont say my name until u reach meā¦ā¦and after u reach me u wont ask my nameā¦.
So until then I will give u some clues and u think who I mā¦.
The first clue isā¦ā¦u know me very wellā¦ā¦
U know me from less timeā¦but I know u from ur childhood..
Think geetā¦think
Ahhhā¦.dont forget to take another step
Ur love.
Geet read it and started thinkingā¦.he knows me from childhood? But I know him only few days back?...yeh kaun hai?
Geet took another few steps and saw another note on a bench. She literally ran to the bench and took the note in her hand.
Geet,
Are u that desperate to meet me? Don't run geetā¦u may get hurt yourselfā¦.afterall u r wearing high heels naā¦.
Waise geet dint u find who I am?...
May I give u another clue?
U are so cute when u node ur head like thatā¦like a small childā¦.hayye how much I love itā¦..
So here is the second clueā¦..
I m related to this parkā¦..u know me here and u also left me hereā¦
Think geetā¦..
Take another stepā¦.
Waiting for uā¦.more desperate than uā¦
Ur love.
Geet smiled and took another step thinkingā¦she is unable to relate anythingā¦..
She took few more steps and the path way took a turnā¦now she is moving to right side of the park. As soon as she turned right and took few stepsā¦she found countless rose plantsā¦..all red one side and other side white and red as pairs tied togetherā¦..but the red count is moreā¦.
She instantly fell in love with the rosesā¦.
She took another few steps and saw another note there.
Geet,
Did u like those roses?
Those rosesā¦did u remember???ā¦.from the day I met uā¦.
I gave u a rose daily and after u left I planted a rose daily
So do u know how many are there?
The count of the red roses at ur left side is 2190ā¦..
And the count of red and white pair roses is 364ā¦.
Do u know what they indicate??
That's the next clue geetā¦..
2190 are the days I spent without seeing uā¦..from the day u left meā¦.and till the day I saw u
Then the pairsā¦.are 364ā¦.from the day I again saw u till todayā¦.
Hmm I must still plant the pair of today'sā¦.literally 2mmorrowsā¦coz it only 15 mins more for the next day to beginā¦.and I want to plant it along with uā¦.
One more thing geetā¦..
The day I saw u firstā¦.i mean in our childhoodā¦..
And the day u left meā¦ā¦..
And the day I again saw u back after long timeā¦years actuallyā¦
Are the sameā¦..
That's todayā¦..after 12.00 I meanā¦ha ha
Come on geetā¦.come on
Ur love.
Geet went towards the roses and caressed them and walked forward. She is so touched by his loveā¦but still she cant get anything.
She saw another noteā¦..
Geet,
Here take a look at the gift alsoā¦
Geet looked at the gift that lay on the bench. She opened it quickly and shocked to see what lay infront of her eyes.
It's an old bookā¦.actually it HER bookā¦.her chemistry notesā¦.which she lost in her 10th class. And she found another note book with some other writing but with the same matter. She took it and preserved itā¦..
She resumed to read the letterā¦..
Yes geet
Its UR bookā¦.
Yes its me who stole ur book and also its me who wrote u a new bookā¦..
Come on geetā¦.dont stopā¦walkā¦.
Come to meā¦.
I m waitingā¦
Ur love.
Now geet started to understand whats happeningā¦..
She took another few steps and found there bunch of papers and another noteā¦.
Geet took the papers in her hand and they are the lettersā¦..
Letters with her hand writingā¦..the letters she wrote toā¦.
Herā¦.her MR.Strangerā¦..
Geet,
Haan geet u r right.
That's meā¦.ur MR.strangerā¦
Who gave u a rose dailyā¦.
Who stole ur bookā¦ā¦
Who gave u a new bookā¦..
Who shared his deepest secrets with uā¦.
And who preserved ur deepest secrets deep inside his heartā¦..
Who wrote u lettersā¦..
And to who u wrote repliesā¦ā¦
Who stood behind the tree and observed u dailyā¦.
Who saw ur smileā¦.
Who saw ur laughterā¦..
Who saw ur angerā¦..
Who saw ur frownā¦..
Who saw ur cryā¦.
Who saw ur painā¦.
Who saw ur happinessā¦.
Who saw ur innocenceā¦..
Who saw ur dareā¦..
Who saw ur fearā¦..
Yes its me..ur Mr. Strangerā¦.waiting to meet uā¦to tell u another deepest secret of mineā¦.
Come geet
Ur love,
Ur Mr.stranger.
Geet instant thought went to maan. She understood what this mr.stranger meant of his deepest secretā¦.but she dint understand what made her to think about maan⦠she dint understand whether to step forward and meet him or to run backā¦.she dint even understand what feelings she had for maanā¦.whether she ever have feelings for himā¦.but when he went to mumbia for 2 daysā¦she is unable to stand in the officeā¦.without seeing himā¦..she missed him terriblyā¦.what ever she didā¦.where ever she go her thoughts always filled by himā¦..its he covered her heart and soulā¦.
She slowly understood she liked himā¦..may be she loved himā¦the days she spent with him and the night she dreamed about himā¦ā¦its he always in her thoughtsā¦..
She finally decided to meet this guy and if he propose her she is going to tell him that she loves some one else and sorry for him.
With determination she took few more steps and there she saw what she expected in an unexpected wayā¦..
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there on the grass was written 'I love you geet' with candles and roses placed around them in a heart shapeā¦.the clock clicked 12.00 inviting a new day.
She was mesmerized by themā¦. She looked around and there she found a well built man coming out of the darkness.
She instantly started to speakā¦.
" dekhoā¦its nice u did this all for me ā¦.par mein kisis aur se pyaarā¦.." her words trailed off when she saw the person enter the lightā¦..
She gasped looking at himā¦.the only thing that came out of her mouth is "maan"
She stood there stupefiedā¦..maan slowly came to her with a smile and put his hand on her shoulder. This made her come out of the shock but still she kept looking at him in aweā¦.
She never in her wildest dreams thought that maan is her mr.strangerā¦..and never thought that maan is going to propose her in this wayā¦itni romantic wayā¦.she still cant decide this is a dream or is this happening in reality.
The thought itself brought the red color to her cheeks.
"geetā¦." He said bringing her back to the real world.
"this is real geetā¦trust meā¦..u r not dreaming" maan said.
Geet is still looking at him in awe.
"so geet u thought to reject meā¦ur Mr.Strangerā¦.and what u saidā¦haan u love someone right?" maan chuckled.
Geet blushed.
"so whom do u love geet?" maan asked making her blush more.
For few seconds there is silence. She dint hear maan so she looked up to find him on his kneesā¦.and one hand towards her holding a rose and another hand at his back.
"geet I love u " maan said. Geet looked into his eyes which were filled with loveā¦.pure love towards her.
"geet the day I saw u nearly 12 years backā¦.thats one of the days when I sat here in this park dully watching the lake infrontā¦..crying inside and scolding the god for taking away my parents from meā¦.and that when I heard ur laughā¦.which made me turn and look at uā¦..i dunno what made me walk behind uā¦..i dunno what made me watch u play sing dance laugh and jumpā¦ā¦.it brought me happinessā¦an unknown calmness in meā¦.from then I watched u dailyā¦.daily from behind a treeā¦.watched every act of ursā¦.
But one day u leftā¦..u left the place and lost the warmthā¦.i felt as if some one took my breath awayā¦.when I saw u hugging ur friends and crying for leaving themā¦.i felt like running to u and hug u and cry along with uā¦ā¦but alas I m still behind the tree as ur mr.strangerā¦..
And after 6 years exactly on the same dayā¦I saw u againā¦ā¦are u thinking that I saw u when u came to KCā¦no geetā¦..did u remember u almost hit a car and u scolded the drive there and some person came and settled the matterā¦its me geetā¦..do u know what I went through when I found u backā¦.i m on cloud nine geetā¦..and again the same day I saw u in KCā¦.and u joined as asst.arcticā¦ā¦what more can I ask god than having u beside me alwaysā¦..
But when I saw uā¦.ur cold behaviorā¦..i wonderedā¦.is this my geetā¦.my bubbly geet?...i felt as if someone pricked my heart with needles when ever I heard ur dry and dull voiceā¦.this is not my geetā¦.her voice had an enthusiasmā¦..her eyes had a glowā¦..her lips always wore that true smileā¦..that is when I determined to bring u backā¦.bring my old geet backā¦..
And I triedā¦.i demoted u from asst.arctic to my secretary to keep u always with meā¦.i gave u loads of work and made u do extra timing so that u will get irritated and I m successfulā¦..u started to speakā¦.u called me different namesā¦.shouted on meā¦.cribbed about meā¦..that gave me immense happiness geetā¦..and hours turned to days and days turned to months and finally we became friendsā¦.but one day u shouted at meā¦but that day I saw pain in ur eyesā¦.and it hurt meā¦.i want to know what happened to my bubbly geetā¦.what made her thisā¦..
Sorry geetā¦.i want to know ur pastā¦..and I met neha and karanā¦.i came to know ur whole pastā¦.sorry geet sorryā¦without ur permission I invaded ur pastā¦.but I did it as I love u and I want to bring u backā¦..
I m successfulā¦..finally I brought u backā¦.
Now I m here before u opening my all deeds and my feeling infront of uā¦..and its ur decision to accept me or to walk awayā¦.."
Maan stood on his knees stillā¦not moving ā¦.not even looking at geet. They staid there in silence for few minutes and maan felt geet's touch. She took the rose from him and that's when he looked at her.
Geet's eyes are totally filled with tears she instantly sat infront of him and hugged him.
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