MN FF Ye Dooriyaan#2 - pt 30- pg 111(06/12/11) - Page 79

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Divya here is a song for you---
bohot der se dar pe aankhein lagi thi,
huzur aate aate bohot der kar di,
maseeha mere tune bimaar-e-gam ki
dawa laate laate bohot der kar di.
🤣🤣
but by God what a come back Divya!!!
loved the update very much.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updatead
finally mayur r 2gether but feeling bad 4 nups.she gave isha!!hope mayur will be 2gether 4ever
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 29 - page 108

Hiya folks! I know U dint expect me back so soon 😳 😆

I'm sort of in a BIG hurry ...off to a vacation so wont be around to wish dear ol' Annie a VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY ...So Here it is in advance...Happy Birthday to this wonderful girl 🤗
Love you loads 🤗

Thank you for ur lovely reviews, I WILL reply to each one of you once I'm back from my vacay...I enjoyed all the comments..missed some of urs :( Do write in more than a few words to let me know what you thought of this chapter!

This is not the last chapter..this is maybe the second to last...Also if you remember the story (That went on for nearly 2 years *Shudder* each dialogue is a reference to an old chapter (rather an incident that transpired between Mayank & Nupur). Thank you Divya (the other one, not me ppl!!) for being a sweetheart and sending all those PMs!!!

Part 30

Nupur, Tum December mein chutti le sakthi ho?

hmm Nupur continued working not really listening to what Mayank was saying. She had a lot of work pending, her days of distress had slowed her work down considerably and now she had to work harder to catch up. Mayank on the other hand was comfortably seated in her office trying to engage her in conversation.

Tho teek hai December 15th fix kartha hoon He said marking off the date in her calendar.

hmmm She said absently. She missed the smirk that had formed on his face as he got up.

Coffee leke aatha hoon He was nearly out of the office when something struck her.

Mayank She looked up from her computer screen. He smiled. kya fix karne ki baat kar rahe the?

humari shaadi of course He grinned as he winked and walked out of the door presumably to get coffee. She stared at the now empty door way with her mouth open. What? That was only two weeks away! A surge of irrational anger coursed through her, how had he fixed the marriage date without even checking with her. He did ask you, her brain laughed at her. She felt angrier.

He came back with two cups of coffee, held out one for her as he sipped his cup of coffee. She made an angry movement and he smilingly placed her cup in front of her.

Tumhe humari pehli coffee yaad hai? He grinned smartly at her as he made himself comfortable on the chair. She gasped as she remembered the first kiss, the coffee flavoured first kiss in fact, the taste that had haunted her for years. Yet, how easily she had forgotten that once he had come back into her life.

Ya yaad dilaoon? His casual question again flared the anger that had subsided just a little.

Her eyes flashed dangerously, he shuddered just a little Tumhe ye Jhansi ki raani wala roop bohot suit kartha hai

Another familiar sensation made way to her stomach at the immensely familiar words of a time gone by came back to her.

The anger was slowly ebbing away. He flicked her nose lightly gussa ek dem naak pe rehtha hai

She shivered just a bit, the familiar nose flick, it seemed like an intimate gesture.

Kya hua Nupur? tum itni chup ho ki mujhe darr lag raha hai He was smiling though, very sure that she had reacted like old times, in her trademark anger, waiting to erupt but the slow reminders of their past confusing her, even making her forget her anger momentarily.

Mayank slowly walked towards the door and closed it.

Mayank ye kya kar rahe ho, office hai ! She felt the anger making its way back.

haan patah hai, lekin raat ke dus (10) baj chuke hai, aur chaprasi bhi nahi hai She looked at her watch in shock, he was right, it was late, she hadn't even realized.

Par hume jaana tha na, dinner ke liye? She felt unbelievably guilty , he had waited for her to take her out for dinner and she had forgotten all about it.

Par madam aap itni busy thi He laughed at her expression of minor irritation at being called madam. It had just flitted across her face but being an expert when the subject matter was Nupur, he had caught it instantly.

I'm sorry Mayank She exclaimed sincerely. He shook his head ,itni jaldi thodina maaf karoonga he said with a look of maddening superiority on his face.

He took her hand, tumhe dance karna hoga mere saath. The glee in his voice was unmissable.

yaha? she asked looking around her office space in confusion.

haanhe pulled her slightly, she didn't hesitate further for she knew there was no point arguing and nobody would walk in after all there was nobody else in the office.

music?

Tumne kuch kuch hotha hai nahi dekha? he demanded to know with a smirk that clearly said this was revenge for taking him along to watch the movie many moons ago.

She smiled. She really smiled, with her whole heart. He felt his heart swell with happiness. This was worth missing the dinner he had so meticulously planned.

Planning never worked with Nupur anyways, he thought ruefully. She was the queen of impromptu!

He suddenly whipped his cell out, she looked on nonplussed.

Pehla pehla pyaar hai..pehli pehli baar hai'janke bhi anjanaa aisa mera yaar hai'

The song played in the cell phone as he took her hand and danced to the melody that was the one of their very first dance. He had no idea that when they had danced to it at 13 that they would come to a stage like this many years later, but at least now things were as they should be. She felt happy like she had not been in years.

He wrapped his arms around her as she placed her head onto his chest, listening to his heart beats, swaying slightly as the song got over.

Nupur..

hmmm'

Tumhe yaad hai, humara school ka farewell?

of course!

yaad hai woh slide show'

yaaron dosti' she smiled at the memory.

koi tho ho raazdaar, begaraz tera ho yaar

Koi tho dilbar ho yaar, jisko tujse ho pyaar

He was now looking into her eyes unblinkingly. She felt her breath catch almost in anticipation.

Nupur, tum meri dost bhi ho, pyaar bhi. She tried to say something but his eyes stopped her.

He pulled out an origami box from his pocket. She stared at it in awe, it was exactly like the one he had made for her when they were kids. He went down on his one knee as he asked her opening the box

I have waited for you for long, I have loved you for longer that I can remember, but the reason I want to be with you make me happy, you complete me.

Marry me, please?

She stared at him dumbfounded. Though a few weeks back she had proposed the same thing, this was different, this made it more real.

yes She heard herself say it, but her mind was hazy, could she dare to be happy? She felt happy tears making way into her eyes. He was now on his feet and hugging her so energetically that her feet were off the ground, he spun her around joyously. She grinned widely letting the stray tear escape out of her eyes unconcernedly. He put her down and kissed her fiercely, she kissed him back with equal passion.

They grinned at each other like little children as they emerged from the kiss.

Kaha bhi na meine

Nahi jeena meine

Tu jo na mila

Tujhe bole se bhi

Bola na mein ye bhi

Chahoon fasla..

Bas fasla rahe banke

kasak jo kahe

ho aur chahat ye jawan

teri meri mitjaani hai dooriyaan

begani hai dooriyaan

hat jaani hai dooriyaan

fanaa ho sabhi dooriyaan !!!

Love

Divya :)

PS- Pls do leave your valuable reviews and comments n LIKE of course! :)



Edited by myownarea - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
In case any of u wondered why the song Ye dooriyaan inspired me so much (even if you didnt) ..I have a little explanation why...

The lyrics of the song has so much depth (Something missing in many songs these days..) it really is very touching!

Here is the translation in case you dont know the lyrics by heart like I do :D

TRANSLATION to Ye Dooriyaan

Yeh dooriyaan

These distances (essentially the separation)

In raho ki dooriyaan
These distances between paths
Nigahon ki dooriyaan

These distances between eyes
Humraho ki dooriyaan
These distances between companions
Fanna ho sabhi dooriyaan
There should be an end to these distances

Kyun koi paas hai,
Why is someone near,
door hai Kyun koi,

Why is someone far away?
jaane na koi yahan pe
Nobody knows why..

Aa raha paas ya door mein Ja raha

janoo na mein hu kahan pe


Am I coming near or going far?
I don't know where I am

Kabhi hua yeh bhi, khali rahon pe bhi
Tu tha mere saath ,

There was a time when even on an empty road(path/way), you were with me

Kabhi tujhe milke, lauta mere dil yeh Khali khali haath
Yeh bhi huwa kabhi, jaise huwa abhi
Tujko sabhi mein paa liya


There was a time when after meeting you my heart returned empty handed

There have also been times (like now) when I found you in everything(everyone)

Tera mujhe kar jathi hai dooriyaan
Satathi hai dooriyaan
Tarsathi hai dooriyaan
Fanna ho sabhi dooriyaan


All these distances should finish.

These distances between us, make me yours

These distances torment me, make me long desperately for you

There should be an end to these distances between us.


Kaha bhi na main ne, nahin jeena main ne
Tu jo na mila

I didn't even tell you that I wont live if I don't get you

Tujhe bhule se bhi na bola na mein yeh bhi
Chahu fasala

Bas fasala rahe,
banke kasak jo kahe
Ho aur chahat yeh jawan

I didn't even, by mistake , say that I want this separation, now we are apart, and it is like a bitter taste (pain in my heart) and says that love should bloom (into something more!)


Teri meri mit jani hai dooriyaan
Begani hai dooriyaan
Hat jani hai dooriyaan
Fanna ho sabhi dooriyaan

These distances should end, they are like strangers, they will move away(or leave)

These distances should end.

It's a song of love. The two lovers are still in love with each other, but are separated, they miss each other and wish the separation ends. They remember how even in life's emptiness, they had each other. The times when they had to leave each other, they returned with the emptiness in their hearts.

Not once have they really wished for this separation, not even by mistake. So the idea that they are not together is like a constant stab of pain in their hearts and only ending the separation and overcoming the distances can make them happy.

I think it pretty much summed up my story 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

Divz maybe u won't belive but i actually felt my eyes moisten reading that song in the end and how I remembered their life wid n without each other..."sigh"...finally the destined-to-be met❤️

and about the whole sequence and their interaction wow...though they tried to keep it as casual as possible but still I felt mushy mushy😆
Divz now I realized I miss ur writing so much...do keep writing for only WE(read readers) may be at a loss😳
loved the whole update from first letter to the last one⭐️😃
and the first coffee wala part and his "ya yaad dilaoon"...OMG that was flirtaiously romantic😍
loved it!!!!!😍
btw have a good holiday and keep coming sooner🤗
Edited by Payal-15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG...just going through my own post i saw that u have updated... wow...
this part was sooo sooo sooo special and heart touching...
specially the proposal and the dance...i litrrally felt shivers and could distinctly imagine the two people dancing...
very nice divya dii...
amazing...
and the translation of the song was very nice...even for me this song holds very deep meanings, which is why this song sounds very good to hear and the fact that MN are associated with this song in some ways makes it more special...amazing, fantastic!!
like i said previously i would say again...this was worth the wait...
enjoy ur vacations...
waiting for the last bit...:):)
**and lastly please pardon me my PC is giving some trouble for which i have not beeen able to "like' any post...but i SUPERLIKED this update
Edited by --Sanchu-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I've never waited eagerly for an update as i waited for yours...
The reason is the story and its pace
though the pace is slow, it depicted the emotions of the characters
i never felt that i am reading a story when i read this one...
Somewhere i got attached to it and most of the times i even got teary
I just love 'Ye Dooriyaan' and can never ever forget in my life time
I am not faking or just saying it to make you happy
These are the words from my heart
Relationship between MayUr in this story is sooo pure and i feel that this is what is called 'love'.
TRUE LOVE to be precise... It wasn't a fairy tale nor was it a filmy type rather it was realistic and that's what intrigued me and made me to read the story even i found this after the completion of one thread...
Loved this ff to the core...
Would love to read another realistic one from your end...
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG...now i didnt expect this... since u have updated and this is the 2nd last chap... i m sure smething is gonna happen and u knw what i m talking abt...

Love u loads Divya...

i will update with a comment later
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Posted: 14 years ago
ROFL, i have gone mad... they confessed, they proposed and they kissed... uff, kya likh diya Divya...

dreamland se aake i will comment... :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
omggg this ws such a surprising upd8..n indeed one of d most beautiful updates of this ff..d dance,d proposal scene n lastly d kiss..uff evrything ws soo soo magical.. to be specific MNish magical.. i totally totally loved it.. i ws aisehi goin thru my "my posts' section n i saw d title f this ff..ws vry surprised to c thinkin u updated it early..nywz thnx a ton for d upd8..more thn tht thnx a ton for such beautiful portrayal of dis ff ke MN ka long awaited real REUNION.. indeed nw no dooriyan b/w MN!! :)

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