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Posted: 14 years ago

Sorry guys I know being late at this ff means loss of flow..yet I donot know whts happening that I m being so lazy. Sory for that.thank u so much for ur wonderful comments..

Samrat looking at his cell nth time, he was trying to call her but he just couldn't….get ur professional life separate ..its better u talk to her, rather thn nupur…u know her , she is too strict at things…

He took the no n finally call her…he took a deep breath

Gunjan: hello….i weak low, n plain voice greeted him on the other side…. Hello…

Here hello came as whisper..it was difficult to believe is he really was calling the same girl he knew'''

Hello

This make him cum back to today

Samrat: hey…pause…its me…pause….samrat

Gunjan: silence was there..i want u to meet me…I need to tell u a lot about bhai…

Samrat: I know…but ur mom is nt letting…our ACP is trying to get official permission…

Gunjan: cum home ..mom is gone out of town…n im not allowed to leave home…guards wont stop u…officially we cant meet, they will never let me meet…

Samrat: I am cuming..

He rushed to the place….n the servent open the door n assorted him to her room…

She was lying on bed n tried to sat….his feets automatically run towards her to support her…there eyes meet but have nthing in them..he made her sit n pull realizing where his hands are, he moved it away…pulling a chair n sat there too

He didn't knew wht to ask how to ask, plus the way gunjan was observing him was making him more restless…she smile inside..things changed ..chagnged naaa there are up side down

Gunjan: Samrat…he looked up to her hearing her voice….bhai is kidnap by same who has killed dad

Samrat: how cum ur so sure..

Gujan: dad was not killed by terrorist was political, the govt people made look like tht cause if names of politician will cum out thn there will be huge trouble

Samrat: but ur brother was himself involved in it…

Gunjan: I know …thts the strange part ..maybe he did for the ministry …as now he is too a politician

Samrat: u mean he hided tht to get a position….he said in a surprise

Gunjan: ya I doubt…..bhai was fearing his shot out…he told me…n tht so by our against party

Samrat: so y he didn't got police involved…

Gunjan: she took a deep breath…as police will favor those in power, n they are in majority of power these days…

Samrat: ur took weak, wht u have done…pain n care was to loud speaking in his voice

She looked at him n n smiled scarcastically

Gunjan: they don't want me to meet u n mayank …nor CSI..i am on tranquilizer ..so im too dizzy…

Samrat: y u force CSI to take the case up….finally the question he wants to ask came from his mouth

Gunjan: I trust u…she looked at him n sumting slaped him right on his face….u have changed

He laughed pitfully

Samrat: everything has changed…donot worry..

He stod up..n placed his plam on her cheek..

Samrat: I hope I don't make u regret that …

He was about to leave whn she called him

Gunjan: Samrat..he turn..yeah bhai ki file hai… of dads case….

Samrat: thnks ..it will be a gr8 help…don't strees urself..n stay quite…so tht thy don't force u to remain quite….

Gunjan: but I need to get update…how cum im gonna contact u

Samrat: he took out a cell n gave it to her….its mine..not official…keep it …whenever u need us u can call..anytime…it has maaynk's , nupur's and benji no too….they r more reliable than me..so u can contact them….take care

He moved out n she looked at his lost figure…

She smiled n rested her head back….

Moving out he reached bureo n was looking in the file whn heard loud voice…

Benji: chal beta welcum to dady's home…

Samrat: looks like we have company…

Mayank: looked at him n smile…..yup…dhondy drugs gay thy mil bhi drugs gai..god don't want us to be sinful

Samrat: wht…

Nupur: cum on we will discus…

Samrat: ya even I have sumthing….

Nupur: wht u meet bhabi n marriage is fixed…she giggled …mayank laughed

Mayank: chill ker …he said at his shocked expression……kuch nhi hoga …

Samrat: kiya

Nupur: ap dono chalein gay discuion k lyan ..ya yaha kuch zayda important horah hai

Benji: nupur tumahin nhi lag raha ha yaha kuch hai jo hum se chupaya ja raha hai

Nupur: hmm….dekhty hain kitni dair tak chupay gay .ha ha ha …mayank ko tu mein achy se dekh lo gi

Mayank: dekh lay teri wajah se meri biwi mjhy per shak ker rahi hai

Nupur: shak ..sharma ji…is bar mjhy paka yaqeen hai…mera ghar…hay…she said dramatically putting her head on benji's shoulder

Benji: behna ..tu fikar maat kero is k tu mein band baja do ga…kya hai bay

Mayank: batao mein tujhy kay hai rukh…ab kaha bahg raha hai

Conference room:

Mayank: so there is drug business going on near highway with proper planning

Samrat: wht

Nupur: yaar per I doubt its not drugs, drug itni nhi mili jitan weapon mila…drug tu laga jasy un kay apny use lyan hai

Benji: I agree..

Samrat: but mili kaha

Mayank: yaar waha ek underground room tha….kafi hight tech

Samrat: yani vikram ko kuch pata nhi chala….waha us ko koi clue nhi

Mayank: hmm but…waha ek city zameen k neechy hai yeah ek buhat bara clue hai… tu gunjan se milny gaya tha na

Benji: yeah gunjan kaun hai…..

Nupur: vikaram;s sister

Samrat was amount to say but she said tht …n mayank both looked at her

Samrat: how do u know

Nupur: I am n ACP, hard to hide anything ..she gave a look "man-donot-mess –with me"

Benji: oki…so wht she said

Samrat: us k kayal se yeah political hai, us k father k murder ki tarha ..us ny yeah file di hai..its of investigation of her father…per it shud be between us not even cominer…she trusted….us….

Benji: went near to him….hain …she trusted u…sachi…..khubsoraat hai…tu tu pehly din se us ky pechay hai…he pushed him back…

Nupur: us area mein aur bhi asay kai underground houses hain n I thing vikram in one of it….

Samrat: thik hai tu humain us area ko boray tareeqay se talash keroo…

Mayank: nhi pehly yeah file …..we need to go through it thoroughly …over to ur works

Samrat: woh guys …ahme…..woh …mera dosra no…mera pass nhi hai..

Nupur put her hand on waist n other on desk….tu kaha hai …asked mischievously

Samrat: woh …woh actually I gave to gunjan..if she need us….her family isn't allowing her to talk to CSI so..just in case she 'l be needing us

Ohooo…thy all said

Samrat: get a grip guys…..

Benji: us???..or u….mamama…..is ko bhi larki mil gai…mein nhi khel raha,,,,,he is blushing……uper se yeah larki tu meri thi…is ny lay li…..

Nupur laughed..tujhy bhi milay gi meray bhai….main hoona

Benji: tum tu season 1 se yeahi kah rahi hoo..aur tu aur..humain clue bhi nhi diya aur is k sath.is sadu k sath shadi…..dekh rah hoon mein …..dost dost na raha..pyar tu wasy hi nhi tha

Mayank: tu zindagi teri bekar hai..tujhy shot out min uradoo…

Benji: aay kasa dost hai tu…dhushman na keray dost ny woh kam kiya hai

Samrat: bus pls…stop antakhshri…its serious

Benji: oye…stop it every one..is k saala is kidnap…bhabi naraz hojay gi..case solve kero…chalo

Samrat: benji k tu rukh ..aj tu tu gaya

He ran towards benji, n mayank n Nupur chuckled n left to there respective works…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
-Anila- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update API...
i loved dis gang...By God!!!!!
dey r sooo damn cute n hillarious...
i loved dis...
Benji was too good here...
so d mistry solved...😆😆😆
waise we toh pehle se hi knowing ke it is Gunjan...😳
waiting eagerly for d next parts...
n han i want it early unlike me late in evn commenting...😉😳😆
loved it lodsss...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
vinan2050 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
like this part grrt &thanx fr PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
He he he... That was funny...
Wonder whats with Gunjan and Samrat...
gopi06 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
interesting updt fiza
waiting for mayur moments
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely... lovely... update..
so.. samrat and gunjan.. actually... lnow.. each other...

previously...
hmm...
kuch to suspense.. hai... ...


hmmm..
daal mein kuch kala,.. hai... nahi... puri daal hi kali hai...
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Posted: 14 years ago
ha ha ha really nice!!!!!
benji is as usual hilarious...
but i loved mayank's dialogue...that shoot-out wala...LOL
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing
luvedd it
sajan know eachother...but how?
something was messy between them..
mayur r sweet as usual and benji tu benji hain
do write soon and take care
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow amazing update...
bechari benjii abhi tak ladki nai mili...lol...
nupur tu koi moka janay nai deiti maynk ko tang kernai ka...
so finaly gunjan came but how samrat know her? 😕
kia pehlay se jantai thei?
reveal this soon pls...
love ya...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
nic update...
my lovely dovey nupur mayanks
waiting 4 the next part
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u

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