MG[SS]-The Yellow Dot of Eternal Joy[IMP Note Pg 1 & Pg 72]

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Jazz has put a beautiful poem for my recently book "Dancing Mirrors" ...

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jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: indepgal
u have me intrigued.stumbled across your FF after reading deejays OS' that were recommended to me by a friend...both of u are fabulous! loved ur writing style and her poetry-great combo ..this ff is so full of positive energy-the friendship b/w the dads, the kids and hopefully the love b/w maan and geet...so is nanhi sam or geet? ...waiting to read more! PLS ADD ME TO UR PM LIST.thanks

Thank you so much for the appreciation. Glad you found this story worth reading. It means so much!

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: --Shika--
I couldn't help but re comment on the latest part.. As per my little research I already know Adi is a Handa. Now by this part Sameera is a Handa as well and it is crystal clear who Nanhi is. So we are left out with one person who is a Handa, and I'm assuming this is the person who is not able to attend Adi's Purple Platter'sopening. M waiting for Friday you-know-why!

Yeah yeah Baby parjhai!!! 🥳

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#204

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An adorable li'l imp holds the key,

To my heart's secret desire within me.

A weekend of promise, a bright sunny day

Yet clouds of doubt mar my way,

If and Buts, Life's eternal questions I ponder...

The yellow dot reappears, my mind does wander...

All else dissolves but something has me in its hold,

Yet I yearn for the rainbow and that pot of gold!

Part Five

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Posted: 14 years ago

#205

You know I was building a sad castle... very slowly.. very carefully and very calculatedly.. Made notes and well planned, observed keenly ad thought it would stay and then a wave came and crashed it and here am left with sand.. the only thing i had before i started building it.
This was my case after reading the update.
I made a lot of notes, observed keenly and had almost came to a conclusion that Nanhi isn't Geet. She's Sameera for various reasons and today I am at square one.
Huh! How do you do that?
Well before starting my emotional atyachar, Let me tell you something..
first.. you mentioed that Nanhi is the only artist of their lot. You also wrote that Nanhi was the one who was the interior decorator of his office room. Okay let us consider, Sam is Nanhi and she decorated the room and Geet only kept the flowers over there. Fine till here. But.. the million dollar question is who made his room?
If Nanhi then how!! 'Cause we know that it was Geet who has so much of love for yellow. Isn't it?
Assumption again. I know. But still..
Oh btw this line makes me suspicious..

"And today it's me who is relying on you for my life."
Till now i thought Maan was helping Sam in whatever that sunday's plan was. But you chaned the perception to 180 degrees again as it is now clear it is big thing for Maan.
wait! if it is for HIM then why did Sam say "Make it memorable for me"
???????????????????
One more confusion!
You know this may mislead here.. only if you wouldn't have mentioned about Maan-Sam relation here. But you did. Thanks to the small mercies.😆

Anyway moving on...
I loved ad almost ROFLed in my chair reading one conversation.

"Almost three days and this boy is yet to show his face at home. I swear Meera, just let me get my hands on him…"

"Wait Naina. Hold on a minute there. No one lays a finger on him. It's my broom and his legs today…"

"Meera, stay away from him ok! I will pull his ears till they snap of his face."

"No ways! You just stand and watch Naina, as I break his arms and put them in his pockets."

Whoa! Talk about motherly love.

How How How did you do that!! When Meera said Wait Naina i was like okay Maan is Meera's pet but her other part of sentence was hilarious!
Oh BTW did i tell you I love Maan's one liners in this SS.
Even his self talk with his fathers was HILARIOUS!!

"Nanhi says that yellow is an uplifting color. And provides sure-shot relief provider from burn-outs and exhaustion…"

"Which I don't need…"

"You are such an ostrich."

I would roll my eyes at this, but the scene from the living room few minutes ago was still fresh in my mind.

"Where is Nanhi? Wasn't she supposed to leave today?"

"She will leave around five,"

I already found that someone was upset with Maan. Someone ...the Handa's mysterious child to be precise.
Adi's words strengthen this theory..for he told Yellow orchids resemble that someone is disappointed with you... Isn't it?
And this shows that it was Nanhi? Which means Nanhi is the another mysterious Handa kid? Geet?
Ah! This is confusing!
OH BTW where and why is she leaving?
Is this why she could not attend Adi's opening of his place?
Now this makes sense but all of them point out to one conclusion that Nanhi is Geet and I am conphused😕

Because the question was never 'Who'. But the answer lay in the 'Why'.

And the answer was what I had not been able to comprehend from the moment I had opened my eyes. From the moment I heard her voice. Fromt the moment my yellow dot walked away from me.

This last para was indeed an answer to many questions. Till here even if you'd have made MG strangers, it would have made sense.. for he was following her..but now this para really confirms that he was following her 'cause he wants to meet her..not to know who she is.. it meant he knew who she is. So he did recognise her voice. Yippee! One confusion cleared. Now you better update soon if not my poor brain cells would die😆

Edited by --Shika-- - 14 years ago

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jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: goldenball
Those who are Jazz fans...I have to definitely share this with all of you...👏👏😃

Jazz has put a beautiful poem for my recently book "Dancing Mirrors" ...

Right now, infibeam is giving best deal ...30% off...
https://www.infibeam.com/Books/dancing-mirrors-rakhi-sunil-kumar/9789381205587.html?utm_term=dancing+mirrors_1_1

Thank you for the acknowledgement Rakhi :)

Best of luck for your book.