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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing updt fiza
interesting plot ,so i don't want any changes in it
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesumeee update
loved it
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i loved mayur nok jhok n romance...
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice...haha...
hayye...we also know how much nupur distracts mayank...LOL
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update
i don't want tooo much romance but their should be little little beautifull moments sometime
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow... lovely..
aamzing update...
smarat to kuch ho gaya.. hai..
loved mayur convo...
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was amazing...
nice combination...
but whos vikram sis? 😕 may be vo gunjan hu?
if gunjan bhi hai tu does samrat love her?
beautiful mayur moments...poor mayank nupur nai romance ka mood hi kharab dia...:)
by the way wht happen to ur hand?😔
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Posted: 14 years ago
mayank is so naughty. get well soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

take care of yourself

its is the perfect update
hardcore investigation and romance ek saath
really loved the update
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Posted: 14 years ago

THNKS FOR LIKING…..vikram's sister mystery in next update…may found it short but this much I was able to mange ….pardon errors…

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Bureo:

Benji: oki I have a force ready we are going to the cleanup at high way…so all cleaners are set

Mayank: n on wht way u r goona take the permission for this cleaning

Benji: we have suspect…

Samrat: ur nuts….this is not a publicly claimed case sweatheart…..

Benji: so wht I am gonna do

Nupur: liee….have u heard abt the savior , lie my child…say tht we r hunting sum drug dealers..oki

Benji: liers u guys r …

Nupur: we are joinig u, hey mayank do I got the permission fom com..about vikram sistee I wanna meet her ASAP

Mayank: ya ..samrat will be on this, we will go to hight way area…so it better one of us will talk to her , plus that will make things look different to as, one of our officer was on sumthing else

Nupur: oki…..lets get ready…good luck

…….

Samrat: why me u want to go …

Mayank: u better know

Samrat: I am not….

Mayank: so what do u want huh…..u know we need talk to her for case, u want it to went official way, u know nupur..3 mins n she will have evrthing on desk man…wht r u thinking is this so simple….

I knw who is vikram's sister

Sigh

Samrat..better tht u talk to her by urself….alone, off the record…else I ''ll ask her…choice is urs….

N u better this time make the right one…

He was leaving whn turn

U know y she choice CSI for this case…

Shaking his head he left to the changing room

Reaching there he saw nupur pulling up her bullet proof..raising her eyebrow in wht

He winked n she smiled….

N he proceed to change…getting there guns in place….

Getting in jeeps, they rushed to highway, there GPRs was tagged with the area, reaching there getting off the vehicle….

They looked around the whole area, it was dark of course its night…there was not much of population there..

Benji: seems like evry one is down earth

The whole area was empty nthing there, sum hills, all sand, two three cottages. No movement of peoples, it was really feeling like that everything is beneath the ground..

The hilly area was the most tempting for them..it seems maybe the found sumthing there

Mayank: he looked at her…wanna meet me back of them….

Nupur: lets try tht to …..

Benji: dam….

Reaching there they reach the house..

N he banged in .. aiming his gun in front ..it was a family of three,

They screamed ..

Mayank: we r not gonna harm u …silence pls

He moved his gun aiming all around there, moving inside with a officer, they strt searching the house, scanning people..the weird part was the children who weren't scared of the guns they have, they were just quite n were looking at them keenly

They looked around..found nthing

Checking evry house ..

Nupur n mayank banged inside a a much biger area….moving in thy found it to dark , no gas lamps…putting on the torches n light aimer of ther guns ..hearing sumthing…he moved n pulled her aside

Shuting the lights..of guns

Nupur: wht ru playing Mr sharma

Mayank: nothing special …just cheating on my wife…..

Nupur: brat u r …bad luck, ur at nasty place..

Mayank: shh…pata nhi I feeling sum movement here

.there was movement around the house, n saw a man cuming from down the land, underground hid away….that cause an expression of shock on there faces

Mayank: need to get him, we have sumting here…he pecked her ..will continue later….going towards him he slowly captured him from back…

He hited back mayank… n he captured him back with his hands on back, banging his nose by tight punch…

But to there bad concentration there were two more…the guns fired on them ….backup Charlie…he shouted

Oh freak….she got the cover n shout the one, not to kill but to make him not to move..the one of them was hited by here, on his legs making him fall on ground, banging his head she made him fainted, n she tied his hands, the other was captured by mayank…He hited the other on leg n than on stomach…..

Soon benji n other joined n they got arrested….

Nupur: benji stope him…

One of them twisted his neck by himself, n died.

Mayank: oh freak…..

Lightening up sum fire they made things visible in room, looking around taping the floor they found the door to the under ground ..openig it they found a wodden ladder to move down, jumping down they found a huge room there, it was more down than up

Nupur: oh mine…waoo…

Electricity was there, temperature was under control, it was luxurious..

Benji: yaar yeah tu kisi ghar k basement lag raha hai…theme hai village

Mayank: hmm…check the box ya aur bhi kuch milay ga

Opening the box they found ra cotton bundles in it…

Benji: cotton…

Nupur: here too..

Mayank: dig it down..check each n every..cotton ko control temperature ki zarrota nhi hoti…

The digged down , removed the front box, diging down the back ones they found..guns in it..

Nupur: oh man..look it that

Mayank: ha ha…got it…waoo..so loads of mamass..

Benji: n babies too…

M/N: wht they turned

Benji found there drugs too…

Taking things in possession they went out of the area..

Nupur: lets move them home…we have a long day today….

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...
loved it lodsss...
now toh m SURE its Gunjan as its clear now...
ooohhhooo...yeh Mr. n Mrs. SHARMA na!!!
By God!!! kahin bhi shuru ho jate hain...
issiliye toh hum sabko iss Season ke MayUr itne jyada acche lagte hain...
loved it lodsss...
it was a super update...
i loved it lodsss...
waiting eagerly for d next part...
love u...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago

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