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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drmaha

we want 2 in 1... investigation along with romance ... 😉😆
we want both on the same update... ... 😲 ☺️

abay chalo...jitna mil raha hai kafi hai
yaad kero season 1...warna is mein bhi yaad keradoo😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

abay chalo...jitna mil raha hai kafi hai

yaad kero season 1...warna is mein bhi yaad keradoo😉



koi bhoolna chahe bhi to tum kaha bhoolne dogi...aur waise bhi TUMSE itna mil raha hai kuch zyada nahi hai kiya 😳...itnaaa zyada ke hume ab kehna parh sakta hai BASSS fizu BASSS control😆...!
Edited by valliyah - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks for ur lovly comments…for all of u let me remind yeah romantic story nhi CSI hai, season 1 yaad kero waha tu kuch bhi nhi tha…yaha itna sab kuch mil raha hai aur tum log ho k….reham kero kahin tu mjhy lovestory se bahr any do..plsih….

Are u ok with the way this plot is running, want any changes?

Pardon errors…

Yup n plus I will may not update GMYH n WWU for 4-5 days , as my right hand is a bit injured, pulled my muscle badly , so not able to type

Sorry

tc

fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Reaching bureau nupur benji told them tht they have found only 2 indefinable fingerprints, and the trace of blood was of the guard, no body else, the hairs n a piece of cloth….

She ask smart to go for a DNA test for the hair found at the seat, as thy knew its of vikram but need to confirm, he said he will n quickly proceed to the his lab..

Nupur was about to ask mayank wht has happen but all of them 's attention was diverted with the phone call, tht was ringing in khuran's mansion…with special permission from COM thy silently were eying there cell phone too, wch only mayank knew, n being professional even nupur has no clue about them….

GUYs get on head phones quick….

Mayank shouted n they all keenly got to hear it…

As police was apparently working on the case, n it was not shown to media neither to the people nor to the police n higher authorities tht special branch is handling , so the know tht only police is tracing there calls..

Kidnapper: hello, vikram humaray pass hai…zayda sawal nhi..sirf humari baat suno, qimaat 20 corer, wqat tumhary pass 4 din, jaga hum baad mein batein gay…

The GPRS was moving to fast but the call was less thn 10 sec….to short to trace th locality, but yet the traced it nearer …

Mayank: freak to short to trace..

Samrat: away from Mumbai but not entering other city

Nupur: true ..highway???…

Mayank: possibly…..

Benji: sirf 20 correr…vikram khurana ki keemat sirf 20 cror….

Samrat: 400 cror tu aram se hongay un k pass….

Nupur: maybe thy donot want to stretch it to much, just needing desire many

Mayank: tu kisi business man k betay ko kidnap kertay …vikram ko kyun…we need to locate the location, ASAP, I fearing his murder….pasay lay ker us ki lash na dain woh

Benji: can be zinda dayna k tu unhony kaha nhi…..

Mayank: kal im going to COM….need to seek special permission ..…vikram ki sister se baat kerny k warrant chaiay….

Samrat: nhi mayank he almost shouted …asay nhi….she is indeed in not good state….

Benji: tu tu kiya private no per call keray ga….he giggled n samrat said nthing,…

Mayank: benji….i want a force ready to search each n evry , each n evry mean each n evry house , cabin, whtevr on highway no 4 ..this no is around there sumwhere, though it was a satellite phone but still it appears there….thy knew police doesn't had tht facility to trace this techino….

Nupur…chk the bank accounts, n wht about his father's case…maybe vikram hs all money not his family n that's y they ask tht little

I doubt it's a terriost attack…

Mayank: oki we will work on it

Benji: tum dodno sath sath…kam hoga bhi ya…

Mayank: backup benji…

..

In car

Nupur: wht happened to Samrat…..

Mayank; pata nhi …kyun

Nupur: sounding a bit low….

Mayank: ya me too found it but he said he is fine….pata nhi…

At home

Mayank: hey mom

NM: agay ap dono mhjy laga tha k aj bhi dinner akely kerogi….jao fresh hojao mein kahna lagti hoon

On dining table…

Nupur: mayank woh murder 100 % political hai…

Mayank: taking a bite….how cum ur so sure..

Nupur: dekho woh elections k itny kareeb hoa just to make him not get elected …as he has a huge vote bank in Maharashtra..

Mayank: hmm but still thy won ..not only here but in UP to..

Nupur: ab yeah tu unhony socha nhi hoga na k itny sary sympathy votes milay gay

Mayank: worng , politician ek bhi baat , ek bhi point nhi chorta, woh kahana bhi khta hai na tu yeah soch ker k is k bechay kya wajah hai…

I have spend more than enough time with them, there thinking is too different…weird, at time sick, n too selfish …..tu us ko dosray angle se lo…

NM: marr kaho gay tum dono, shadi k waqt kiya promise hota

They both laughed n said sorry……

Better ..no criminals in my home..

Mayank: lay ap itny saalo se lady criminal k sath rah rahin hain….

Nupur: tum ny mjhy lady criminal kaha …she was poring halwa in his plate….wch she took …tum ny mjhy criminal kaha

Nupurs mom chukled n left knowing its gonna go to long

Mayank: han kaha tu…her waqt apny pati ko darti ho, dhamkti hoo, marti hoo….aur aur tu aur emotional aityacahr bhi kerti hooo….bechar mein

Nupur: mayank..mein ny tumharay sath asa kab kiya hannn,…

Mayank: dekho abhi bhi ankhein dekh rahi hoo

Nupur: ha ha aur tum jasy buhat dar jaty hoo …aj tak ek baat tu meri suntay nhi hoo

Mayank: hain hain…wait a min…whn I haven't listen to u, tum se jab se mila hoon tumhari tu sun raha hoon, kisi ko bolny dayti hoo tum…

Nupur: tu tumhar yeah kiyal hai k mein zaroorat se zayda bolti hoon han

Mayank: bulkily nhi…mera yeah kayal hai k zarorat se zayda nhi tum us se bhi agay bila wajhy bhi bolti ho..kisi ko concentrate nhi kerny dayti …

Nupur: tu tum ny yeah kaha k mein distraction hon…

Mayank: yes mrs shrama, he grin n pulled her close..n her anger was changed into shook…ur such a distraction for me…reham nhi ata mjhy bechar pati per…he said mischievously

She encircled her arms around …

Nupur: nhi…buhat maza ata hai

Mayank: leaning close….kis cheez mein …han….diping his head in her neck , he took in her fragrance leaving trails of kises

Nupur: mayank…mom….

He moved a bit away…n looked back n left her ..she was about to go one he pulled her back so tht her back was touching him….uper room mein milo…4 mins…saying so he pecked her cheeks winked n left her…leaving the place too..

After helping her mother n asking her day …She went inside her room, changing herself she find her hubby was lying closed eyes…but she wasn't in plan to sleep….

Moving near to him…

Nupur: mayank..utho…

Mayank: he opened his one eyes,..n pulled her with a jerk on bed…kya baat hai aj ap itny romantic mood mein…

Nupur: mein ny apko romance kerny k lyan nhi uthaya hai….mjhy Samrat k bary mein batao

Mayank: kiya nupur….is waqt koi dosto k baray baat kerta hai…..is waqt is position mein actually baat kaun kerta hai….

He said turning her to bed lying beside her , support himself with his hand, with other playing with her hairs…

Nupur: mayank pls im serious, I know tum kcuh chupa rahy hoo..

He smiled n kissed her forehead…

Mayank: u know me way too much….wasy mein tu case k baray mein kuch baatein chupata hoon than

Nupur: woh humara kam hai,..mera kahbari kaun hai, kab kiya news dayta hai….have I told u, its nt tht we don't trust each other

Mayank: its tht we cant just trust even ourself in this work….n I love this in u…yeah faida hai to fall for I girl from same profession….leaning towards her, ignoring all her questions he captured her lips in a deep kiss, wch make him more ignite with evry touch of her fingers playing in his hairs…..

Nupur: u don't ….want …to ..answer na…..

He sigh

Mayank: I donot have an answer to it myself…it weird I know but I don't know…

Nupur: fine…good night..she turned to the other side..n closed her eyes

Mayank: yaar nupur isn't fair….i donot know such mein..mein sach bol raha hoon…

Nupur: good night ACP Sharma

Mayank: Nupur…yeah Samrat ki saaza mjhy kyun mil rahi hai

Nupur: kyun k tum dost ho usk

Whining he back hug her ..pressing his chin on her neck…..nt fair..n slept too…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oyeee fizuuu
ye vikram ki sis kaun hai??
kahi wo gunjan tou nehi hai na??
hmm i think gunjan is vikram's sis and sam loved gunjan..
hahahaha main CSI tam k ehle he pata kar liya..:D :D :D


btw they ailed to trace the location eeeksss- itna sa kaam bhi nehi kar paya..lol lol

haye my mayur and their cute romance
la la la la la - it was very nice hun

romanc eki sath saath intelligence ki double dose - wah wah wah
lovely combination sweet heart
fabulous update as usual
awesome
keep it up


Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...
loved it lodsss...
m toh sure yeh Vikram ki sis Gunjan hi hain...
hay...mere Mr. ROMANTIC Sharma...
i jst love him to d coreee...
loved it lodsss...
love u API...🤗

ps: sry for being so late...
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
bechara Mayank...🤣...par mujhe bahut maja a rahi thi by god...amazing update...i loved the dialogue when benji said tum dodno sath sath…kam hoga bhi ya… 🤣

take care...😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
fabulous update...hope u hand gets better soon..cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fiza, beautiful update :-) very nice story propracceing :-) it ws a perfect combo of hard profnssional life n romantic personal life :-) plz dnt make it cheezy love story, it ws perfect :-) love mayur a lott...bt wht happend to sam?why he hiding that? Continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update love mayur scene
and u also get well soon

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