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Kajal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Wow a new FF the prologue was super interesting

Waiting for the update... Cont.soon

Thanks for the PM

❤️ Prachi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Part 1

The Girl was Geet Handa n the Lady was her Mom Rano Handa

Next Morning

4 o'clock

The closed door opened n went to take a bath in the cold freezing water n then got ready in a simple jeans n full selves t-shirt.

Then washed the plate in which she had eaten last night as always just to stay awake away from the frighting dreams n visions.

Geet took off to a journey which she used to take since last 6 months to the nearby lake which was as always abonded n she got the peace of mind sitting by the lake.

Geet's House

7 o'clock

Rano entered the kitchen n saw Geet's plate washed n Thanked God that she has eaten something n went about to make Tea for Mohinder ,Naintara n herself as she knew that Geet will not be at home n will come back only in the evening n will be sitting by the lake just staring at the water.

Mohinder-"Rano,meri Chai kaha haii? Pichalee Che mahine se tum hamesha late hojathi hoo.Kya hogaya hai tujhe"

Rano-"Aayii jiii, aab mein kya karoo phele Geet tho mere adhee kaam karthii takii mein abki fav Chai banaluu par aab tho mujhe hii apkii Maharani Naintara ko bhi uthana tha"

Mohinder-"Tum kyun hamesha merii ladliyon ke piche kyun padii rehthi hoo"

Rano-"Mein kaha apki ladliyon ke piche padii rahe thi huu????"

Mohinder-"Kyun bhul gayiii jab Geet thik thi tab uske piche Xam ke liye padoo aur pura din electricity waste karthe hoo aur kuch kaam hii nahi karthi wageraa wageraa bolke mein bachii ko pareshan karthi thii aur aab kuch bol thii hii nahii hooo" n both had tears in their eyes seeing hw helpless they felt not being able to do anything for their child n leave finding a solution they didn't even know her problem.

Naintara seeing tears in her parents eyes decided to lighten their moods.

Naintara-"That's not fare Papa apne sirf mom ke dii par horahe tortures mom ko ginvayee mere tho ginvayee hii nahi meri tho sirf Geet dii haii joo hamesha mujhe iss tortures Mom se bachathi haii"

Rano-"Ohhh tho mein tortures Mom huu... rukh tuu mein tujhe nahi chodungii..."n started running behind Naintara n seeing this Mohinder was laughing n Just Geet was missing from the picture.

Precap-Geet ke liye Ristha'.

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Edited by rsroopali - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

interesting update...

story is still not clear...what happen to Geet? why she is behaving so?...what type of parents she have that they let go her alone for whole day in this condition?

thanx for pm