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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello Gyus im back n this time abit quick…thnks for loving the previous part..

Chapter : 5

Lets go..

Stepping out if the car they proceed to the most nearby stall owner

Nupur: kal yaha ek aabharan( kidnp) hoa hai, ap ny unlogo ki shakal yaad hai

Man: nhi humain kuch yaad nhi

Samrat: dekho humari madad kero warna muskil tumhain hi hogi..he said a bit like a tpical police wala..n nupur ask him to relax

Nupur: dekhain ap ko kuch koi nhi kahay ga

Man: hum ny kiya kisi ny un ki shakal nhi dekhi…

Thy tried but he refused to co operate….the went to next man

Man: sehab woh 8 loog thay , 2 ek bike per….

Us larkay ki car waha se arahi thi….do bike bechy se aai..aur do aagy se aur rukh liya.phir in hony ny hawa mein fire kiya aur hum sab yaha se hat gay…...phir goli k awaz aai dobara hum samjhy us larkay ko mar diya….per phir ek car aai aur us larkay ko lay gi

Nupur: un mein se kisi ka chehra dekha apny

Man: nhi sehabab….woh sab k moo kuch ajeeb thy

Samrat" matlab…

Man: buhat kalay kalay thy..jasy kuch laga raha hoo..aur ankho per kuch band rekha tha…

Nupur: car kaun se thi us k no. yaad hai…

Man: nhi sehab itni pershani mein no kasy yaad hoga, us ki taraf tum mera dayhan bhi nhi gaya….car…woh jo samny hai na …kaali asi safad(white) thi…woh samny wali

Nupur: ap k buhat shukria…

Samrat: toyata…car k no. pata chal jata tu

Nupur: aur tujhy lagta hai woh sahi hota…99% chori ki cars hoti hai use…

Samrat: true…aao agay bhi pochty hain

Man2 : woh vickey roz yahin se jatay thy..

Samrat: tumhain kasy pata..

Man2: subha jatay waqt woh pasay daytay thy aur atay waqt mjhy se pan lay ker jatay thy..un ko mera pan buhat pasand thy…un ko kuch hogaya kya

Nupur: nhi ….hum bus un ki security k liyan route check ker rahy hain….aur kuch jo tum mjhy bata sakoo

Man2: han woh bol rahy thy ….kal se un k driver laay gay pan…

Samrat: kyun….

Man2: yeah tu nhi pata sehab…per unhony kaha tha k un ko ab apna route badlna hai….

Nupur: sukria

Samrat and nupur went to there car , n got back to bureau….

Nupur: everybody to the conference room …she shouted

She opened the door of his cabin…

Mayank….yeah kaha hai…..

She step in his cabin…n found her movement restricted

Mr mayank sharam…yeah office hai…

Mayank: mrs Sharma mein ny kab mana kiya..he was hugging her from back…

Nupur: to conference room..case k details discus kerni hai…

Mayank: subha subha mjhy akelay chor ker chali gai ap..raat mein bhi tumhain maa any bacha liya..…very bad…

Aur ab conference room….

Nupur: ap ko pata nhi tha k mjhy subha surveillance per jana tha…..phir

Mayank: han tu mein ny kab mana kiya hai ….per ap ek cheez bol gain….

Nupur : mayank chor office hai…..

Mayank: jitni jadli mjhy meri morning kiss milay gi utni jadli ap conference room jay gi..warna koi na koi humain bolany aay ga..aur asy pay ga..phir kya hoga nupur

Nupur: mayank tum season 1 walay hi thik tu..kcuh zayada nhi hogaya….her update mein

Mayank: tumahin pata hai k changing character logo ko kafi pasand hai….aur tum ko yeah bhi pata hai k tum kuch bhi kerlo im nt spare u…so pls do the honors….

He turned her around n she placed her hand around her neck…gringly he proceed to her, n captured her ..while she griped his hairs …

Broking apart she smile to see him..

Mayank: y ur smiling….

Nupur: khud ko dekho tu….she chuckled…

Wiping his lips off….she grin n winked to him n went away from his cabin

Damit…he made his messed hairs….looking in his PC screen

Benji: itni dair kyun lagi bhabi aany mein …woh bhi pati k cabin semischievously

Nupur: she glared at him ….can we concentrated on case

Samrat: ab yeah mayank kaha hai ….

Nupur: yaar kiya hai tum sab bhi na..benji ja bhi un maha sahy ko bolo…

Mayank: doont need to ma'am….im here…can u proceed pls….

Nupur : thnku

Oki so here is the whole location map….

From here vickey take this route evrday

Benji: to where

Mayank: I thnk office, his office is at the off link road…so this is the most convenient way to go

Nupur:

The triangles are the stall, tht day as soon as he came from the down road n turn left, two bikes from back…n two from the either side of road came n block his way…

Mayank: but it's a high crowded road

Samrat: for tht thy did fire in air, n evry1 got out of there, n thn thy shout the guard, n took Vicky from the car ,

Benji: but here is no car

Nupur: thy car came after thy killed the guard, and than they took him away

Mayank: do we know the car no..

Nupur: no, it was a white toyata corolla…thts all we knew..

Samrat: 2003 model, as per the person showed us …

Benji: I think we need to talk to her family…

Nupur: ya cause there was a thing the pan wala said, was he was planning to change the route .

Mayank: wht..meaning he may be knowing had thread to his life….

Samrat: yup..plus we need to meet his sister..why I my thinking she might have sum clues….

Benji: tu us ki behan k pechay kyun parha hai ..han..han..

Samrat: teri shadi keray gay..

bneji: chalo bhi chalo ..bhabi se milny chalein tum logo ki…taiyari kerlo…mein khurana k damad bany wala hoon…he said correcting his shirt…cum on get up..nupur call anty woh sahgun k intezaam kerain..

Samrat looked up to GOD in pls bachalo look…while nupur chukled n place her hand on his shoulder teling I understand , while mayank grip benji's collar n threw him out of conference room..Laughingly

………

Mayank: hello, we r from CSI, we want to meet vickey's family for investigation purpose, if u can pls gave us todays appointment

Secretary: sure sir, I'll get back to u in few moments

Nupur: kiya musibat hai..in k beta kidnap hoa hai aur yeah log itna chill ker rahy hain…..

Had hai

Mayank: pata nhi strange ….lets meet them ..shayad kuch pata chal jay…strange tu hoga, yeah politician k case hai aur buhat kuch strange honay wala hai….

Nupur: phew…hmm…

Fax….oh gr8 unhony permission fax ki hai , kiya style hai….chalo sham mein un k ghar….

Government is failing to much, previously our beloved defense minister was killed, and now the young and honest politician from whom the youth has so much of hopes, has been kidnap. The questions arise , if govt can't protect its VIPs wht its gonna do with public, Miss khurana also claimed tht it's a major conspiracy against the political future ofKhuran's, she even held a press conference…

Ms khurana y ur saying tht it's a conspiracy

Ms khurana: cause whn bhai got clues for the murder he was kidnapped, and plus govt and it agencies have failed to arrest the culprit, even after a year, I donot think there can be any other reason other than negligence

Benji: yaar yeah interesting hai.

Nupur: hmm ..yeah tu hai….she look so pale

Benji: hmm..maybe trauma ..emotional one..

Nupur: han but she is having difficulty in speech ….khair

Chalo kal mayank is going to interrogate her ….evrythng will be cleared..

She continue closely watching the video with benji..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
API...
awesome update...
loved it lodsss...
ap toh bilkul CID ki script writer ban gayi hain...by God!!!
i sooo loved it...
it was awesome part...
n d romantic bit was so full on tadka in it...
waise mujhe toh season 1 ka Mayank pasand tha...
bt iss season wala Mayank toh aur bhi jyada pasand hain...By God!!!
loved dem lodsss...
beautifully written Api as alwaysss...
love u...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update as usual...loved it...😛
Edited by -ridionasis- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very chotusa part
nice one😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
It wa sa nice update.I really liked Mayank's changed character.Loved mayur moments.
thnx for pm😊
Edited by mayurlove - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnku so much

Originally posted by: kirti123

very chotusa part

nice one😊

thnks alot
chotsa😭..it was 5 pages at word

Originally posted by: mayurlove

It wa sa nice update.I really liked Mayank's changed character.Loved mayur moments.

thnx for pm😊

thnks dear..
hmm so u liked mayank,
ofcorse u all will be ..was missing romance in season 1 na😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing Fizu di...Mayur moments were really good
and light romantic one😛😳 poor Mayank...kya karey
jab wife bhi police wali ho toh..romance ka time kahan😆
the case is becoming interesting with each update...
and figure was good,u are putting so much efforts
to make each n every bit so clear...I really appreciate 👏👏👏

do cont soon.
Edited by --Ruchi-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely updt fiza
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb update
Love it
thanks fOr pm
or Ha Mujha ye change mayank zada pasand ha
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fabulous part Fiza loved the moments of Mayur thanks hun for the pm

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