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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

nice update

you know everytime i saw ufone investigation wala add mujhe csi ki yaad aa jati hai😆😆😆😆
iss case ki bohot si baatein ek important case se milte hain
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i am again loving this story, wonderful part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
amazing update...i loved the way how benji described Mayan's trip.
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

awesum update👏pls cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
interesting case
nice prt😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
lovely update
so the whole CSI gang came together...luved it

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Posted: 14 years ago
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woww fiza i m loving it pata hain?beautifully written...😃 i always crave 4 WWU and this one...!! truely exiting and it energies my mind and heart fully once after completing the reading process...!! 😳

cant wait 4 mayur intimate moments as i m sure u wil include it frequently 😛

luv u 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
awesome part api...
loved it...
sooo CSI is back wid a bang han!!!!!
m loving it...
loved it lodsss...
love u...🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
very nice update Fiza.

too good ... very beautifully written.

love sanu bonding ... they are so cute ... adorable.

love benji alottt ... he is mindblowing ...



i just rofled while reading...

u r too good fiza ... hats off to you...

ye baat sach hai ... jab aam admi ki baat ati hai to aisa seriousness nahi hota hai ... pata nahi kyun aise seriousness nahi hoti ...

ab kaam pe lag jao bhai ... CSI on work ...

waiting for next updte

continue soon.


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Posted: 14 years ago
#90

Thnaku so much for all of ur lovly coments. I know CSI is not meant to be this late, now it will not, hopefully. It will be a regular updater now.

And pls this case is a pure fiction..

N CONGRATS TURTLE(MAHA) ON CPMPLETING ONE YR..JANI…

N FARU JANU PLS GET WELL SOON.MISS YA ….

Benji I need all accounts details , of whole family, any precious kidnapping , doing so join sami to help him…..

Me n Nupur, his fathers case wht information u can get n have we want…

But all this today….i know its late night but I want this case tht u all work day night n take as challenge ..n we need to solve it ASAP….

WHAT

Mayank: sorry but we need to get atleast a plot thn u can go n rest…..

Samrat: but is waqt ek cheez hai tum jo bhol rahy hoo

Mayank: kiya ….

Benji: imagination tumhari…..

Mayank: shut up yaar…..

Nupur: tum kuch bhol rahy hoo

Benji: uff bhabi k arman k tu kyal kero

Nupur: benjiii…….we need to talk to people around, n need sketches of people if by chance they remember n have seen them

Samrat: yes

Mayank: oh freak…sorry yaar mera deemgh zara kam kam ker raha hai…chaloo..he prees his neck and than was about to stand

Samrat: tu yaha k kam sabhal, mein aur nupur jatay hain benji tujhy asssit ker lay ga

Benji: yup…wasy tu aj rest kerlay…subha se kam shooro kerlay

Mayank: nhi nhi …im fine..

Nupur: ab woh nhi soay ga …case agaya hai…..ab tu mayank ACP jag gaya

Mayank: agr mein apni biwi se bach gay tu….

Nupur: muskil hai

Benji: hum sab yahin hai pls control…..

Nupur: tu hum ny kiya kaha

Mayank: han ….aur apko pata hai k mein kisi baray mein baat ker raha hoon..islyn mein ghar hi nhi ja raha

Nupur: tu woh kam mein yaha nhi kersakti kiya

Benji: pls …..kasi baatein keraty ho tum loog….mjhy sharm ati hai..itni adult talk

Mayank: nupur don't u dare do tht…

Nupur: tu jao ghar n rest..else mein yaha bhi tumhari coffee mein pills dal sakti hoon …she said putting her hand on waist …..

Mayank: na ker yaar pls….kal paka I'll rest .

Samrat: pils….wht…

Mayank: ji..yeah meri coffe mein sleeping pils daal dayti hai…had hai yaar..soch…he said wincing

Benji n Samrat: broke in to laugh…my god nupur this perfect, man nobody can do it to him..sach mein sirf tum hi is ko handle ker sakti hoo..

Nupur: aur nhi tu kiya, kam hai samhj ata hai magar is k yeah matlab hai ek insaan pagal hoja, God ny subha kam k lyan aur raat aram k lyan bani hai, magar yeah tu alien hai na….

Mayank: nupuuur…..Ms bhushan go to the crime scne to do the need full

Nupur: yes sir..sadu….chal sami….yeah hopeless case hai….

….

It was late in night so they banged there head, not remembering it , most of the people n stall owners around the road side where not there, some of them where..

Samrat: bhai sehab….he shook one of the man , humain ap ki thori madad chaiy..

Man: ji bolain

Samrat: aj subha yaha ek admi ko mara hai aur ek ko kidnap kiya hai ..ap ny kuch dekha

Man: nhi nhi hum ny kcuh nhi dekha

Nupur: dekhain, apka nam nhi aay ga, ap ghabray nhi…jo kcuh dekh woh batein…

Man: dekh bhabi, mein tu woh samny wali road per hota hon, mein ny sirf itna dekha tha, ek car ko 4 bikes ny rukh, aur phir fire k awaz aai, bs….yaha do teen aur tahly waly ghary hotay hain , ap subha un se poch lyna..

Samrat: kitny bajy tak atay hain …..

Man: subha 7 bajy tak

Nupur: shukriya….

Yaar yeah sab mjhy bhabi ki boltay hai

Samrat: he chukled …kyun kiya problem hai bhabi…..

Nupur: pata nhi …kuch weird lagta hai…..khair 4 bikes per…per us k lay ker kasy gay bike per tu nhi lay ja sakty

Samrat: hosakta hai koi car bhi hoo…subha jaldi ana hoga, is admi k un logo ko inform kerny se pehly, daar se kahin woh loog gayab n hojay…

Nupur: yes ur write….chalo….ab tu kal se hi progress shooro hogi…

….

Mayank yaha raat ki wajah se koi nhi hai, subha hi kuch hosakta hai,

Mayank: thik hai…tu kal miltay hai subha…

Nupur: pati dev ghar ajay ap sharafaat se….

Mayank: biwi hum wahi per hain..kab …ap aay tu….cya…

At home

Mayank: kab se apki rah mein palaky bechay bhaita hain…aay aay..andar aay

Nupur: mayank .wah …by GOD tum zara trainings per jatay raha kero

Mayank: shabash..waha mein apko miss kerta raha …aur tum mjhy wapas bahj rahi hoo..how mean wifey..

Nupur: chukled….tu tum itny filmi hero ki tarah baat kero gay tu asay hi hoga…

She said placing her hands on his shoulder from back…n he was walking infornt…

Mayank: sach mein ..yeah mjhy kya hoagya hai…kasi weird aur chess baatein kerta hoon..yuck..

Nupur: hay mera sadu…chalo rest.kero…

Mayank: aray hatoo…abhi mera koi mood nhi SONAY k…

Nupur: really…per mjhy tu buhat neend arhi hai…yawn…good nite mayank…

She said moving infront of him…

Mayank: haina nupur..i should have a good nite..abhi batata hoon tumahin tu..he run after her….

Nupur: haha sorry….imagine keroo….

Next day:

It was 6 in morning when nupur n samrat was on site. phir

Siting in the car they made n mark all the spots in the map, positioning evry stall, n evey cabin around…

Samrat was stretching his arms…

Nupur: kiya hua raat ko soya nhi kiya….

Samrat: soya tha yaar..per pata nhi phir bhi neend arahi hai…

Nupur: mein ny suna hai tu colloge mein buhat masti kerta tha…teri girl frnds bhi hoti thi..tu ab kiya hua…

Samrat: mayank…mar kahay ga woh meray hath se…yaar woh cologe tha ab life itni busy hai k bs…kisi cheez k lyan time hi nhi, aur girl frnds maintain kerna buhat baar kam hai….ek min kabar dayna..aur masti mein kisi ko apny sath attch kerlayn …but kakma us ki life danger mein dalna..

Nupur: oye tu tu kiya zindagi bhar asay hi rahy ga…

Samrat: tum apni behan k rishta lai ho meray layn

Nupur: kash meri beahn hoti ….tu shadi ker wa ker hi dam layti teri…

Samrat: he chukled…oye cabins are opening lets goo…

Nupur: idea acha hai Samrat meri cousin se mila hai na tu weeding party per…kasi thi

Samrat: nupur…tum pagal hogai hoo…he laughed…

And they proceed to the cabins…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago

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