FF: Do Lafzon mein ye bayaan na ho paaye Ch39Pg120 - Page 87

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Posted: 14 years ago

Loved the chapter

I loved the kesar and gulaal scene at the end and cant wait for your update
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Posted: 14 years ago
res😊
Prachurya,loved the chapter.the scene between Talli and Kesar was so good and it was done tastefully.I hope this is the end of the Talli chapter. coming to my fav scene-the one between Gulaal and Kesar,loved Kesarji's dialogues in this one.Gulaal it's still not too late.open your eyes and smell the coffee😭that romantic moment towards the end was beautiful😳loved it a lot.I guess Gulaal doesn't know about Kesar leaving.Her reaction and the subsequent confrontation would be fun to read.thanks for this lovely update.looking forward to the next one eagerly😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
talli talli talli what can be done she is such a jerk and i m so glad he rebuked her harshly i so enjoyed it thanks alot i really love this scene more than any romantic scene wicked naa...😛...ok now gulaal admitting the fact that he is most important person in her life was ahh so so so cute bacha so badly needed this confrontation and then she falling on him yay par itne jaldi kyu bhaag gaayi hubby par fall hui aur wanhi hang ho jaati who was complaining but gulaal is galool a perfect dubloo but chalo me know happy days are not far away thanks a lot for ur lovely update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very nice update👏...arey tu phir se Talli ko sahi jagah dikha diya..I loved it,,and Gulaal ko talli aur Kesar ki proximity dekhkar irritation hua...Good...and above all thank u so much for updating...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb chappie prachu..👏👏n ye kya yahan tho talli ne tho molestesh ka roop le liya...😆but kesu's backfire was too good..👏..n yeayyy..dono ek chatth ke neeche agaye..😛..lubed h u narrated d gullu's pain..n d last wala trip n catch..tho mind blowing tha..😳😳..par ithna chotu chappie.n woh bhi thurs day ko update..😕jaldi lavo yaar..😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow prachu 🤗, so fantastic chapi after so many days, aray whr vr u yar???? 😳 loved the chapi n specially the GK scenes n loves how kesar got rid of talli per me feel sad for her also but she should understand that if he doesnt love her so she cant force him for it, but yaar stair scene k baad gulaal aise ran away 😲 ab kya hoga 😲 y is she always putting a barrier between herself n her feelings, i really really want her to confess her feelings to herself n kesar 😃 ufff kesar khud hi samajh jaye kisi tarah, yeh gulaal ji toh pata nahi kab bolen gen 😆 thursday kab ayega, waiting for the chapi so impatiently 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Prachu I hope this is Talli ka last pakau scene😉,yaar isko itna space mat de,chal tu hamesha uska pura dublu bana deti hai isliye it's ok…..Waise what was she doing trying to run down Gullu in front of Kesar, bechari ke pas loan se liya hua Gullu ka dimag bhi nahi hai na is FF main……I am so happy Kesar told her off in no uncertain terms and declared his inability to fall for any other women so explicitly, I know he had to do these again after MB's birthday party, Talli ke liye itna to karna hi padta hai……😆

So Gullu madam abhi bhi ostrich bani hui hai,Kesar has special place in her life😲 oh really ,can she define this special space?I hope she opens her eyes before it's too late🤢…and Kesar aww! He is just perfect isn't he ? Patient, sensible, caring, charming and oh so loving…aisa shyad hi duniya main koi aur ho😳….yes I am talking about fiction! eagerly awaiting next update….Thank you for a lovely chappi🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
Haila teri chappi toh shuru hone ke phale hi khatam ho gayi.Anyways i liked how talli was given a dressing down by kesar & the last part was very romantic,ab jaldi se update kar
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Posted: 14 years ago
Prachu..tu jhappi pa.🤗.tune talli ko phir se bash kiya..me superlikes.😛..oh show k time uski battisi todne ka man tha mera...prachu..ostrich gullu to blind bhi hai..she cannot see how much she loves him...kya kahun..superb chappi..mujhe wo trip and fall wala scene pasand aya..pls update soon...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
LATE LATIF Aagayi
Prachu tune yeh likha kasam se ...
wow you left me speechless... 😕
i just loved it you cant believe how much i appreciate your writing and this FF i think is the BEST thing that has happend to you well i think so god noes what you think 😃😉😆😛
i lubb it BHERRY BHERRY BHERRY much
Update soon

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