^THE JADED PRINCE^-{MANEET FF} next thread pg 151 - Page 21

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Posted: 14 years ago
hai

this is some weird
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PART 21


G-I can kill you now...

She says pulling the knife out of the fruit bowl with a murderous expression...which actually looks funny on her face

M-Why don't you give it try?

He says not moving an inch from his lazy pose

G-Well , a girl can murder and even rape and a man can also be nice

M-A girl can to a weak and innocent. I am not innocent or weak

G-I just believe in one thing, what happens in life, happens for the best

She concludes with her usual optimism

M-Sure...I never complained.. i earned good money and got out when i was young and started my own business

G-You actually...you were kidding right...your mama shouldn't have allowed you to...

She is still unable to believe him

Maan turns his bleak eyes to her

M-My mamma was long dead: and don't bring her up again if you are so curious you should have asked before marriage I don't want to talk about it any more

He shuts down at his mamma's name and pushes her away conversation

G-No mama...uncle !

M-My mama found me later...plus I was bringing in money...why stop? It's just another form of work

She looks down

G-I don't know... I was thrown out of house because of my scandal


She informs with her sad eyes, the pain still pierces her heart

M-Ironic isn't it? A man can do pretty much what he wants behind closed doors and no one says a thing..

He says bitterly

G-Hmm...I guess it was my fate. I was the one who was stupid. I shouldn't have believed [her lips slightly quiver]

M-You were innocent I think, more than stupid...

He says while he feels so tired and jaded, it had been a tiring day.

G-I hope it would have been you instead of him

She comments a bit dreamily

M-What?! ???????

He sits up instantly with a hard frown

G-What? [she says normally] Did I say something wrong?

M-You are ... you are...You just don't say anything for both our goods.

G- hmm? [she looks blankly at him, not understanding anything]

M-Jeez! What were you even thinking before saying that! You are ...you don't know what you are saying

He finished jerkily

G-I wasn't thinking anything...what did I say that you are reacting in this manner?

M-Nothing... just nothing.

G-Huh?

M-You are stupid that's all

G-No I am not! [she protests] I just praised you... and you...

M-Praise?!

There are prominent lines on his forehead as he frowns hard

G-I just meant I wish you would have been my boyfriend as you are much more understanding. What's so wrong with that?

M-It's a praise that I should have slept with you and left you?

G-What???????? No

She gasps while he snaps at her

M-I am not boyfriend material!! You crazy woman!

G-Don't call me crazy!

Maan gets up incredulous at what she is saying. How could anyone want him for his personality? He thinks.

M-Fine. I won't just go to sleep then.

G-Huh? You won't go to sleep?

M-I am going out.

G-It's late [she protests]

Maan walks out to the balcony

G-Listen

M-What?!

G-I am sorry...if I said anything wrong...I am indeed an idiot ...you are right [she pouts]

M-You just don't understand things...you are not... you had one scandal Geet... I created scandals for 5 yrs...when I say, I know I not something then I am not.

Remya_Pillai thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum...
geet s so innocent na...
maan cant accept dat he cares 4 her..
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Posted: 14 years ago
hai

this is awesome and great
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update... Didn't know that geet had a boyfriend and she had spent a night with him... Which she's calling 'creating a scandal' and why did maan get angry?.. I thought maan didn't know about geet's past but i was wrong how does he know about it?
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!
I like the fact that maan is straight forward!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago




part dear..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update...hehe last part is so funny geet thinks d she can ill maan...plz continue soon..

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