IPKKND FF:Tearing Ourselves Apart Parts 1-26 :)

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AquaBluez17

@AquaBluez17

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#371

whoa! you sure know how to shock your readers!!

though I am so sure this is a dream! haha well we will see :D

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Supna9

@Supna9

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Posted: 14 years ago

#372

I think it is just a bad dream so plz cute update soon with some nice moments plz. Wesey its nice update just joking na . N next update should be cute na

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mimi

@moon_mine

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#373

pls update soon!!!!!!

wat happened to arnav????

pls pls pls update soon!!!!

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#374

fabulous update!!

plzz plzz let the end be a dream and arnav caring for a scared khushi!!

continue soon!

thank you so much for the pm!

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nyxx

@nyxx

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#375

Omg Im really hoping that the ending bit was a dream!! It has too bee! I wanna kill that scumbag Shyam...How dare hee?!?! As for Arnav and Khushi, i loved how craddled Khushi in his arms and let her fall asleep..theyre both just so serenly protrated here...minimal dialogues, but yet theyre small actions are so nicely intensified..its perfect! Loved this part..and im sure once Khushi wakes up scared, we're going to witness some nice ArHi momentss i hopee!

Continuee soon Hayley!

- Dee

Edited by nyxx - 14 years ago

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i_luv_arshi

@i_luv_arshi

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#376

i loved it..hope the original serial script writer takes a glimpse at this... u r truly awesome and a born writer

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hershii

@Smileyface

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#377

yes i know i already commented once...but i wanna comment again to say...UPDATE AGAIN PLEASEEE!!! like right now =D I want to readdd onnn for some awesome ArHi moments <3333

xox

hershi

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#378

Goodness, how could you stop there? i was so into reading the sequence, tht when my mom called me i literally jumped out of my skin. Its a dream sequence ryt? to be honest it was quite scary at the end. love the way you wrote Arnav's emotions. Thanks for the pm.

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rozina

@rozinab

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Posted: 14 years ago

#379

Thanks for the PM Hayley! What can i say, your update was amazing as always! im sorry for commenting so late but it was a nice treat for me to read two updates together! They were both fabulous and i loved reading them.

😳😳 arnav is shooo sweet! the way they both fell asleep was so cute!

😲😲 OMG i really hope that was khushis dream! that kamina shyam pops up everywhere!