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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
awesumesttt
lovely👏👏👏👏
thanks 4 the pm
superb update
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow starting was awesome
mayur married and romance was wow
waiting for the next part😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fizu what beautiful start hun awesome work EID Mubarak sis 🤗 thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yepieee new season🥳
welcome back ji...
loved the introduction and first part😳
samrat forensic off this time...
and loved Mayur private hubby-wifey
convo😳

do cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
fan of your work loved the new season please pm me next time😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowww fiza amazing to say the least...!! mayur romance...haye 😍 love u so much...thanx a ton 4 coming up with the sequel...😳🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47

Thnku so much for ur comments…UR EXPECTATIONS ARE TOO HIGH MAKING ME TOO NERVOUS…hope I fulfill them…the strt 2 chapters are of wht has happened to there lifes thn the case will strt fully…

A VERY HAPPY EID DAY TO U ALL…MAY GOD BLESS U ALL

PARDN EROORS..

Chapter: 2

Things have changed yes they have, after all we have taken a leap of a year. So the impossible has happened, yes its has. But it was not that so simple not at all.

For nupur getting in relation was still not a piece of cake, moreover she was still a bit a reluctant. Mayank was too patient about all this. He has no problem in all that, he has her beside him he has whole world with him. Plus with her he to found a mother he missed so much.

Mayank: nupur yeah sochna , shanty, khamoshi, mjhy suit kerta hai…tumhain kiya hoa..

Nupur: kuch nhi…how can u be so patient n non demanding….u donot mind it

Mayank: lo…it's a gentleman promise ma'am….tum tension kyun lay rahi ho..chill kero….n donot worry abt me..i have u..bus

As for nupurs comfort he said she can take as much time she wants, he will never ask her to get married. But things went off different when nupur was off for her training for 2 months….

Returning back meeting ever1, it was 3am in morning, but sleep was far away from her, to restless, n understanding nthing she did wht she found right…

Nupur: pick up the phone

Mayank: nupur …kiya hoa…any case call…he was half sleep while talking

Nupur: I want u here right now

Moving away from his pillow he looked at the time piece

Mayank: kya hua..sab thik hai…kuch hua…ur ok

Nupur: han ..pata nhi…bs I want u here right now…any problem

Mayank: cuming…

Rashing outside his house, praying evrythng is fine, knowing there job and the danger associated with it , he was fearing too much…

Standing outside the door , he thought to press the bell, but thn text her..puting his gun out, n loading it, he stood a bit side away at the door…

But as nupur open the door..she looked infornt and than at side..

Nupur: side per kyun gayr hoo…andar aao

Saying so she left the door open n went in her room, mayank was standing there dumb fold, wht exactly this girls is upto, being in relation with her, has been the biggest unsolved mystery for him..he chuckled at the thought

Lets solve it….

Siting in her balcony on floor, he to accompany him, n with an impulse, she encircled his arm with her, n rested her head his shoulder, he was surprise moreover a bit worried

Mayank: putting his head on her, spreading his hand on her hairs…..hey…kya hua…

Nupur: kuch nhi ..

Mayank: nupur asay kyun behave ker rahi hoon , bolona….

Nupur: mein asay rahoon tu koi problem hai ..

He didn't said anything n let her be like tht for sum time…he knew she will speak herself

Nupur: cant u be like this….

A smirk appear at his face, knowing what exactly she is feeling….as he was feeling this when she was talking to him on call, here when she came n the way she hugged him…but with all that has happened between them one thing hasent changed they cant stop pulling each other legs….

Mayank: kasay, yaha asy ..pagal ho gai …mein naukari kerta hoon, khana khata hoon, asay nhi bhat sakta….kafi tiring hai yeah…uncomfortable bhi…..feeling back strain yaar

Nupur: uffu mayank tumhain khabi koi baat seedhi tarah samjh nhi ata …

Mayank: seedhi seedhi baat tum tu kerati nhi, tum ny yeah kaha k mein asy nhi rah sakta tu

Nupur: I mean hum

Mayank: tum bhi….not possible nupur..tum bhi tu department tu band hojay ga…han Samrat can earn a promotion

The anger of nupur was raising n mayank was loving..it

Nupur: mayank….kya hum 24/7 ek sath nhi rah saktay ….

Mayank: ur offering me to live in…he leaned closed n asked with a naughty glint..nupur really…..

Nupur: fumbling with words…nhi….aa…nhi ..mein ny yeah kab kaha

Mayank: tu…tu kiya kaha

Nupur: she winnced n cross her leg, tumhain pata hai mein kya bol rahi hoon

Mayank: mjhy kuch nhi pata ….he smiled n leaned forwrd…..

Nupur: oki fine, Mr. Mayank Sharma will u marry me….

Mayank: ary ACP bhushan….is tht even a question…abhi chalein

Nupur: han chalo….mama se tum baat ker gay but

He droped his jaw….

Mayank: ur serious

Nupur: tumhain mein mazak kerti nazar arhin hoon

He laugh out loud…

Mayank: wah ..im so loving it, Ms nupur bhushan…..he pulled her closed….itni jadli hai…

Nupur: she hugged him…han…he chukled ..n embrace her more close…

Mayank: kya confession tha, kya proposal hai, kya story hai…wah….he said dramatically…

N we r nt getting married here..

Nupur: y….

………..

Suhani: bhai tumhari shadi hai….u need to wear it

Mayank: mein kya larki hoon jo dupata pehano

Benji: tu gat bandhan kasay keray gay….ek kam kertay hai tere kurta bandahy gay

Samrat: han perfect, phir tum dono sack race ki tarha ujhala ujhal k pehray layana…

The all laugh out loud

Mayank: haha,…very funny …hogaya…tu tab lay loo ga..but abhi nhi pehno ga…

Suhani; ajeeb insane ho…ek tu shadi , out of country rekhi, kisi ko nhi bolaya…

Mayank: ksis ko kiya nhi bolaya…sab tu hain, I have my family with me…aur kiya chaiy….

Benji: he pretends to weep, emotional kerdiya…

Samrat: buhat chalak hai yeah, honeymoon k lyan zara bhi wait nhi kerna paray ga..

Mayank: shut up……. agar Mumbai ya Delhi mein shadi hoti tu tum logo nhi…. press hoti humary as paass..

Samrat: true….nupur kaha hai

Suhanai: aj un ki shdi hai ready tu hoany do….

Nupur: kya yaar kitni dair lag tay hoo tum loog tayar hony mein…

Dressed in a simple shalwar kameez, she was standing on the door, crossing her arms..

Mayank: lo …mjhy suna rahy thy woh dekho….

Suhani: errr….nupur tumhari shadi hai …uffu..tum dono k kuch nhi hoskata..kam se kam sardi hi wear kerlay ti

Nupur: sari I cant….aur kiya thik tu lag rahi hoon ..haina…he asked him n he showed a thumbs up….she whistled a bit….wasy not but Sharma achy kasay handsom lag rahy hoo…

He smiled a bit embarrassed true she is a single piece….

Lo aur shramtay bhi hoon….

Mayank: don't worry, I'll give u more reason to blush dear….

Waooohooo….

They all teased them n it made nupur a bit blush…

Mayank: where is mom…

NM: hum yaha hai..chalein

…..

Reaching the mandir

Time to make her wear war maal n she was a pain..

As soon as he was about to put it….she moved left side..whn he moved tht side she moved right…..back for….

Mayank: Nupur….plss…..is ko pakaro koi….

Samrat and banji where laughing out loud….wht a life they are gonna live together…..

Trying running away from mandib saying she has changed the plan to get married

Nupur: chor yaar mayank bad mein shadi keray gay…

Mayank: tum baad mein kerna mein tu abhi ker ga….saying so he picked her up in his arms n placed her down in mandab…..

Nupurs mom did the kanyandan….while suhani did the gad bandhan….peacefully taking pheras as he asked her too, almost pleaded…. they were now announced husband n wife…

YUPIii…they all shouted to wch mayank closed his ear…….

Samrat: hip..hip….

Huraayyy…….

Mayank: ufff…kitna shoor kertay yaar tum loog…bs pls….

Benji: shut up hum celebrate ker rahy hain…..pata nhi nupur ko phir yeah moqa milay na milya…..love is blind….bechari sadu k sath zindagi kasai jeeyay gi…..

Mayank: bechara mein …is ko kasay bardasht kero ga….

NM: agree..bechara mera beta…

Mayank: hain maa…

Nupur: haaa…party badlai apny….

Mayank: yes…..

Still there room has the most beautiful picture hanged enlarged….where mayank from a side is completely embracing nupur in his arm….from the other suhnai is embracing nupur n mayank….n behind her Samrat is trying hugging all..n at mayank's side is benji….laughing out loud almost making nupur squeeze in mayanks arms…..

…….

But among all of this still they have there responsibility on top most, thought they make there personal life suffer a lot, but this one thing they love the most….

After all yeah CSI hai …koi love story nhi..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
Im first to comment yipeee...
fab update and nupur jalo baad me shadi karte hai iwas like 🤣
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Edited by arjunratirocks - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: arjunratirocks

Im first to comment yipeee...

fab update and nupur jalo baad me shadi karte hai iwas like 🤣
EID MUBARK

thnks dear
actually u havent read the first season us mein nupur is se bhi zayda thi
thnks aloot
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fabulous update..

aur unki marruage ka sequense bhi amazing...

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