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Posted: 14 years ago
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madamji where is d update?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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5 hours left fr today 2 end... abhi ja abhi ja..update abhija...
update soon di
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran_28

madamji where is d update?



i m updating in few mins
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yippe!!! an update on its way..come soon..i m waiting fr u..thanks di
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi everyone!!How r u?? I would like to thank everyone for your comments...Here is the 1st part of my ss... Enjoy!

Part 1

Sunday means funday for everyone but for Prem Juneja it was a complete different story. Standing in front of the mirror and giving a last touch to his hairs, Prem Juneja was getting ready for the office, "Oh God 8 bajh gaye. Where is my tea? Ramu kaka meri chai kahan hai?"

Ramu kaka at once entered the room and said, "Prem baba ye lijiye appki chai. Maaf kijiyega thori si dair hogaye wo darasil."

Prem cut him off, "Dair hogaye app jante hain na ramu kaka ke mein waqt ki kitni qadir karta hun apko pata hai na waqt kisi ka intezaar nahin karta meine is waqt k peeche bhagte bhagte waqt ko apni mutthi mein qaadh karlia hai. Mere liye ek min bhi zaya karna gunaah ke barabar hai."

Ramu kaka said, "Maaf kijiye ka Prem baba ainda aisa nahin hoga. Neeche nashta lag gaya hai ap ajaye."

Prem nodded and went downstairs. Prem reached the dining table and sat on his chair. He was having his breakfast when Gayatri came to him and said, "Good morning Prem beta. I have made your favourite aloo ke paratha. Have it."

Prem said rudely, "No thank you I don't want to eat this."

Lalit said, "Prem behave yourself. She is your mother..."

Prem cut in, "Step mother bauji."

Lalit said, "PREM!"

Prem said, "Just by shouting my name won't change the reality bauji. Apni insay jab shaadi ki jab meri ma ko guzre huye sirf ek saal hua tha. Unki rooh kitna tarpi hogi."

Lalit said, "Prem Gayatri ne humesha tumse pyaar kia hai humesha tumhein ma ki mohabbat deni ki koshish ki hai its only you who is not accepting it. It's been 20 years now."

Prem said, "20 saal hojaye ya phir 40 saal I will continue hating her..."

He stopped when he saw his little siblings Preet and Veera coming downstairs.

Preet said, "Good morning PB. Itna sannata kyun hai yahan per. What's wrong?"

Prem just smiled, "Nothing Preet was just doing my breakfast. Ok I'll take my leave I m getting late. Bye!"

Preet and Veera together, "Bye!"

Prem Juneja was only 7 years old when his mother died and after one year of his mother's death his father married again, this had made Prem Juneja very sour. He hated Gayartri but she had done everything in her might to win Prem's heart for the past 20 years but he seemed adamant to accept her as his mother. Although he loved Preet and Veera and never considered them as his step brother and sister and can go to any extent to fulfill their wishes.

Prem was a self made person, when he was in his teens he started his own business parallel with his studies and became one of the successful businessmen. He is the dream of every girl but he was not at all interested in any of them he doesn't believe in love and marriage and consider it a crap.

On the other hand somewhere in the same city there lives Heer Maan which is completely contrast to Prem. Still covering under the comfortable blanket of hers she was sleeping dreaming about her cricket match.

Ashlesha her eldest bhabhi was waking her up, "Get up Heer! It's 8 am now. Come on sweetie."

Heer opened her eyes lazily and sit-up on her bed stretching her arms, "Good Morning bhabhi."

Ashlesha kissed her forehead and looked at her lovingly, "Heer please stop being so lazy. You're a girl jaan. Agar tumhari shaadi kisi aise larke ke saath hojaye jo har kaam waqt ke saath karta hoga to phir kia karogi. Bacha itni dair tak nahin soya karo waqt ki qadr karo pata nahin tumhein kaisa sasuraal mile waqt ka kuch pata nahin hota."

Heer hugged her and said, "Bhabhi ab bhi na. waqt ka mujhe pata hai kuch bhi pata nahin hota to kyun hum phir waqt ke peeche peeche bhagein kyun log waqt ko apni muthi main band karna chahta hain behtar nahin ke jo waqt chalraha hai hum ushi ke saath behjaye zindagi apni app he asaan hojayegi aur khubsurat lagegi."

Ashlesha just smiled and kissed her forehead, " Acha baba theek hai ab jaldi se tayyar hojah teri paltan aati he hogi. Aj Sunday hai na."

Heer hurriedly stood up, "Oh shit aj Sunday hai. Oh god aj to mera match hai Surrender ki team ki saath. Mein abhi tayar hokar aye bhabhi." And rushed to washroom to get ready for the day.

Ashlesha just giggled at her tactics.

Heer came to the dining table and hugged her three brother and her two bhabhis and sat on her seat to have her breakfast.

Maya said, "Aj meine Heer ke favourite aloo paratha banaye hain."

Heer smiled, "Really bhabhi you are the best."

Harman said irritatingly, "What sara credit Maya legaye idea mera tha. Ok."

Heer said, "App to bestest hain bhaiyya."

"Heer didi" they heard a roar from a bunch of Heer's best friends.

Manmeet said, "Lo agaye tumhare dost. Mujhe samajh nahin ati ye larki kuch mahinun mein 18 ki hojayegi aur abhi tak chotte bachun ke saath khilti hai."

Heer said, "Bhai bare hona ka matlab nahin hai ke mein un bachun ke saath nahin khel sakti. Acha ab mein jarai hun mera aj match hai. Bye everyone." She rushed outside and Maya shouted from behind, "Heer complete your breakfast first."

But Heer was already gone. Nihaal said, "Bhabhi ap jaanti hain na ke aj uska cricket match hai wo kisi ki nahin sunegi."

This was Heer Maan. She was everyone's laadli she was 10 years old when her eldest brother, Manmeet got married with Ashlesha and just after their marriage Balraaj and Teji passed away in a car accident. Her brothers (Manmeet, Harmaan and Nihaal) and bhabhis (Ashlesha and Maya) never let her feel depressed about it but the lost did left Heer a bit sad and at times she did miss them obviously they were her parents and she lost them at such a young age but she never made it obvious to her family. Everyone consider her very childish but deep down there was a mature Heer who could understand others emotions like no one can.

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That's it for today...Leave ur valuable comments

Love
Neha.
Edited by harshadeewani - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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maya harman ki biwi hai par ashlesha kiski? great part.. intro.. and cant wait till u get into the story!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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an update finally
finally finally finally here is the first chapter
thank u so much di for updating today thanks a lot... love u
the update was...
"prem juneja" actually the prem juneja
or the khadoos prem juneja.. so khadooss..
yeah may be a succesful person.. but speaks so rudely...
and what he has captured time???? how cool is that???
that too with his elders??? and time waste karna goona hai..
lovely atttitude stuffed with attitude the prem juneja

and gay3 prem's step mom???? and he dont like her???
is that the way 2 speak to her??? i mean may be a step mom
but she loves him so much??? that's y he is sadooo
looking at his behavious looks like hates her very much
and thank god atleast loved preet and veera... atleast some 1

heer is pari of the house i thnk... cute lillte one
angel of the house.. loved by every1 ...
hmm... so her all three bros love her a lot..
and has two bhabis also...
so maya married to harman that means ash to manmeet...
loved the way heer is loved by every1..and wow cricket???
super cute i also love playing..and she is really cute..
i love her.. two opposite people????
how are they gonna meeet????
omgeee
thank u for the update and the pm..thanks a lot di..thank u so much
for updating today..
love u...


Edited by vrushika - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
WOW . . . . great update.
Nice introduction, amazing.
I am really looking forward to the other chapters. . . . .

So this SS is going to be some what of the Opposites Attract kind. . . . I am going to love this one.
Love Heer's character, so beautiful and Prem is really rude bt I think deep down, he is very soft at heart. . . . . .

Keep writing. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Loved the starting.. really awesome!!!




Continue soon!!!
Thanks for the pm!!


Edited by zigzagway_sadi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
nice update yaar
the introduction part was awsm
eagerly waiting 4 Prem nd Heer 2 meet
cont soon pls
thanx 4 PM

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