IPKKND: Poolside Prayer (Completed)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Vsc94
[Oh, Please God hear our prayers and make this come true!

Please continue this...My humble prayer to you...from my poolside😉

Aww thank you. Not sure if I can continue it because I did originally write a second part but I wasn't happy with it so I never posted it :S

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Posted: 14 years ago

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I want it to happen. Let him be more possessive of Khushi.

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#53

Originally posted by: Bhavapriya
I want it to happen. Let him be more possessive of Khushi.

Hope we do get to see the possessive side one day!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: zenia
loved it... kaash serial mein mein bhi aisa hi kuch hota...
but newyas...u r there na...so koi tension nai...

plz pm me...

aur jaldi jaldi update karo...:)

Thanks for reading!

Edited by nayika - 14 years ago

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#55

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani
It was awesome as usual nayika.. Only you could do instant OS based on characters and now with scenes..

Very very good.. Wish something like this to happen in show.. I want Arnav to feel the same hurt which Kushi suffers because of his marriage proposal to La..!

Thanks for the PM!

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it :DD

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey everyone, this is part 2 that I wrote originally and I wasn't too happy with it. But I changed a couple of things and I like it a bit more now so I thought you might enjoy it although I'm still not completely happy with it :P

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Part 2

Arnav caught up with Khushi before she could get the door open, he grabbed her wrist and pushed her back against the door with their hands behind her back.

'Who are you marrying Khushi? Tell me! Who is it?'

Khushi didn't answer his question but concentrated on trying to release her hand from his grasp.

Arnav squeezed her wrist harder, 'answer me Khushi! Who is he? I won't let you do this!'

'Oh you mean you can get married but I can't? You can ask questions and expect an answer but I can't?' Khushi tried to push him away from her with her free hand but Arnav grabbed that one also holding it in between their shoulders.

'Khushi! Answer me damn it! Are you in love with him?'

'Why should I answer you when you won't answer me? Why did you have my payal? Why did you try to... Why do you come so close to me if you want me to leave you alone?'

Arnav held on to Khushi while she still struggled trying to get out is his grasp but the door behind her that she was pressed against made freeing her hand even more difficult.

'You don't want to see my face so let me leave! Let me go!'

Arnav only stared into Khushi's eyes trying to find the answers to his questions.

'Please! You're hurting me,' she was crying now although she'd barely noticed the pain in her wrists compared to the pain in her chest.

Arnav released some of the pressure on Khushi's wrists and closed his eyes to her tears, 'hurting you? I'm hurting you? And what about what you're doing to me Khushi? Every time you cry, every time I see your tears, they hurt me. You hurt me!'

'Then let me go! You won't have to see my face, you won't have to see my tears, just let me go!'

'I...I can't. I can't let you go.' He kept his eyes closed but he released her wrists. Arnav felt the gentle feathery touch of her fingers wipe away the tear that had escaped the confines of his closed eyes but he didn't open them in case he found that he had imagined her touch.

'Congratulations on your engagement Arnavji,' Khushi voice was barely above a whisper as she opened the door behind her.

'You too,' he spoke hoarsely as he closed the door behind her and leant his head against it.

Edited by nayika - 14 years ago