FF:Brewing Desires -Pt 31,pg 113 THE FINAL CHAPTER - Page 25

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Posted: 14 years ago
Will Wait For The Next Part To Comment On It.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Artemis678

Will Wait For The Next Part To Comment On It.


Why? u didn't like this one...
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Posted: 14 years ago
whoa Shy!! tht wuz awesome!! aww Khushi!! why did u run away??
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am so disappointed with very few comments...the more I write the less comments i get...its not fair guys...I know everyone is in the mood to bash ASR today...but pay attention to my hard work...atleast.😆.. I pm 60 people in my buddy list and only 10 respond...its really sad...

Broken heart, just like Khushi...😭 It takes most of my brain cells to write this...and even more to pm each and everyone...💔!


Edited by shybabe - 14 years ago
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Part 11:

Khushi reaches home and nobody notices her...she goes in her room and shuts the door behind and collapses crying on the floor...

She remembers Arnav kissing her everywhere and is not able to bear the pain of being away from him...All she hears Arnav saying "I love you khushi" to her...Khushi is crying really bad...

Payal knocks the door...

Payal: Khushi...aa gayi tum... kab aayi. Humne toh dekha bhi nahi...

Khushi quickly wipes her tears...and gets up...

Khushi opens the door...and smiles...

Payal: kya hua Khushi...tum bahut thaki thaki lag rahi ho...arre tumhare maathe par yeh chot kaisi

Khushi hugs her jiji very tight...

Khushi: Kuch nahi jiji...hum gir gaye the...hume neend aa rahi hai...

Khushi lays on the bed and remembers Arnav's caress and his kiss...and she wakes up panting...


At RM:


Arnav is pacing up and down in his room...remembers his kiss with Khushi and the beautiful night...and remembers Khushi...saying "Hamari Shaadi kar rahe hai"

He picks up the phone in Anger and calls Khushi's home...

Payal picks up the phone...

Payal: Hello

Arnav hangs up...


Morning at RM:

Khushi calls...Anjali picks up the phone...

Khushi: Anjaliji hum Khushi...

Anjali: Khushiji...

Arnav is shocked to hear Khushi on the phone...

Khushi: Anjali ji hum aaj nahi aa sakte...

Anjali: kyon kya hua...

Khushi: Anjali ji...woh hamari shaadi paaki ho gayi hai...aur buaji nahi chahti ki hum ghar se kidhar bahar jaaye...

Anjali: Aapki Shaadi...kab aur kaise...

Arnav now stands up...and shocked to hear the word Shaadi

Khushi: Parso...aur rahi lavanyaji ki baat….toh Nani unhe pasand kar hi lengi...

Anjali: parso...hume bahut khushi hui...lekin aap apna check toh lelijiye...

Khushi: check...woh hum dopahar ko aake lelenge...

Anjali: theek hum chote ko kehdenge ki woh check tayaar karke rakhe...

Khushi's face turns into worry...

Khushi: Ji...


In the afternoon at RM:

Khushi rings the bell...OP opens it...OP brings the check for her...and Khushi's eyes are wandering and looking around...

OP: Khushiji...anjaliji sab mandir gaye hai...

Khushi: Accha...

Khushi turns to leave and is shocked to see Arnav standing there...with the ASR look.

Arnav holds her hand...and drags her to his room...and closes his door...He pins Khushi to the wall...

Arnav: Aakhir kya chahti ho tum...jitni batameeziya tumhare saath meine ki hai uska badla le rahi ho...Tum shaadi kissi aur se kaise kar sakti ho...Khushi...

Arnav cups her face...

Arnav: Hamare beech jo kuch bhi hua kal raat uske baad kaise khushi...Kaise...tum

Khushi has tears in her eyes...and is about to say something but Arnav covers her mouth...

Arnav: Sshhh! Kuch mat kehna...please...bas sirf itna kehdo ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho...Just say you love me damn it...

Khushi: Arnavji , please hume jaane deejiye...hume der ho rahi hai...

Arnav: Kyon, woh intezaar kar raha hai tumhare liye...

Khushi looks surprised...

Khushi: Kya...

Arnav is really mad...

Arnav: Jisse tum shaadi karne wali ho...kaun hai woh …...Kya naam hai uska huh?

Khushi shrugs his hand...

Khushi: Unka naam Shyam hai...

Arnav's face changes...

Arnav: Shyam...kaun Shyam...?

Khushi: Shyamji hamare kirayaadaar hai...jab hum lucknow se delhi aaye the...tabh se unhe jaante hai hum...bahut acche hai Shyamji...unhone hamare parivaar ke liye bahut kuch kiya hai...aur hamare baabuji bhi chahte hai ki hum unse shaadi kare...aur aap chahte hai ki hum apne parivaar ka gala ghot de? Nahi hum aisa karenge...

Arnav: Khushi...tum iss aadmi ke baaare mein kya jaanti ho...bas usne tumhare parivaar keliye kuch kar diya toh who accha ho gaya...Kya karta hai woh!

Khushi: Shyamji ek waqeel hai...

Arnav is shocked...

Arnav: Pura naam kya hai unka...Khushi...

Khushi: Kyon Jaana chahte hai aap?

Arnav holds her shoulder...

Arnav: Poora Naam...

Khushi: unka naam Shyam Jha hai...!

Arnav is completely in shock...releases his hand from Khushi...and walks backwards...

Khushi is surprised...and is wondering what happen...looking at Arnav's shocked face...

Khushi goes close to Arnav...

Khushi: Arnavji...Kya hua...aap shyamji ka naam sunte hi itne pareshaan kyon ho gaye...

Arnav looks at Khushi...angrily...He holds her hand...and drags her somewhere...

Arnav: aao mere saath...

Khushi: Kahaan leke jaa rahe aap hume...chodiye hume Arnavji...

Arnav opens Anjali's bedroom...and pushes Khushi there...and points to the picture of Shyam and Anjali...

Arnav: Kya yehi hai woh...

Khushi is shocked to look at the picture...

Khushi: Shyamji...ki tasveer...

Arnav: Jis aadmi se tum shaadi karne wali ho...woh mere jeejaji hai Khushi...mere di ka suhaag...

Tum di ke saath aise kaise kar sakti ho...

Khushi is in completely in shock...


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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it...it was as though i was watching all this on tv.👏
😡after yesterday's episode, and arnav letting khushi down so badly, i have decided to stop watching the show...tried of all the potrayal of men hating their wives on SP. 😡😡
I much rather spend my time reading OS,FF etc.😆
So all u lovely ladies, keep churning out chapters and keep me happy 😉😆😛😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh i read all the stories...written by so many of you talented people...forgive me if i always press like and comment only sometimes...its just that i've run out of words of praise!!!
😕
so please don't stop pm-ing me 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Vsc94

oh i read all the stories...written by so many of you talented people...forgive me if i always press like and comment only sometimes...its just that i've run out of words of praise!!!

😕
so please don't stop pm-ing me 😭


Its ok...thanks for reading...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update!! Hope to see something like this in the drama itself.. since now, it's Arnav's turn to feel the heat & miss his KKG badly!!

Awesome again!! waiting for the nxt one.. Thanks for the PM!! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
i can seriously see this happenin in the show!!
awesome update.. cant wait to know wht happens next !!
thank you so much for the pm!

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