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Nitya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

awesome dear

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precap is dreamy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: sarkh26
super appu
sema update nisha (akka)😆

finally maan kadhal engira valaila vilundhuttan😆

precap is superb

pls cont soon

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Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: t_areeb

good to see them on friendly terms, and now they are back maan will surely accept his feelings

good to see them on friendly terms, and now they are back maan will surely accept his feelings----yeah they become friends now..I too want maan should realise his feeling soon😉...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: rsroopali

Thanks for loving my update..

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 11
Part 12

There love story starts like this they become friends now very close friends both is started to miss each other whenever maan went for his business trip... Maan usually don't call dadi often when ever he goes for his business trip its like just inform her that he is safe but now maan he is calling geet for each and every hour and thinking of her ever sec its not maan he has completely changed which made dadi happy that finally maan is in love with geet... expect them others have strong belief both loving each other wholeheartedly...for each and every think maan is depending on geet usually he is know for perfection after when geet entered his room she is used to misplace his things for which he need to ask her ever thing...
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Both are feel in love with each other when they meet at first time but the fact is they didn't realize there love they didn't admire at first.. they didn't see each other face properly but at the time they meet till now they changed very much than before...as geet's cousins told geet changed she never been shown her anger to any one at any cause but she showed her anger when it comes to maan when its about the the thing related to maan... she is basically a very loving and caring person in nature so its not new for her to care for him... but anger is not her usual thing how come she changed it shows she loves him...
when it comes to maan he too changed he don't like to laugh and mingle with crowd but when it comes to geet he is smile for her small gestures and most probably he wont fight for silly things before he met geet but now he is very much affected by her fights maan changed now...

maan didn't hate geet from first for any reason yet he surly hate marriage because he afraid of loosing his loved ones first his mom then dad latter sameera kapoor so now he didn't want to fell in love so that it didn't hurt him when they leave him alone..
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Its went like this for a while both shared a good rapport with each other when ever both meet there will be some cute fight and some cute conversation prevail in between them and small admiration also there but they didn't accept that...

Its one evening when maan is returning from the office to home where he have to pick up geet who is in college..He rushed to her college and what he seen was geet is playing with some small children near the gate of her college he admired her for a while.. she didn't notice that maan car at first...

If driver didn't spoke he didn't took his gaze from her...
Sab...shall i call madamji..

ummm...haan he didn't spoke any more he put his head down in embarrassment... when driver call geet she rushed into car saying bye to those children and sit next to him he yet admiring her...

Geet you know those children?

no now only they become my friends..

how can you able to make friends so soon..

Its easy to make friends when ever we are very friendly to others they also become our friends.. so simple..

Its not easy for me... i didn't have any friends other than meera its not simple for others to be like you... you are full of mystery...

you think you don't have any friends so whom am to you maan am not your friend then...

I didn't mean that geet... if you didn't enter in my life meera will be my one and only friend and its not easy for me to be friend with you.. but you made me as your friend... its possible because of you...

Nothing is impossible MR.Khurana... wait... i made you understand that now...

she asked driver to change the direction of the car to some local area and give the direction...
geet what you doing we have to go to Mansion dadi will be waiting for us there

i will manage daid ...don't worry...when they reached the spot it seems to be some slum for him very dirty and ugly.. where he just glare the whole place and said..
geet where you brought me and what area is this?...

from here we need to walk..so send the driver and your guards back

Maan now got angry what you speaking with out them how can we reach Mansion and with out guards its not safe geet..

Do what i say and come with me and i will tell you that no one can find you here i promise that...Please come with me...

He really don't want to do that but he can't reject geet so he did what ever she said...according to the place his over coat is seems to be very unfit so he removes his coat where he wears a brown shirt with the collar button open full hand shirt.. which he folded till elbow...

He get down form the car and took his purse and geet her handbag nothing else they took with them and send the car and guard back he started to walk in that clumsy area where the road is filled with rain water... at first he didn't feel comfortable to walk but he managed to walk in between that.. where as geet is very comfortable to cross those clumsy road and she guided maan to took each and every step...
at last they reached the ground which is in between those slum where more small kids playing...geet took a chocolate in her bag and called two children who is near them.. when they came near her she said now i will ask you one thing you have to answer me for that those who answers correctly i will give them these chocolate ok...

were kids where excited and ready to answer her she pointed towards Maan and asked them you all know who he is..?

they started to tell different answers as movie star..sports personality and so on...Geet laughed at all there answers where maan remained in confussed state what she's doin ?

she replied them as he is Majic uncle who will give you what ever you ask so go and ask him as soon she finished both are near him and asking there wish as chocolate this and that and so on...
these are not the big things for maan what ever they asking is so simple things but now how can he give... he questioned geet with his eyes what she try to say... geet immediately send those children back by saying you will get every thing tomorrow

what all this geet?

they didn't even know you? And don't even know that you will give them every thing or not but yet they believe you and thinking there wish will be fulfilled by you... we don't need to know each other but we should have to believe each other...like those children ...

He understand now how can she able to be friends with each and every one #she believe every one yeah mom also told the same to him don't always think in brain... think from heart you will get the answer for some questions which is related to heart...Not expecting any thing in return is love..#

His moms words and memory echoed in his mind and finally he come out of his shell he started to play with those kids who playing cricket there and now like kid he is playing with them after a long time geet watching him doing masti with those kids he changed a lot now he become a child like all other there and enjoying each and every moment with them...

Geet called him Maan lets move
ok geet he came out of the ground and and she asked
maan you ever ride cycle he started to analyze what she want and said
No geet no cycle ride now let us move to home
yeah i want to travel in cycle come on ride na...
geet you become mad he told with smile and bye the near by cycle and started to ride where geet sited in front... and he was afraid to ride

Its been a long time when i was kid i ride cycle now i don't think i can ride geet
you please try na..

there cycle ride took place after an hour both fell down at certain point hitting on the tree., where both wash them self by taking the water from the near by dhaba and now geet is hungry and decide to take food in that dhaba...

Its very late now but both are not in mood to move away from that place where they are enjoying the every sec and finally they decide to move when maan missed his wallet and they can't hire a car geet too didnt want to go in car so they decide to go in city bus which is very crowded maan hesitate to get in to bus at first latter he is convinced to get in to that..where both enjoy there intimacy in between the crowd in the bus finally the bus become free after a long time and its almost free but both still dont want to get down from the bus where geet is resting her head in his shoulder, holding his collar tightly and sleeping where maan enjoying the bus travel for the first time...

When they enter the Mansion its already very late and both are very tired and dirty due to there masti so they enter the house as theif and went straightly to there room.. without caught by dadi and they already convinced her with some excuse for coming late...

This is long day for both... which is filled with memories he enjoyed each and every moment of the day with his geet with out any hesitation for the entire world...
he slipped in his side of the bed where as geet in another side of the bed and almost sleep...
he admired her...
#she is really impossible..she made my day...made me happy after a long time am happy he didn't believe himself as he didn't every thing today... she changed me...you changed me geet Maan singh khurana is never been like this before you made every thing possible...how can its possible maan...? He questioned himself she changed you totally from what to what...Angry young man to child doing mischief and what else...I didn't hate her at any time but i didn't love her too.. i am really afraid of loosing every thing which ever i like i lost that.. first Mom then dad at last my love....He paused for some time thinking of something she also left me... but its not her mistake she need money which i didn't have at that time so she left me... but am afraid of getting into some relationship and loosing that afterward like all others... but geet she did magic to me she changed every thing and i don't want to lose her... I don't let her go away from me she need to stay with me I wont let you go geet...( saying this his gaze moved towards her).with out her there is no life for me I LOVE YOU GEET.. wait what i said i love her really am in love with her...i started to fell in love again MSk again loving some one whole heatedly this time i wont let her go like others...she is mine she is my geet Maan ki geet... This time I am not ready to loose any thing especially MY geet#

He realized he is changing and due to geet but geet will understand his love is she really loving him when she going to realize her love...

PRECAP:Miss understanding between maaneet...

Part 13

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Edited by nishha - 14 years ago

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keenu_kk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

oh dear

so maan acceped it

but what MU dear

update soon

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blue24

@blue24

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#137

Awesome updates
So maan accepted his feeling for geet thats really sweet
But now misunderstandings
Scary dear update soon
Thanks for the pm

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#138

awesome update
precap MU b/w maaneet
waiting to see what is the reason for MU
continue soon

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Mounika sharma

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Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#139

Oh no!misunderstanding b/w maneet...?i hope it wrapsup soon..
Waitng 4 next part

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lallu06

@lallu06

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Posted: 14 years ago

#140

Baby u r chance less...Read the story till ur latest part without break. Awesome writing dear. U have a very good writing skill. Keep it up. Waiting for ur next update. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏