New FF (Maaneet) Mere Humsafar Thd5 Upd pt54 pg122 - Page 42

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -knirwal-

me ab to sabse lateπŸ˜†...apne to thanks list bi bana di...

oo my silky di got second place in universityπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Yes she is the best
both updates  r mindblowing...rocking
 
u writes poems very well di...keep going this good work di...ye poems bahot hi achi hai...πŸ‘
updates like always loved it ... Thanks Khushi
 
maan ka plan bahot hi badia tha...kya plan banya geet ke saath time spend karne ka...wow..
and most beautiful part is rose planet...imagine karne me kitna khobsorrat tha...agar dekhne ko mile to kitna acha tha... Aage aage dekho maan kya karta haiπŸ˜‰
 
u really make half certury...great century part...and congrates for it...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
 
and maan scatting dance wow kya idea tha di...muje  skating bahot pasand hai...This was an experiment from my side glad it turned out to b romantic
 
koi line particular line  choose nahi kar pai kyuki evry line touch my heart...muahhh
 
i m very lucky u make me ur small sis
cont soon
love u alot...
muahhh
ur;s bacha  love u my Bachha

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Posted: 12 years ago
 
plz jaldi update dijea
eagerly waiting shona
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: udeshi91

awesome update dear
loved it Thanks dear
 
aww maaneet were so lost in each others embrace 😳
ah msk's phone , always rings at wrong time πŸ˜† Yes he should throw away his phone 
 
 
what an answer sirji πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† busy with traffic jam , ha ha we know that πŸ˜‰ Pehli baar bahana banaya aur woh bhi itna bakwaas
 
geet was suprised and confused about the picnic spot 😲
innocent geet πŸ˜› well dear you should know more tac tics of msk better πŸ˜‰ Yes Geet dheere dheere maan k plans samjna shuru kar degi
 
loved it how maan answered her 😳 glad that geet reminded him about their wet clothes , otherwise Chori pakdi jaathi haina babaji
 
maan will be in a great leg pulling session πŸ˜† ah maan never leave a chance to lift geet 😳 Hmm..Maan ko toh bus bahana chahiye naughty maan
 
loved it how maan selected a dress for geet , haiye geet was blushing 😳
can imagine how gorgeous she could be , afterall it's msk's choice na πŸ˜‰ that too on his geet 😳 Yes Maan ne select kiya hai toh khaas hi hogana
 
 
poor annie and dev πŸ˜† seems like they still don't know about this ashiq singh khurana , i mean
the romantic avatar of their bro πŸ˜‰ but loved our smart dadi who guessed msk very well ..Annie aur Dev abhi bachhe hai but dadi is supersmart
 
 
glad that maan never left any chance for that jerk arjun , he deserved it πŸ‘
maan's assurance was so nice and filled with care 😳 Yes he will not let anyone harm his Geet
 
aha looks like dadi was on a mission to reveal maan's secret πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
phew he was safe with annie's request for skating πŸ˜†
really liked this skating and dancing idea dear , you picks up beautiful fresh ideas for maaneet 😳 Thanks Dear
 
it was so nice how maan assured geet  about dancing with him while skating
being together they can surely win any challenge in their life Yes if they r together then every obstacle will get converted into a stepping stone
 
oh they were again lost in each other , me also singing mahi mahi πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³love is in the air πŸ˜‰
 
adi and pinky were so cute πŸ˜› so everyone was excited about winning the competition 
well victory was all the way for maaneet as how could that not be when geet was with maan πŸ˜‰
 
the dance was so beautifully described dear , hats off to you πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
maan's lovely words comforted each and every step of geet
maan completely distracted her nervous mind with his questions , smart move msk πŸ˜‰ Yes he made her get lost in himself and his words so that her nervousness would no longer b there
 
aww loved maan's song selection , looks like it was resemblance of his feelings 😳
geet's song reflected how maan always supported geet in every difficult  situation 😊
they again got lost in their own world amidst  the aura of their magical bond , loved it dear 😳 Yes they indirectly confessed their feelings
 
yeppie maaneet won it πŸ˜ƒ well it has to be when you have your beloved's trust with you, you can reach victory without any hesitancy 😳
really loved maaneet's promises to each other of supporting and being together forever πŸ˜³ They will always b together
 
eagerly waiting for new track 😊 precap is interesting  Amritsar trip would b the next step of their relationship
thanks for the pm
please continue soon dear Love u
 
 

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you for your love and support. I have replied to your comments individually.
From this update I am starting the new track. Once again I would like to tell some of the updates may be painful as well as dangerous but I assure u there will be no misunderstanding nor any separation of Maaneet. Hence pls do not panic.
 
At the end of this track Maaneet's relationship will progress to the next level.
 
I dedicate this update to my darling sister Adaa it's her birthday today. I hope that u achieve every success and happiness in your life.
 
love-Piya
 
PART 51
 
Annie: Congrats Guys aap logone toh humari bhi chutti kar di
 
Geet: Thanks Annie
 
Pinky: Wasie Geet tu toh keh rahi thi k tujhe skating nahi aati toh phir tu ye competition jeet kaise gayi...tu toh kafi dari hui thi na
 
Geet: Ab kisi cheez se darr nahi lagta kyunki ab meri taakat humesha mere saath rehthi hai
 
She looks lovingly at Maan
 
Maan holds her hand and assures her that he will always stand by her side whatever the circumstances
 
Meanwhile a person announces Maaneet as the winners and asks them to collect their award
 
Maaneet go and recieve their award
 
Maan :(whispers huskily in her ears)Dekha maine kaha tha na hum saath ho toh jeet humari hi hogi
 
Geet started blushing
 
Maan: Wasise sharmathe hue kafi khoobsurat lag rahi ho
 
Her already pink cheek got converted to a shade of red
 
Dadima :Geet bete ye aap itna sharma kyun rahi thi award lethe waqt
 
Maan: haan Geet batau sharmanewali aisi koi baat toh hui hi nahi thi toh tum itna kyun sharmarahi thi
 
Geet: Achha ye aap puch rahe ho...Dadima ko woh subahwali baat batadu
 
Dadima: Subahwali baat kaunsi baat Geet
 
Geet: Wo hua yun...
 
Maan: Wo kuch nahi Dadi Geet subah late ho gayi thina wahi baat bol rahi thi...aap chodiyena inn baato ko... chaliye bahar chalthe hai
 
Dadima: (thinking) Khub samajthe hai hum Maan par sach kahe toh aap mein itna badlaw dekhkar hume jo khushi mil rahi haina woh hum bayan bhi nahi kar sakthe...aap dono ki jodi yun hi barkaraar rahe
 
Annie: Chaliye na dadi
 
Dadima :Chaliye
 
Everyone starts walking
 
Geet also starts moving ahead but Maan catches her hand and pulls her
 
Geet: Maan ye kya shararat hai koi dekh lega
 
Maan: Dekh lenedoh aur waise bhi tum kuch der pehle kya kar rahi thi
 
Geet: Main kya kar rahi thi thik thik kahiyena main kuch samjhi nahi
 
He pulls her more close... she could feel his warm breath on her face
 
Maan: Badi nasamaj hona Dadima ko wo subah wali baat batane jaa rahi thi maine mana kiya thana...
 
Geet: Maan batanewali thi bataiyi toh nahina aur waise bhi aapne bhi toh Dadima k saamne mujhse ek sawal puchha aap jaante thena maine aisa kyun kiya...
 
Maan: Achhaji toh humse badla liya jaa raha tha
 
Geet: Haan wo kehthe haina Tit for Tat ..jaise ko taisa
 
Maan: Iski saza toh tumhe milegi Geet
 
Geet: Saza aap mujhe koi saza vaza nahi de sakthe ye mujhe pata hai
 
Maan: Itna bharosa toh thik hai ab dekhna main tumse baat hi nahi karunga yahi hai tumhari saza
 
He leaves her and starts moving ahead
 
Geet:(thinking) Ye lo ye toh sachmuch mein naaraz ho gaye ab kya karu kaise manu inhe
 
Maan: (thinking) Ab meri value pata chalegi isse..
 
Geet: Ji maine kaha suniyeji...
 
Maan stops immediately
 
He turns around and looks at Geet
 
Maan: Kya kaha tumne?
 
Geet: Maine kaha suniyeji
 
Maan starts approaching her
 
Maan: kahiyeji
 
Geet moves her lips towards his ear. Maan closes his eyes
 
Geet: Maine kaha aapka maun vrat toh start hone se pehle hi tuth gaya..ek pal k liye bhi mujhse dur nahi reh sakthe bade aaye the mujhse naaraz honewale
 
Maan opens his eyes but does not find Geet there
 
Maan :Geet tumhe ab main nahi chodunga
 
They were running here and there and finally Maan catches Geet
 
Both of them fall on the ground
 
Maaneet eyelock
 
Maan :Ye toh sach hai Geet main kabhi bhi tumse naaraz ho hi nahi saktha
 
Geet: Sachhi
 
Maan: Muchhi
 
They were once again lost in each other's eyes but again Maan's mobile started ringing
 
Geet: Maan..
 
Maan: haan Geet bolo
 
Geet: Maan aapka mobile baj raha hai
 
Maan: Kya?
 
Geet: Mobile
 
Maan: haan mobile
 
He attends the call
 
Dev: Bro aap logh phirse gayab ho gaye jaldi aayiye hum aap logo ka intezaar kar rahe hai
 
Maan: Haan hum bus aa rahe hai
 
he cuts the call
 
Maan :Najaane ye mobile kis ullu k patte ne banaya hai humesha galat waqt par bajtha hai
 
Geet: Maan aapne kuch kaha?
 
Maan: Nahi Geet chalo chalthe hai
 
The entire family enjoy the picnic trip. Maan manages to steal some moments with Geet.
 
Finally all of them come back
 
Khurana Mansion
 
Maan: Dadima main bus abhi aaya
 
Dadima: Aap kaha jaa rahe hai bete
 
Maan: Bus 5 minute Dadima..Geet tum bhi yahi rukhna kahi jaana nahi
 
Everyone was confused
 
After sometime
 
Maan comes back
 
Maan: Aap logh yaha kyun kahde ho jaaiye jaakar aaram kijiye aur Geet tum bhi jaakar aaram kar lo. Goodnight
 
Annie: Ye bhai aise ajeeb tareke se pesh kyun aa rahe the khair Goodnight everybody
 
Everyone go to their respective rooms
 
Outhouse
 
Geet :Maan bhina kya sochthe hai kya karte hai kuch samajmein hi nahi aata
 
She closes the door
 
It is then she noticed some packets
 
Geet opens it and was totally surprised.
 
there were beautiful salwar suits and some beautiful sarees in it
 
It also carried a note
 
" Geet ye saari dresses mujhe uss shop mein pasand aa gayi thi aur mera yakeen mano inn dresses mein tum se zyada pyara koi lag hi nahi saktha iss liye maine ye saare k saare khareedliye... tumhara Maan"
 
Geet just hugged the note and went to sleep
 
Next day
 
Khurana Mansion
 
Dev: Are Adi tum itne subah subah
 
Adi: Wo Dev Sir ek urgent baat thi
 
Meanwhile Geet also arrives
 
Geet: Good morning Adi Sir
 
Adi :Good morning Geet
 
Dev: Tum kuch keh rahe the Adi
 
Adi: Haan Sir wo jo humare Amritsar wale deligates hai unke saath jo humari next month meeting fixed thi woh chahthe hai k meeting issi month ho
 
Dev: Par iss month toh hume aur bhi saare committments hai itne short notice mein ye kaise hoga
 
Maan: Koi problem nahi hai Dev iska solution hai mere paas
 
Dev :Kaisa solution bro?
 
Maan: Yaha k projects par tum aur Adi kaam kar rahe ho toh aap log apna kaam continue kijiye Amritsar main personally jaakar waha ka kaam samal lunga
 
Adi: Par Sir woh itna bhi bada project nahi jaha aapko khud personally jana pade
 
Maan: Adi koi kaam chotha ya bada nahi hotha mere liye saare clients ek jaise hai aur important ye hai k hume saara kaam time pe khatm karna hai issliye tai raha k yaha ka kaam aap logh samalenge aur main Amritar jaayunga
 
Dev: Chalo Adi mujhe tumse thode details discuss karne hai
 
Dev and Adi leave
 
Geet was a bit disappointed
 
Maan noticed this
 
Maan: Geet tum bhi mere saath Amritsar chalogi
 
Geet was very excited
 
Geet: Kya main bhi?
 
Maan: Haan ji hum Amritsar jaa rahe hai
 
Geet started smiling
 
Maan goes and whispers in her ear
 
Maan :Woh kya haina main ek pal k liye bhi tumse dur nahi reh saktha
 
Saying so he places a kiss on her cheek and leaves
 
PRECAP: Maan: "Geet dubara kabhi shaadi ka zikr bhi mere saamne mat karna mujhe shadi k naam se sakth nafrat hai"
 
PLS PRESS D LIKE BUTTON N DO COMMENT
 
Love-Piya
 
Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

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kitne time baad me first pe ai ho... dinka chika dinka chika hehehe
come to update
koi shak hai... nahi muje to nahi hai...to phir apko bi nahi hona chahia...kyuki apki update humesha
 
faate chak hundia ne...means verry very goood...πŸ‘
are yaar maaneet kechoti choti aur pyaar pyaar  bate kitni achi likti hai ap...simply superb...
 
my fav line apko pata hi hai...''suniyeji'' from geet and ''kehiaji'' from maan😳...i love this one most
aur humare maan janab dadi ko bebkoof bane lage par ye nahi jante ki dadi ne bi koi kachi golli nahi kelli...πŸ˜†
 
di ab to kumari cv ne sun li geet ko new dresses mil hi gai...πŸ˜†
aur humare piya di to humesha uska cupboard clothes se barke rakti hai...maan geet ko dresses gift karti hi rehta hai...πŸ˜† but its sweeet...
 
me kase bhool mera fav track a gaya
 
cont soon di...
eagerly waiting...
ur's khushi
Edited by -knirwal- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was a sweet update
i loved it
maan and geet were so cute...
maahi moments were superb
suniye ji and kahiye ji was great ;oved that part
now maaneet heading towards amritsar
wonder what will happen
continue soon dear

sorry for the delay in comments yar...aajkal kafi busy hu...

urs angel

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow dear
from where u gibe this twist
he loves her but they said that is frdship
but now he said he hate the wors shadi
i think that ll make her feel bad dear
so sad for her
hey can u make maan J in amritsar dear
pls

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update dear...plz continue soon nd thanx 4 pm...
wen i read d precap i felt confused y is he saying lyk dat???
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg maan rejectd 4 marriage i mean he dnt like to marry geet.anyway waitng to read twists and turns..
The update was really really awesme.maneet scenes were fabulous.
U r really amazing piya di.just love u.
Kya amazng conversatn likthi ho!mein baar baar fida hojathi hoon tumhari dialogues par.
Waitng eagerly 4 next part.
-MONA
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haye Piggy,
 
Maan is so romantic...roothna manana was so cute
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Dadi ma is happy and very smart. She nderstands ki chal kya raha hai dono ke beech mein. Part where he gives the dresses to Geet was so cute. Trip to amritsar...another plan by MSK to spend time with his mIshty. But Precap...don't know. Maybe some of Maan's past will be divulged which will tell why he was so arrogant and rude at the beginning of the FF.
 
Waiting for the next update dear
 
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍