Thank you for your love and support. I have replied to your comments individually.
From this update I am starting the new track. Once again I would like to tell some of the updates may be painful as well as dangerous but I assure u there will be no misunderstanding nor any separation of Maaneet. Hence pls do not panic.
At the end of this track Maaneet's relationship will progress to the next level.
I dedicate this update to my darling sister Adaa it's her birthday today. I hope that u achieve every success and happiness in your life.
love-Piya
PART 51
Annie: Congrats Guys aap logone toh humari bhi chutti kar di
Geet: Thanks Annie
Pinky: Wasie Geet tu toh keh rahi thi k tujhe skating nahi aati toh phir tu ye competition jeet kaise gayi...tu toh kafi dari hui thi na
Geet: Ab kisi cheez se darr nahi lagta kyunki ab meri taakat humesha mere saath rehthi hai
She looks lovingly at Maan
Maan holds her hand and assures her that he will always stand by her side whatever the circumstances
Meanwhile a person announces Maaneet as the winners and asks them to collect their award
Maaneet go and recieve their award
Maan :(whispers huskily in her ears)Dekha maine kaha tha na hum saath ho toh jeet humari hi hogi
Geet started blushing
Maan: Wasise sharmathe hue kafi khoobsurat lag rahi ho
Her already pink cheek got converted to a shade of red
Dadima :Geet bete ye aap itna sharma kyun rahi thi award lethe waqt
Maan: haan Geet batau sharmanewali aisi koi baat toh hui hi nahi thi toh tum itna kyun sharmarahi thi
Geet: Achha ye aap puch rahe ho...Dadima ko woh subahwali baat batadu
Dadima: Subahwali baat kaunsi baat Geet
Geet: Wo hua yun...
Maan: Wo kuch nahi Dadi Geet subah late ho gayi thina wahi baat bol rahi thi...aap chodiyena inn baato ko... chaliye bahar chalthe hai
Dadima: (thinking) Khub samajthe hai hum Maan par sach kahe toh aap mein itna badlaw dekhkar hume jo khushi mil rahi haina woh hum bayan bhi nahi kar sakthe...aap dono ki jodi yun hi barkaraar rahe
Annie: Chaliye na dadi
Dadima :Chaliye
Everyone starts walking
Geet also starts moving ahead but Maan catches her hand and pulls her
Geet: Maan ye kya shararat hai koi dekh lega
Maan: Dekh lenedoh aur waise bhi tum kuch der pehle kya kar rahi thi
Geet: Main kya kar rahi thi thik thik kahiyena main kuch samjhi nahi
He pulls her more close... she could feel his warm breath on her face
Maan: Badi nasamaj hona Dadima ko wo subah wali baat batane jaa rahi thi maine mana kiya thana...
Geet: Maan batanewali thi bataiyi toh nahina aur waise bhi aapne bhi toh Dadima k saamne mujhse ek sawal puchha aap jaante thena maine aisa kyun kiya...
Maan: Achhaji toh humse badla liya jaa raha tha
Geet: Haan wo kehthe haina Tit for Tat ..jaise ko taisa
Maan: Iski saza toh tumhe milegi Geet
Geet: Saza aap mujhe koi saza vaza nahi de sakthe ye mujhe pata hai
Maan: Itna bharosa toh thik hai ab dekhna main tumse baat hi nahi karunga yahi hai tumhari saza
He leaves her and starts moving ahead
Geet:(thinking) Ye lo ye toh sachmuch mein naaraz ho gaye ab kya karu kaise manu inhe
Maan: (thinking) Ab meri value pata chalegi isse..
Geet: Ji maine kaha suniyeji...
Maan stops immediately
He turns around and looks at Geet
Maan: Kya kaha tumne?
Geet: Maine kaha suniyeji
Maan starts approaching her
Maan: kahiyeji
Geet moves her lips towards his ear. Maan closes his eyes
Geet: Maine kaha aapka maun vrat toh start hone se pehle hi tuth gaya..ek pal k liye bhi mujhse dur nahi reh sakthe bade aaye the mujhse naaraz honewale
Maan opens his eyes but does not find Geet there
Maan :Geet tumhe ab main nahi chodunga
They were running here and there and finally Maan catches Geet
Both of them fall on the ground
Maaneet eyelock
Maan :Ye toh sach hai Geet main kabhi bhi tumse naaraz ho hi nahi saktha
Geet: Sachhi
Maan: Muchhi
They were once again lost in each other's eyes but again Maan's mobile started ringing
Geet: Maan..
Maan: haan Geet bolo
Geet: Maan aapka mobile baj raha hai
Maan: Kya?
Geet: Mobile
Maan: haan mobile
He attends the call
Dev: Bro aap logh phirse gayab ho gaye jaldi aayiye hum aap logo ka intezaar kar rahe hai
Maan: Haan hum bus aa rahe hai
he cuts the call
Maan :Najaane ye mobile kis ullu k patte ne banaya hai humesha galat waqt par bajtha hai
Geet: Maan aapne kuch kaha?
Maan: Nahi Geet chalo chalthe hai
The entire family enjoy the picnic trip. Maan manages to steal some moments with Geet.
Finally all of them come back
Khurana Mansion
Maan: Dadima main bus abhi aaya
Dadima: Aap kaha jaa rahe hai bete
Maan: Bus 5 minute Dadima..Geet tum bhi yahi rukhna kahi jaana nahi
Everyone was confused
After sometime
Maan comes back
Maan: Aap logh yaha kyun kahde ho jaaiye jaakar aaram kijiye aur Geet tum bhi jaakar aaram kar lo. Goodnight
Annie: Ye bhai aise ajeeb tareke se pesh kyun aa rahe the khair Goodnight everybody
Everyone go to their respective rooms
Outhouse
Geet :Maan bhina kya sochthe hai kya karte hai kuch samajmein hi nahi aata
She closes the door
It is then she noticed some packets
Geet opens it and was totally surprised.
there were beautiful salwar suits and some beautiful sarees in it
It also carried a note
" Geet ye saari dresses mujhe uss shop mein pasand aa gayi thi aur mera yakeen mano inn dresses mein tum se zyada pyara koi lag hi nahi saktha iss liye maine ye saare k saare khareedliye... tumhara Maan"
Geet just hugged the note and went to sleep
Next day
Khurana Mansion
Dev: Are Adi tum itne subah subah
Adi: Wo Dev Sir ek urgent baat thi
Meanwhile Geet also arrives
Geet: Good morning Adi Sir
Adi :Good morning Geet
Dev: Tum kuch keh rahe the Adi
Adi: Haan Sir wo jo humare Amritsar wale deligates hai unke saath jo humari next month meeting fixed thi woh chahthe hai k meeting issi month ho
Dev: Par iss month toh hume aur bhi saare committments hai itne short notice mein ye kaise hoga
Maan: Koi problem nahi hai Dev iska solution hai mere paas
Dev :Kaisa solution bro?
Maan: Yaha k projects par tum aur Adi kaam kar rahe ho toh aap log apna kaam continue kijiye Amritsar main personally jaakar waha ka kaam samal lunga
Adi: Par Sir woh itna bhi bada project nahi jaha aapko khud personally jana pade
Maan: Adi koi kaam chotha ya bada nahi hotha mere liye saare clients ek jaise hai aur important ye hai k hume saara kaam time pe khatm karna hai issliye tai raha k yaha ka kaam aap logh samalenge aur main Amritar jaayunga
Dev: Chalo Adi mujhe tumse thode details discuss karne hai
Dev and Adi leave
Geet was a bit disappointed
Maan noticed this
Maan: Geet tum bhi mere saath Amritsar chalogi
Geet was very excited
Geet: Kya main bhi?
Maan: Haan ji hum Amritsar jaa rahe hai
Geet started smiling
Maan goes and whispers in her ear
Maan :Woh kya haina main ek pal k liye bhi tumse dur nahi reh saktha
Saying so he places a kiss on her cheek and leaves
PRECAP: Maan: "Geet dubara kabhi shaadi ka zikr bhi mere saamne mat karna mujhe shadi k naam se sakth nafrat hai"
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Love-Piya
Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
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