FF:My passionate desire pg 16 24\10\11 MODNOTE PAGE 20 - Page 11

Tia

finally u updated...superb...
nxt update soon...

thanks for updating finally..
short but nice..
waise if u have planned it with arjun-arohi n write it that way finally replace arjun with shaan,arohi with khanak na..n jay with akash..at times while reading these different names sometimes confuse us..just a suggestion..but this replacing wud be easy if u update from computer..if not mistakes do happen..so i'll try to correct it that way..

too much to unfold to know the exact scenario that is revolving around them..do continue soon..

Hey Tia finally u updated😊...its getting pretty interesting,poor khanak i feel so sorry for her saree poor thing came inbetween both of them😆for a gud reason😆...there is so much mystery behind these two plz unravel it soon...im impatient to find out what went wrong between the two...plz update next part soon😊 loved the update😊

Good part

Waiting for next update 😊

Monday waiting for u badly come soonnn😃

Thankx for the lovely comments so here is some cute moments between them dedicated to you all Enjoy ;)

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Khanak was getng ready 4 da reception party,she was wearng electric blue suit, with pearl embroidry. she was lookng stuning as always , while wearing earing ,she heard shoutng...
shaan entrd da room running: nhi, dadi sorry , juti nhi.(closed da door of washroom quickly)

Khanak was cnfused , dadi enterd( juti in hand)" kahan he ye ullu ka pttha ? 3 bje call kya tha, aate aate 6 bja gye? sare guest aagay hen. agr ye 10 mnt men bahir na nikle to tu bs akr mujhe bta dena. theek he?

Khanak laughed: wow kya scene tha, shaan aur juti. keep it up dadi, hope 4 more muuah. ye kya? wallclock me 4 bj rhe hen, ye bnd hogai, kahan dekhe the mene cell, milgay . mera hath nhi jayega, ye round stool le leti hun. (stand on it), shit mera hath to ab bhi nhi ja rha.

shaan come out of da washroom , wrapped in maroon towel , wid bare chest. she suddenly lookd at him, and fall . bt she felt strong arms around her. she opened her eyes...
my eyes lost in his deep brown eyes.he was lookng hottt. his wet hairs and drop of water on him made my throat dry. my arms r restng on his wet , bare wide chest and neck. damn he iz so sexy.
da fear in her eyes mk them more attractve. her few hairs r on her cheeks, like dew on rose. instead of cloths, i can fell da softness of her body, bcoz my arms r restng on thigh , and back.
her shivrng lips mkng me thirstyy, her heart was beatng fast , i can feel it bcoz her body is mvng up and dwn,and collidng wid my chest.. i just wanna stare her...

shaan: (sneeze on her)
Khanak: eww, yuck
dy both come 2 dere senses and shaan drop her on da floor.
Khanak: shouted in pain.
she got up. and turned around.
Khanak: tumhe shram nhi aati , tumhe pta he yahan men hun aur tum towel men ho...
shaan: i 4got my bathrob, aur u kya chahti ho men ye bhi na pehnu.(raised his eyebrow)

Khanak: huh, nhi, men is type ki nhi hun.
shaan giggle , she reached out of da room"dadi ko bejh rhi hun" .shaan:hey Khanak,no stop!
Khanak in da hall thought"hw cud u do dis, hw cud u lose ur self, and 4 dat monster? jo kuch bhi us ne mere sath kya he men nhi bhul skti, no, I HATE HIM.
all da guest r greetng Shanak in reception party.same lines are echoing evrywhere "wow mrs.shaan singhania iz realy beautiful , wow beautiful cople, kitna pyar he dono ki aankhon men" . madhvi came wid her 4rnds, "cngrate shaan, realy nice choice , da other 4rnd said" mujhe to pehle hi pta tha, infact sare chandigarh ko pta chlgya tha , k tum dono ka chakar he , agr shadi hi krni thi , to itna tmasha kyon kya tha? (laughed) Shanak both become embaras , he looked at Khanak, her eyes r red, and full of tears. she excuse herself, move 4rm dere. only da memory of dat night, made her cry.

Akash: khanak, tum yahan corner men kya kr rhi ho?

Khanak: nhi, kuch nhi.

Akash: men sb smjhta hun, tum meri 4rnd ho. sb theek ho jayega, shaan buht acha he, wo bahir se macho lgta he , bt asal men wo buht emotinal he. jb use dadi k cancer ka pta chla tha , men ne usse khud study me rote hue dekha he , Khanak gave her a shocking expression. Akash cntnue: ghr me wo sirf dadi se hi to attach he, apne dad se to wo bat bhi nhi krta, jb dadi ne operation k liye us ki shadi ki shrat rkhi, to men ne expect nhi kya tha k wo itni jldi maan jayga . bt men buht khush hun , us ne tumhe choose, some 1 call Akash and he leaves,
Khanak: dadi ko cancer he? us ne ye baat mujhe to kbhi nhi btai..

shaan came out of da washroom in his night suit and bump in Khanak. he took his laptop and sit on his bed. Khanak stand near 2 him.

shaan(widout lookng):kya chahey?
Khanak: hun... um ... tum se bat krni thi.

shaan: to ab kya kr rhi ho??

Khanak: nhi, ye nhi wo wali baat.

shaan raised his eybrow, Khanak also sit on da bed. Khanak:shaan mujhe sb pta chl gya he.
shaan: kya(in worried)? kese pta chla ?
Khanak: Akash ne btaya
shaan(made face): Akash ne?
arhoi(lookng dwn): han us ne btadya , k dadi ko cancer he, aur tum ne un k liye kya kuch kya... jo kuch bhi hmare...jo us rat ko hua... i just hate u...(she stood up) no... i still hate u...bt nw... she looked at him, his eyes r still stareing her. ... um... gud night, and ran to washroom.

shaan put his hand on his head" men to dar hi gya tha, thnk god isse kuch nhi pta chla... vrna dunya ki koi takat isse chup rehne se nhi rok skti...
Khanak screamed in da washroom , shaan hurriedly mv 2 washroom...
shaan stood up bcoz of hr scream , Khanak run hurriedly 4rm da washroom , and climb up da bed and stood on it.
shaan :kya hua?
Khanak: ugly... motta... chuhan(mouse)...
shaan: hw cud u dare? tum ne mujhe ugly, motta , chuhan bola? aur mere bed pr slippers se khri ho??(in anger)
Khanak: nhi nhi tum nhi ...washroom men chuhan he...
shaan(rolled his eyes and closed da door of washroom): khud hi chla jayrga, utro neche..
Khanak: nhi men nhi utrun gi, no use ghr se bahir nikalo..nikalo...
shaan(pulled her hand): washroom me he yahan nhi he, ja kr sojao, wrna subah full water jug dalun ga tumhare upar.
Khanak: men itne heavy cloths men nhi so skti,mujhe chnge krna he, tum bahir jao ,.
he throw his cigarrate in dustbin , opend da door , bt again come back and locked da door.
shaan: men kahin nhi ja rha, starts doing his wrk on laptop.
Khanak: kyun jao, men ne chnge krna he.
shaan: bahir mom hen.
Khanak: unhe bol do men chnge kr rhi hun.
shaan: wo kahin gi , tumhari biwi he, neighbour ki nhi.
Khanak: aisa thori hota he, agar men tumhari wo wali wife bhi hoti , to bhi tumhe bahir nikal kr chnge krti..
shaan: bt men to nhi jaata na...
Khanak(furious): itne bare pearls hen is par, men in kaproon men nhi so skti
shaan: to yahi chnge krlo.
Khanak: hoo, tumhare samne?
shaan: men kam kr rha hun, aur tumhe aisa kyon lgta he, men tumhe dekhun ga?
Khanak: tumhe aisa kyun lgta he , k tum mujhe nhi dekho ge...
shaan: aww, shutup , jo chahe kro, i dnt care... bt me kahin jane wala nhi hun

Khanak: theek he, men light off kr k kapre chnge krleti hun, tum apna laptop off kro..

shaan: enough, tum ne pehle hi mera buht time waste krdya he, aur agr tum ne ab light off ki na... to men light bhi on krdun ga aur tumhe dekhun ga bhi...

Khanak: cme and stand near 2 him..,shaan asked:nw wht? Khanak(puppy face): men yahan so jaun...? plzzz
shaan: men sofa pr sone wala nhi hun.
Khanak: men tumhare sath so juan?
shaan(wide eyes),
Khanak: sofa washroom k pas he, agr rat aagya to. men bilkul corner pr so jaungi , tumhara blanket bhi nhi lungi , raat ko cough bhi nhi krun gi( she coughed bcoz of his cigrat) men ne 4 spoon syrup pi liya he... plz mujhe yahan sone do...mujhe chuhon se buht dar lgta he...plz, plz

shaan: theek he so jao,
Khanak: sit on da little place near him, almost touchng him.
shaan: pura bed khali he, yahan kun bethi ho??
Khanak: ye side washroom se zyada dur he
shaan:scream , close his laptop and mvd 2 oder side"pagal larki" and lay on da bed.

Khanak(lay near 2 corner): shaan mr.gupta leave pr he na?
shaan: hun
Khanak: to ab project ka kya hoga?
shaan: pta nhi koi experience milna chahe
Khanak: shaan tum michael ko wapis..
shaan(loked at her, cntrol his anger): tumhe equal right he,tum kisi ko bhi rkh skti ho, lekin jo kuch us ne kya, mujhe lga tum us ka face bhi nhi dekho gi.

Khanak(sit): us se galti hogai,
shaan(sit): tum ise galti kehti ho?
Khanak: jo kuch bhi usne kya , pyar k liye kya, wo pyar men tha, aur pyar men kuch sahi, galat nhi hota.
shaan: to jitne bhi ppl jail men he sb pyar krte hen?
Khanak(lay dwn): o ho , tumhe smjh nhi aayga.
shaan:smjhna bhi nhi he , lay dwn and turn 2 other side.
Khanak(2 hrself): i knew shaan tumhara gussa jaez he, kash... kash men michael se engage na hoti...
shaan was sleeping in a deep sleep , just he feel a disturbance around him. he wanted 2 turn other side , bt some thing stab him. he took da thng and wid great effort he opened his eye , in a dim light he realized , it was nthng else but Khanak kameez.

his eyes opened wide and looked 2ward her. "da bad decision ever"
she was wearing her blue trouser, and sleeveless blue top reachng his half stomach, wid a big deep round neck,infront and back(she was wearing under her kameez).
and wid one hand, she iz grabing a corner of blanket, and pullin it her deep sleep. she is shivering wid cold, shaan just lost in her charm, she is lookng so seductve, her each curve iz visible, shaan loose grip of blanket, she pulled and cvring herself ,bt wait dats nt enough 4 him.
he again pull da blanket, she mvd her nose, oh god , hw cute she is. anger expression made her more beautiful , she iz mvng her legs bcoz of cold , wid her 1 hand she istrying 2 cvr her other arm. damn she is so hot. she iz mvng her hand on bed 4 blanket, he put his elbow on bed and keep his head on his hand. he left da blanket , she touched it, and about 2 grab bt he again mvd it far. she wid furious mvd closed and closed , he realy enjoying watchng her, he just want 2 spend his whole life by just teasing her like dis . her expressions , her body move , and ya specialy "she was sleeping, so mean no bak bak" made her more ...

she came closed 2 him, he took da blanket and cver her , she instantly keep her arms around him , and her head on his chest.
while wraping blanket his hand touched her bare cold body, his heart skip a beat, ya somethng iz dere about her , whch made her restless . her hairs creasing her cheeks, irritating her , he blow on it, she mvd herself on him , try 2 remove da hairs, he again blow on her ,she again rub her cheeks. hez reached near her about 2 kiss , bt suddenly stopped"shame on u, u cant do dis, move 4rm here, otherwise she will kill u."

he tryd his best, bt she was holding him tight...

Khanak rubbed her eyes and want 2 get up, opened her eyes and saw shaan. she was still laying on his chest. she try 2 get up, also shaan. she saw herself and cvrd her wid blanket, both r blushng. shaan got up and went 2 washroom

michael: gud morning sir.
Shaan rolled his eyes and went into his cabin. michael sadly lookd away, and saw khanak standing dere .

khanak: gud morning, michael.
michael: gud morning.
khanak:Shaan ne kuch kaha?
michael: nhi,
khanak: dnt worry , men us se bat krun gi
michael: i m sorry sh...
khanak kept hr fnger on his lips, "no need , i already 4gv u.
michael hug her tightly" u r such a princess"
khanak: ok nw leave me, itna sara kam he.
michael: ya, thnks khanak , thnk u so much. and he leaves.

khanak: blue print to men ne Akash ko dye the, bt wo he kahan?
khanak looked 4 him, and saw he was talking wid Mehek by holding her hand.

khanak: Akash?? busy ho?

Akash( leave hr hand): nhi men to ise bta rha tha...

khanak: kya? k ye kal function men sb se achi lg rhi thi?

Akash embarsed , Mehek blushed and went 4rm dere.

Akash: jldi kam finish kro, hme jana he
khanak: kahan?

Akash(in a seductive voice): date pr..

khanak(in a serious tone): tum ne der krdi...

Akash(in filmy style): nhii , ye nhi ho skta.,
khanak laughed and beat him ,
Akash: tumhe date pr le ja kr mrna he mene , tumhara Shaan mujhe soli chra dege, jldi se kam kro, sath men chale ge.

IN EVENING

Shaan was on stairs reachng his room , his cell rang

Shaan: hmmm Akash kya ha?
Akash: room men mt jayo

Shaan: kyun, rat abhi nikla nhi?

Akash: yar rat nhi, teri sherni mere sath he.

Shaan(cnfused): sherni??

Akash: :\

Shaan(curiously): ye sb saman mere room se nikla he??

Akash: abe , khanak mere sath he, hum Danish ki re engagement party men ja rhe hen, tum bhi jldi aajayo.

Shaan(furiously): us kabootar ki to engagement last year
U.S men hogai na? us ki ring bhi us ki trhan kabootar thi , jo ur gai ??

Akash: uri nhi he, wo to tradational party thi na, ye hmare type ki party he , only 4rnds ,drink , music, fun... aur dadi ne bhi bola he tumhe bulane ko :P...

Shaan: k i'll come, cut call.

AT PARTY
Akash,danish, Ankita, khanak, Shaan standng in Danish room and talking, still dere r few minutes in da party , waiter came wid drinks glasses , Shaan was wearing all black, khanak was wearing white churidar
Shaan and danish grab da same glass, and all drinks fall, spoiled khanak dress.

Akash: shit, tumhari dress to white he, ye saf bhi nhi hogi.

khanak: its ok, Shaan driver k sath aaya tha, bahir driver he, men ghr chali jati hun, u guys enjoy...

Danish: nhi, tum aise kese ja skti ho.,

Ankita: han khanak, mere pas bilkul new dress he ,men ne aaj hi li he, aur hm tumhe shadi pr koi gift bhi na de ske, ye to tumhe leni hi pre gi,

khanak: no, its ok

Akash: wo aesi dress kese pehni g?
ankita grab her hand, kyon jb men ne pehni he? party men sb ne pehni he to ye kyon nhi pehn skti... and drag her out of da room.
IN HALL
party has started , evry1 is enjoying, drinks , music, dance... Shaan, Akash ,danish drinking while ankita came" hey guys enjoying?" Danish :"khanak kahan he? ankita pull her 4rm behind, and 3 got da shock of 1000 watt , khanak was wearing black short dress .
she was lookng dwn , in shy. Akash , Danish , Shaan staring her continuously, wid mouth opened wide , ANkita wave her hand in front of dem" hey 3 idiots, lga na zor ka jhatka?"
they stood properly, Akash and danish started praising her. bt Shaan still nt cm out of da shock. ankita pull khanak arm and mk her stand next 2 Shaan , "nw perfect , mr. hottie and mrs.hotti , da hottest couple ever" dy 3 admired shanak and left, light wents off , only disco lights r there, evry1 iz dancing in loud music, Shaan went 2 da other corner of da hall 4 drink. khanak suddenly saw, Shaan was still staring her 4rm far. she blushed, she looked here and dere , and saw again 4rm corner of her eyes, oh he is still staring while sipping his drink. she felt goosebumps on da way his sight is admiring her, her heart bouncing, she just want 2 get rid of dis awkward situation, wid courage she looked in his eyes, to tell her she caught him. Shaan embarrased , mv 2 dance floor , soon a girl join him. khanak didnt like it, a boy cm and stand nxt 2 her
viktrant: hi beautiful
khanak: hello
vkrnt: wud u like 2 dance wid me?
khanak(look Shaan): ya sure,
dy both reachd da dance floor, khanak: mujhe itna acha dance nhi aata, aap kisi aur ko join kr len.
vkrnt: oh come on, u r...
Shaan cme btwn dem, broke da dance
vkrant: xcuse me
Shaan: xcuse us, cud i dance wid my wife
vkrant: wife ,? mk sad fce, and mv.
khanak: kuch kam tha mujh se?
Shaan: just look her ,furiously.
she smiled , she just lv 2 see him furious.
she is about 2 leave, bt Shaan stopped him,
khanak: kya?
Shaan: wo..(wid wide eyes)
khanak: kya?
Shaan: tum...tumhari zip khul...
khanak: point fnger 2 him, and wid 1 hnd check her back." mujhe aise cheep jokes pasnd nhi... ye to... zip toot gai. she turn herself , her back is cvrng in shaan chest. while Shaan lookng here and dere.
Shaan: zip ka holder nikal gya hoga, press kro theek ho jayga.
khanak(weeping): mera hath nhi puhnch rha holer tk, men kya krungi ? room men kese jaun stairs pr light he, start crying.
Shaan: chup ho jao, kuch krta hun, umm... ek hi rasta he...
khanak : hoo , nhi , log kya khein ge, kuch aur socho,
Shaan: acha , aise jao gi to kya khen ge? soch lya, khre rho yahan sari zndgi men ja raha hun.
she stopped him, they began 2 dance in same position. Shaan place his chin on her shoulder, grab her arms 4rm 2 front, 4 shwng evy1 , dt dy r dancing. dey mvd slowly slowly backward leaving da dance floor. he touch her ear wid his lip 4 shwng othr dat he kissed. but it was not so easy, leaving her skin widout kissing, is realy a big deal.. he reached da chair, as he thought, he sat, and make her fall on her lap. most of ppl r busy in dancing, and if some saw dem, so just laughed , wht cud u expect 4rm newly wed couple.
her back iz collide wit his chest, she was sitting on his lap. she cant bare his body heat so about to slip bt Shaan hold her, wrapng his arm around her stomach.
wid his 2nd hand, he pushed her hair 4rm her back 2 shoulder. his every single touch mk her heart bounce, he cudnt resist, and kissed her bare shoulder, she held his hand whch was on her stomach. he started kissing her shoulder and back. his hand is cressing her body, she just close her eyes, she just wanted 2 feel da moment cmpletly. he reached 2 her zip,, he placed his teeth on it, his hot lips on her bare back, made her moan.
aftr dn, he slowly bring it down, his finger creasing her body, when he reached till end, he mvd da holder up in a jerk, her zip is closed.
she quickly got up, as well he. dy looked into each other eyes. he pull her 2ward him, dere chest collide, he hold her face wid 1 hand, and wid other tightly press her back, kissed deeper,and stronger as he cud.
on his hairs , while his mving up and dwn on her back..

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