FF Kesar-naam toh suna hi hoga chapter 24pg 69 END - Page 33

Kaun keh raha hai ye acha nahi hai..😡tu chup chap chappi likh..warana

Mera bhi reswa😳

Originally posted by: alanta

Superb rim..and nice build up..Rim please dont think all that..the essence of the story is all on Gulsar's unique bond and their true love...and esp a story of true love...and as we all know true love is some thing which we cant express in words but Gulsar put 'it' in to words through the fantastic story line which can be seldom seen on TV..and we all are those people who were fortunate to be a viewer of such a magical relation ship...and what all we write here are after effects of that wonderful experience so the out put will never lose its essence as long as Gulsar is alive in our minds...you write so wonderfully keeping Gulsar as Gulsar themselves..so dont worry...and yes I can understand, to make a FF on such a well woven story is really a challenge..but the great thing is that you are succeeding in it..so dont even think of discontinuing this...

Originally posted by: rimjhim1

Thanks alot Alanta😃😃😃.

That made me feel so much better and yeah thanks for understanding😊, my problem is exactly that, its such a well woven story, i dont want to put any bad images in anyone's mind, but if you say so😊.

Let a few other people tell me what they think and then, hopefully i will update later today😊.

Originally posted by: MR21

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Rim...dont even think abt stopping this FF...i really enjoy reading this😳...

So kesar is in full on pataoing his future MIL...lage raho kesar...he dont knew abt golgappe😲...no worries abt sab golgappe kaane jaayenge😆...

well waiting for next one...update soon...

Originally posted by: alanta

yeh tu kya keh rahin hein...bad image kaise.???.after all you wrote an FF..on a different plot and and you are doing it so well too..aur meine kya adventurous kaam kiya dha..oh only now I am realizing its gravity...original plot ko hi continue kiya..actual I only had an intention to write some dream scenes there..but kab wo series ban gayi patha hi nahin chala .just imagine meri mind mein kya kya tensions aye honge and I was anyway determined to continue it even if others like it or not...because I wanted to complete it for the reason that I my self started it once..and I am satisfied now...If I had left it in the middle due to the above mentioned reason.. then it would have remained as a disappointment..so please do continue..its a peace of your creativity..so please dont leave it in the middle..continue it until it reaches the right time for its end and IMO thats the best way of honoring our own talents and by that means giving honor to the Almighty Who gave us the talent..

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Sorry yaar I went a bit overboard..take it as a friendly chat...and please continue with your FF..it is wonderful...

Originally posted by: rimjhim1

Thanks Ramya😊.

ahahah kitna pagal hai, golgappe ka kisko nahi pata😆.