Originally posted by: cool_tuli
yaar lemme finish with the teaser first... Lot of things had cum down n i had to stop cumin here for long... but worry I'll finish the teaser n this part hopefully by tomorrow...!!! Will edit it with my comment soon... 😊
Finally Editing... But m not responsible for my lateoclock hun...! All thanx to my exams n durga puja... ( Okey..No problem...😳 'Der aaye Durust aaye'😆 I know the actual condition of Indian 'Planning Commission' 😆)
Okay cumin to Part-29 (Haila...!!!😲 Direct -29...??😲 😲 😲 Its only 9 Yaar😳,abhi toh wahaan pahunchne mein kaafi time hai😳)
Bhushan House sequence was tooo good...!!! So funny, dramatic, romantic, ummm... not getting more adjectives in my mind as of now... (colour changed coz brown is my comment color to camouflage ho rha tha😆)warna Life Time ke liye uss YAMINI naam ka Sim apni Life ke Mobile mein daalna hoga...aur yahaan toh 'Portability' ki facility bhi nahin milegi... Dude...really need your Help...yeh meri puri life ka sawaal hai...)) u noe wat guys... ye meri line hai... I keep on uttering this line weneva it cums to a relationship funda...!! 😛 (Oh !! I didn't about it...😛 warna courtesy-Tuli write karna padta😆 )
Yaaar this Pratap Shergill is least bothered about his son yaar... I pity Sam a lot...! Actually I pity his wife more...!! They never thought about a break-up thing?? I mean common- sense hai yaar... if Samrat was in a relationship with Yamini, then wudn he keep on talking about that idiot flat b****...!? He didn talk about her from d tym he has returned home n her parents especially his mom didn even ask him about her... Even then a doubt wasn raised in d family??? 😕😕😕 Sab lage pade hai Sam ki shaadi karane k liye...!!! Everybody like Gunajn so much including Sam then why don they think of her???? (Good Point...!! But,If you read 1st part...toh wahaan clear hai ki, PRATAP(SD) ne SAMRAT ko time diya tha ki,agar woh with in 2 yrs. apni pasand ki ladki se shadi nahin kar pata then,uss ke baad usse Family ki choice ki ladki se marriage karni hogi without asking any single question ,YAMINI is first choice of SD..due to his friendship to her father , He don't care about Break-up thing)
Again Bhushan Family... in this part m sorry to say but I found Tinku a bit over-the-top...! He is a kid n I think he shud noe his limitations... at certain points u hav shown d wrongness in his words but at certain places there is no opposition shown...! I mean words like Chindi-Chor, Lafange, Bhukkad n all...!!! He has to behave innocently lyka kiddo... otherwise his image is getting spoilt... He is my fav char of this whole ff... plss don spoil it lyk this...!! Kabhi shabhi accha lagta hai but all the time...😳 I hope you r getting wat m trying to say... plss don feel bad hun..! (No Yaar I don't feel bad for any criticism... But I want to clearify 1 thing... This scene is continuity of last part scene...so,showing Tinku's anger was necessary. 1 part mein anger n second part mein cool,innocent,sweet kid nahin show kar sakte😳.
and,second thing about words... toh Please read again... He called 'Chindi-chor' but,not in front of his Dad... and the other words Like... Bhukhhad, Lafange n all his Thoughts words...woh soch raha hai...keh nahin raha..😳... some points Next Parts read karne ke baad clear ho jaayenge..😳
N don't worry..we are not going to spoil his character... He is naughty n too much protective for GUNJAN ... He have a reason for do all these things. Please wait... very soon... we'll be disclose that what is the reason for his this type of behavior... Uske baad again detail mein discuss karenge...😳 )
N finally the Super Hero...!! Arnav Grewal!!!!!!
Gr88 job... even I wud hav had dun d same... Smart person... U see Gr8 minds think alike... 😆 (yaa...I know😳 You n Your GR8 [confusing] Mind😆)
But m sooo damn excited to noe the secret behind all this Grewal family confusion...! I jsu hope that it gets clarified asap...!!! N yaar i must say... Amazing family link-ups hun..!😆R - Ok...Don't worry...kuchh aur sochte hain...koi na koi raasta toh nikal hi aayega...Hey ! wait...Tumhein apni bhabhi se poochna chahiye... at least,If I am not wrong then,she is cousin of GUNJAN...?? Unhein kuchh na kuchh toh pata hoga...A - Haan...pata hoga...lekin,main unse kaise poochoon...? Woh mere call receive hi nahin kar rahin...? Meri unse baat hi nahin ho paa rahi...aur waise bhi woh aaj kal apne Parents ke ghar gayi hui hain...R - Oh...Its a Great info...Because, she is friend of my cousin...unka ghar paas mein hi hai...Main kal khud jaa kar unse miloonga... Aur unse GUNJAN ki saari information le kar tumhein call karta hoon...
Wowww u people thot soo much while writing this thing...!! I donno whom to exactly credit for this so m complimenting all 4 of u..!! 😉 (Oh ! Thanks for your compliments...😳Don't worry we'll be share this compliment equally😆without any fight😆 )
Overall... superbbly written...! but my doubts aren't cleared yet... so will pakka wait patiently for it 😃 😉 😆 Too good... Keep it up...😳 🤗 (Thanks again Tuli for this detailed comment...feeling so happy after read your views..after some light moments... story would be move on very serious Plot...n that time we disclose all mysteries till then..please wait...😳)
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