mayu🤗
whoops!late again!sholly mayu!!!
I'd better start with the first part!!!i enjoyed reading it thoroughly..just loved the way maan was trying to gain geet's attention through his naughty acts!!! i was snapped out of my dream with the last line!!!my very first reaction was like..wife??!!!😲what has mayu done!!!she has made sam aunty maan's wifey!!😆lovely os .i have got a silly doubt for you!what's meant by "phoolan devi" ??i quite didn't get that part!!
and coming the second part!it was all emotional!you have penned down maan's distress and agony in a beautiful way describable!and the way geet has handled it all was worth a read!😳and even out here in this part the last part got me ! this is getting way more interesting!!geet's past!
DO WRITE AN EPILOGUE DESCRIBING MAAN'S SITUATION!that's more of a demand!i am not gonna leave you until you do that!LOL...waiting for the next part hun!🤗moi is waiting eagerly for that!
and yeah don't forget to clear my doubt!😆
love,
~mansi*😳
Edited by -mansi95- - 14 years ago
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