FF: Chahat ki guzarish (Note p.79) - Page 24

Originally posted by: daya0628

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btw so u will know i have read it once u see my 'like' on ur update and u can expect comment soon after that 😛 will be back soon ...

Edited...

Chapter 3:

I like that she's in denial in the beginning. He's before her eyes yet she's having a hard time believing it and then she explores how it's even possible...trying to make the connections through the names of the company... thanks :)

The description of shefali understanding something was wrong from the simple gesture of Arohi...squeezing of her hand, but she was unaware of what exactly her worry was related to...and then the fact Arohi was at loss for words..which is only normal when in such shock lol...aww i love how although she has some hate for what he did to her four years ago she still seems to be mesmerized by hmm ...love is dominating :P Yep love is very dominating nd in this situation, it is very 😉

Oh there you go...this why you should never rush people ...haha but in this case i guess it was good or else she would've never came ... That is very true ...

Haha she remains lost in him and he's finished his speech ... love how his speech was nothing compared to his electrifying looks ...poor girl couldn't concentrate :P You cant really blame her, our Arjun is very good looking after all ...

Hmm so he is sitting at her table ...away from her (seems to be highlight) lol the poor girl might have fell off her chair if he was beside her LOL... i was actually thinking more than falling off the chair 😆

I liked that u switched POV...and now him thinking how she still had that spark to her...and his eyes remaining fixed upon her...haha she looked cute annoyed with the spotlight LOL...well admiring her fully I see...so he wants to explain his story...but from the way she didn't even have patience to listen to her manager about the company names...i will have to say all the best to him LOL... Yep, good luck to him, mayb she might listen, mayb not 😛

See he is trying to talk to her and she is going about like he doesn't exist haha...oww Arjun says 'my girl' lol...and he is getting annoyed ...that the one girl he wants to talk to is the only girl ignoring him!

Oh ho haha he 'knows' she can't keep her eyes off of him eh ...thats an advantage ...haha arohi is jealous ...and wondering why. ...thats what it's like when there is a certain possessive feel for someone haha its deep within her...her feelings for someone.

Oh so he follows her :) and she is still ignoring...it must be so hard for her :P he catches up and grabs her hand and omg he asks for a kiss to let go...and of course she gives him stomp instead ... The stomp was needed for the moment 😆

Hmm Jai and Dhondu ...great plan getting them together to dance...Arjun walks to where Arohi is in center stage of dance floor...and he calls her and she knows the voice...of course it is recognized by the heart na... but she was so cold towards him...saying words that pierced his heart...but i guess she was hurt somehow? ,,and the reason is remembered with him around...so i guess thatz her reason to push push push him away ...I love that it hurts her to hurt him ...even though she feels that he deserves such treatment but at same time she doesn't want to give him such treatment..

Aww the dance together and eyes locked..and she tears and he kisses it away ...and then she runs away as she's overwhelmed with the moment... and you ended it!!!! Lol ...i guess i will have to wait now ... I cnt write more than dat .. my fingers hurt from typing.. seems lyk u will hav 2 wait a long time since i am not in the mood to update again :P

Great update hun...loved it...continue soon... Thanks :)

Take care...love you lots...

Phir milenge chalte chalte

You really hav no idea hw much i love reading ur comments, they make my day .. I love the way u analyse everything, makes me as a writer really happy, thanks 😊

Originally posted by: MsSweetheart96

You really hav no idea hw much i love reading ur comments, they make my day .. I love the way u analyse everything, makes me as a writer really happy, thanks 😊

Originally posted by: moonkmh

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sanju i'm late yar!! :( :(

Originally posted by: addictive_kmh

Nice update...
The way it was described in the earlier updates, i felt like there was something terrible that happened between both of them and none of them want to see each other or have to do anything with the other person...
But reading this update i came to know that the hate is only one sided...Arjun clearly loves her till date and wants Arohi in his life...then there must be truly some misunderstanding between them...

C'mon Arohi give Arjun at least a chance to explain...even an enemy deserve one chance of explanation...he is Arohi's ARJUN...he should get more than one chance to prove that he loves her😉

Jai, Dhondhu, Shefali are such good friends...they are trying to clear things between Arjun and Arohi...

Thanks for the pm...waiting for the next update...

Taking this oppurtunity to wish
Happy b'day ...Mr. Karan Kundra and Mr. Amitabh Bachchan 😊

Originally posted by: daya0628

Reserved ...
btw so u will know i have read it once u see my 'like' on ur update and u can expect comment soon after that 😛 will be back soon ...

Edited...

Chapter 3:

I like that she's in denial in the beginning. He's before her eyes yet she's having a hard time believing it and then she explores how it's even possible...trying to make the connections through the names of the company...

The description of shefali understanding something was wrong from the simple gesture of Arohi...squeezing of her hand, but she was unaware of what exactly her worry was related to...and then the fact Arohi was at loss for words..which is only normal when in such shock lol...aww i love how although she has some hate for what he did to her four years ago she still seems to be mesmerized by hmm ...love is dominating :P

Oh there you go...this why you should never rush people ...haha but in this case i guess it was good or else she would've never came ...

Haha she remains lost in him and he's finished his speech ... love how his speech was nothing compared to his electrifying looks ...poor girl couldn't concentrate :P

Hmm so he is sitting at her table ...away from her (seems to be highlight) lol the poor girl might have fell off her chair if he was beside her LOL...

I liked that u switched POV...and now him thinking how she still had that spark to her...and his eyes remaining fixed upon her...haha she looked cute annoyed with the spotlight LOL...well admiring her fully I see...so he wants to explain his story...but from the way she didn't even have patience to listen to her manager about the company names...i will have to say all the best to him LOL...

See he is trying to talk to her and she is going about like he doesn't exist haha...oww Arjun says 'my girl' lol...and he is getting annoyed ...that the one girl he wants to talk to is the only girl ignoring him!

Oh ho haha he 'knows' she can't keep her eyes off of him eh ...thats an advantage ...haha arohi is jealous ...and wondering why. ...thats what it's like when there is a certain possessive feel for someone haha its deep within her...her feelings for someone.

Oh so he follows her :) and she is still ignoring...it must be so hard for her :P he catches up and grabs her hand and omg he asks for a kiss to let go...and of course she gives him stomp instead ...

Hmm Jai and Dhondu ...great plan getting them together to dance...Arjun walks to where Arohi is in center stage of dance floor...and he calls her and she knows the voice...of course it is recognized by the heart na... but she was so cold towards him...saying words that pierced his heart...but i guess she was hurt somehow? ,,and the reason is remembered with him around...so i guess thatz her reason to push push push him away ...I love that it hurts her to hurt him ...even though she feels that he deserves such treatment but at same time she doesn't want to give him such treatment..

Aww the dance together and eyes locked..and she tears and he kisses it away ...and then she runs away as she's overwhelmed with the moment... and you ended it!!!! Lol ...i guess i will have to wait now ...

Great update hun...loved it...continue soon...

Take care...love you lots...

Phir milenge chalte chalte

Originally posted by: punam2712

THE UPDATE HAS BEEN VERY BEAUTIFULLY ANALYSED BY DAYA

YOU HAVE DONE A GREAT JOB IN SHOWING THEIR FEELINGS FOR EACH OTHER

AROHI IS DISTURBED TO SEE HIM BUT CANT GET HIM OUT OF HER MIND

HE IS DYING TO TALK TO HER AND SHE IS IGNORING HIM

LOVED THE SONG AND THE DANCE

NOW WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED 4 YEARS AGO TO TEAR THEM APART WHEN THEY WERE SO MUCH IN LOVE

Originally posted by: punam2712

THE UPDATE HAS BEEN VERY BEAUTIFULLY ANALYSED BY DAYA