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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#161

awesome part!
Armaan's father married again! felt bad 4 Armaan's mom!
loved AR moments!
Armaan was already married b4 marrying Ridz! i don't want Ridz's future 2 b same alike his mom
cont soon
thnx 4 pm

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Urvi

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Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#162

hey dear
loved the update,waiting 4 more
cont soon n plz pm me

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29priya

@29priya

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#163

awesome installment
loved it..
update soon..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: Riarai2346

Thankx a lot for such a lovely comment janii
thankx a lot

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#165

contined...😊
Armans fisrt mother stops for while and say:apko kia farak perhta hai k hum ne kia kaha hai???Riddhima;pata nahi per mujhe asa lagta hai is ghar mai sirf ap mujhe samjhti hai.Arman mother:hum to khud ko kabhi samjh nahi pai to apko kia sakjh pao ga.Riddhima:plz mujhe apse bat karni hai ,plz pata nahi kio per apko dakh kar mujhe lagta hai k aj mai agar kuch nahi kia to shaid kal meri bhi yahi halat ho gi mai nahi apna arman ko kisi or k sath share ker sakti ,mujhe nahi maloom k ap apna husband ko 2 or woman se kasa share ker sakt hai kasa kersakti hai,ap kasa apna sab se kimti insan ko share ker sakta hai huh???Arman mother speaks:jo insan kabhi apna tha hi nahi jo zabardasti thopa gaya hai,uska bada mai mai kia kar sakti ho,ap bhoht massom ho or jo ladki ai wo bhi bhoht masoom hai bilkul hamari beti "muskan" or hamari choti behan "hena",in dono ki zindagi us insan ne tabah kar di,hamari behan or beti ka to chehra bhi dakhna nasseb nahi hui,tarasta reh gai jin do ko hum ne ma ki terha skbhala un k sath kia kia arman k baba ne hamay kuch nahi pata,hum ne muskan ko pada kia,unko dill se laga ker rakha ,arman se to hamay kabhi umeed hi nahi thi lakin humara liye to sirf muskan hi sab kuch thi,Ma papa ko to choro to bhot der ho gai bas "Hena" thi hamari zindagi mai,ap na sahi pehchana hum bhi england se hai,hum kush tha apni zindgai mai lakin phir arman k baba ai pehla unho na hena or phir hamari zindagi berbad ki,hamay bhi apki terha yaha dokha se laya gia or hum phans gai,lakin phir us khuda ki zaat na hum per ehsan kia "muskan"ko bejh kar per wo bhi ziada der tak nahi raha humara sath,ab hamay is zindagi se hi nafrat hai.Riddhima:Muskan unka bada mai kabhi nahi suna???ap mujhe batai gi muskan k bada mai.Arman mother tell her about muskan ,how she fell in love with a guy and when arman and his baba came to know he kills her ,or make her in prison she dont know.Riddhima eyes weeled up with tear,she is now sure she has to leav from here she has to.Riddhima:plz kia ap mujhe yaha se jana mai help kara gi plz.Arman;s mom not reply fo r some second and then she said:hum tumhari madad kara ga,shaid isi terha muskan or heena ki mafi mang sako,unko mo dikha saka ga marna k bad.Riddhima:ap meri wakai mai help kara gi.Arman mom:ha hum tumhari wakai hi help kara ga,shaid kisi ak ki madad karna k bad ap sakoon se mar pai gi!!!.Riddhima in ecxitement hugg her ,so tightly hugg that after long arman's mother smile.Riddhima mumble a buye and left from there in a very good mood.But when she enters her and arman room and saw arman laying with ahan on bed ,realization stuck her.she is leaving mean she has to leave arman!!!!her arman whom she married,shom she loved,he is the first love of her life first love!!!she is going to leave him,he is her life ,but she has to do this for her son.She has to leave arman for her sake for her son sake.Happiness and smile which adorned her face was not on her face any more.
Arman saw riddhima comming in their room with a smily face,SMILY FACE ,she smiles after so long.He was dying to see this smile,this one smile whom he can do what ever she wants but not one thing "he cant leave his baba ,his place" ,he was wacthing her face ,he saw how she changes her expresion,from happy to realization and then a sad face;why she is sad is she sad bcz of me?????,arman thought.But before he could thing something else he felt riddhima hugging him,she held him very close as her life depends on this hugg.Arman was shocked bcz never in these mounths she hugg him,or even smile at him.But soon he founds riddhima sobbing in his arms.Arman hugged her back.
Riddhima feels arman hands on her waist ,he was hugging her.Riddhima closes her eyes ,feeling his touch as if trying to store these memories.Riddhima slowly broke the hugg and look towards arman eyes and see love for her and strange happiness and glow. Riddhima remembers the same happiness ang low on his face when confesses his feeling.For time a being riddhima wanted to forget everything everything that happen between them from past mounths,she just wana be in his arms.Riddhima moves forward an kisses his eyes.arman closes his eyes when he felts her lips on his eyes.Arman held riddhima tightly.Arman look at riddhima eyes then at her lips ,he kiss her swetly yet pasionnatley.Riddhima to respond equaly.Soon arman broke broke the kiss and said in a mere whisper:i miss you and believe me i love you alot??i love you soo much that i can never exoress after mom and musk...i mean after mom i only love you ,by saying this e again kiss riddhima!.Riddhima dont say anything.She just close her eyes and just closes her eyes and let arman love the way he want to do...
Both lay in eacth other arms,one with stisfactry smile and one with a sad smile.They both with different thought.Arman went to deep slumber but riddhima was awake as it is last night in arman arms.
At 4 am riddhima with bag and ahan leave from there,soo armans first mom came and thorugh hidden way took riddhima out of hawali.Before leaving riddhima left a letter for arman.Riddhima:thank you soo much for helping me lakin agar arman ya baba ko pata chal gaya k ap na meri mada ki to kia hoga??Armans mother smiles and say:kuch nahi ho ga,bas mujhe bhi azad kar dia gai ga.Ridddhima:mai apko kabhi bhool nahi pao gi,ap ak or ehsan kara gi mujh per arman k khiyal rakhna plz.Armans mother just node and let riddhima go from there.
In the morning arman wake up with a smile as last night after lone time he get back his riddhima.He returned to riddhima but saw no one there not even ahan he thought may be she will be feeding ahan outside.So, he wnet to wasroom ,when he came he again saw riddhima and ahan not there.He felt strange.So,he went outside and search ahan and riddhima in the whole house but riddhima and ahan is no where insight.He said his guard to find riddhima and ahan.When he came back he saw a letter on his side bed table.He opens it;
Arman!!iam leaving,iam sorry but for son i have to leave you,i cant bear that my son turn out to be like your father arman i cant bear.I cant sahre you with any one else i know you loves me but still your first wife has more ri8 over you as she is your parents choice your first wife not i am!!!!Arman i love you ,i love you like anything i try to convince you to come with me but you dont come with me so i took and decision iam leaving you.
Arman plz dont hate me plz but...
Buye,take care
your ,riddhima
Tears role down from arman,he tore the letter away and sits on floor crying...
riddhima has left him,he still cant beleive it...

guys i guess this the 2 last part i guess so😕 khuda or muhabbt is also gonna end it:)just bear me only this mounth:)
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Edited by Riarai2346 - 14 years ago

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Syed Shuridh Rahman Khan Mijan/Shuridh.

@mijanur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#166

good.after a long day .i am the first one to comment.it feels good sisters.
ok now for the update.you surely show you people become vere mature writtier.very well thought writting. this update one of the most important part of this ff.the flashback scene is really interesting.the emotional trumoil of ridz and the feeling of being betrayed is very welly reprsent in this ff.

Edited by mijanur - 14 years ago

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#167

continued😊
Armans fisrt mother stops for while and say:apko kia farak perhta hai k hum ne kia kaha hai???Shilpa;pata nahi per mujhe asa lagta hai is ghar mai sirf ap mujhe samjhti hai.Arman mother:hum to khud ko kabhi samjh nahi pai to apko kia sakjh pao ga.Shilpa:plz mujhe apse bat karni hai ,plz pata nahi kio per apko dakh kar mujhe lagta hai k aj mai agar kuch nahi kia to shaid kal meri bhi yahi halat ho gi mai nahi apna arman ko kisi or k sath share ker sakti ,mujhe nahi maloom k ap apna husband ko 2 or woman se kasa share ker sakt hai kasa kersakti hai,ap kasa apna sab se kimti insan ko share ker sakta hai huh???Arman mother speaks:jo insan kabhi apna tha hi nahi jo zabardasti thopa gaya hai,uska bada mai mai kia kar sakti ho,ap bhoht massom ho or jo ladki ai wo bhi bhoht masoom hai bilkul hamari beti "muskan" or hamari choti behan "hena",in dono ki zindagi us insan ne tabah kar di,hamari behan or beti ka to chehra bhi dakhna nasseb nahi hui,tarasta reh gai jin do ko hum ne ma ki terha skbhala un k sath kia kia arman k baba ne hamay kuch nahi pata,hum ne muskan ko pada kia,unko dill se laga ker rakha ,arman se to hamay kabhi umeed hi nahi thi lakin humara liye to sirf muskan hi sab kuch thi,Ma papa ko to choro to bhot der ho gai bas "Hena" thi hamari zindagi mai,ap na sahi pehchana hum bhi england se hai,hum kush tha apni zindgai mai lakin phir arman k baba ai pehla unho na hena or phir hamari zindagi berbad ki,hamay bhi apki terha yaha dokha se laya gia or hum phans gai,lakin phir us khuda ki zaat na hum per ehsan kia "muskan"ko bejh kar per wo bhi ziada der tak nahi raha humara sath,ab hamay is zindagi se hi nafrat hai.Shilpa:Muskan unka bada mai kabhi nahi suna???ap mujhe batai gi muskan k bada mai.Arman mother tell her about muskan ,how she fell in love with a guy and when arman and his baba came to know he kills her ,or make her in prison she dont know.Shilpa eyes weeled up with tear,she is now sure she has to leav from here she has to.Shilpa:plz kia ap mujhe yaha se jana mai help kara gi plz.Arman;s mom not reply fo r some second and then she said:hum tumhari madad kara ga,shaid isi terha muskan or heena ki mafi mang sako,unko mo dikha saka ga marna k bad.Shilpa:ap meri wakai mai help kara gi.Arman mom:ha hum tumhari wakai hi help kara ga,shaid kisi ak ki madad karna k bad ap sakoon se mar pai gi!!!.Shilpa in ecxitement hugg her ,so tightly hugg that after long arman's mother smile.Shilpa mumble a buye and left from there in a very good mood.But when she enters her and arman room and saw arman laying with ahan on bed ,realization stuck her.she is leaving mean she has to leave arman!!!!her arman whom she married,shom she loved,he is the first love of her life first love!!!she is going to leave him,he is her life ,but she has to do this for her son.She has to leave arman for her sake for her son sake.Happiness and smile which adorned her face was not on her face any more.
Arman saw shilpa comming in their room with a smily face,SMILY FACE ,she smiles after so long.He was dying to see this smile,this one smile whom he can do what ever she wants but not one thing "he cant leave his baba ,his place" ,he was wacthing her face ,he saw how she changes her expresion,from happy to realization and then a sad face;why she is sad is she sad bcz of me?????,arman thought.But before he could thing something else he felt shilpa hugging him,she held him very close as her life depends on this hugg.Arman was shocked bcz never in these mounths she hugg him,or even smile at him.But soon he founds shilpa sobbing in his arms.Arman hugged her back.
Shilpa feels arman hands on her waist ,he was hugging her.Shilpa closes her eyes ,feeling his touch as if trying to store these memories.Shilpa slowly broke the hugg and look towards arman eyes and see love for her and strange happiness and glow. Shilpa remembers the same happiness ang low on his face when confesses his feeling.For time a being shilpa wanted to forget everything everything that happen between them from past mounths,she just wana be in his arms.Shilpa moves forward an kisses his eyes.arman closes his eyes when he felts her lips on his eyes.Arman held shilpa tightly.Arman look at shilpa eyes then at her lips ,he kiss her swetly yet pasionnatley.Shipa to respond equaly.Soon arman broke broke the kiss and said in a mere whisper:i miss you and believe me i love you alot??i love you soo much that i can never exoress after mom and musk...i mean after mom i only love you ,by saying this e again kiss shilpa!.Shilpa dont say anything.She just close her eyes and just closes her eyes and let arman love the way he want to do...
Both lay in eacth other arms,one with stisfactry smile and one with a sad smile.They both with different thought.Arman went to deep slumber but shilpa was awake as it is last night in arman arms.
At 4 am shilpa with bag and ahan leave from there,soo armans first mom came and thorugh hidden way took shilpa out of hawali.Before leaving shilpa left a letter for arman.Shilpa:thank you soo much for helping me lakin agar arman ya baba ko pata chal gaya k ap na meri mada ki to kia hoga??Armans mother smiles and say:kuch nahi ho ga,bas mujhe bhi azad kar dia gai ga.shilpa:mai apko kabhi bhool nahi pao gi,ap ak or ehsan kara gi mujh per arman k khiyal rakhna plz.Armans mother just node and let shilpa go from there.
In the morning arman wake up with a smile as last night after lone time he get back his shilpa.He returned to shilpa but saw no one there not even ahan he thought may be she will be feeding ahan outside.So, he wnet to wasroom ,when he came he again saw shilpa and ahan not there.He felt strange.So,he went outside and search ahan and shilpa in the whole house but riddhima and ahan is no where insight.He said his guard to find shilpa and ahan.When he came back he saw a letter on his side bed table.He opens it;
Arman!!iam leaving,iam sorry but for son i have to leave you,i cant bear that my son turn out to be like your father arman i cant bear.I cant sahre you with any one else i know you loves me but still your first wife has more ri8 over you as she is your parents choice your first wife not i am!!!!Arman i love you ,i love you like anything i try to convince you to come with me but you dont come with me so i took and decision iam leaving you.
Arman plz dont hate me plz but...
Buye,take care
your ,shilpa
Tears role down from arman,he tore the letter away and sits on floor crying...
shilpa has left him,he still cant beleive it...

guys i guess this the 2 last part i guess so😕 khuda or muhabbt is also gonna end it:)just bear me only this mounth:)
plz hit the like button and comment

Edited by Riarai2346 - 14 years ago

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S.B.

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Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#168

That was such an emotional part...

Somewhere shilpa's decision to leave armaan is right.. as a mother she wants the best for her child...
But also feel sad for armaan... he loves shilpa but that he is not willing to leave that place is just the wrong thing he is doing...

I really feel sad for armaan's mom.. she has been through so much and now she helped shilpa.. hope no one find out that she helped shilpa in escaping from there...

oh... i so can't wait for the next chapter...to know what going to happen next

Eagerly waiting for the next part'

Thanks for the pm'