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Posted: 12 years ago
aww...amazing update..
Geet to sachhi me crazy hai kisi se bhi kuch bhi baat krti hai...bt i luvd it... πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update di
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
am still smiling after reading this update...
its sooo good.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Dhundhlae aks

part 7


 
 
Like she cared. She just simply admired her shopping proudly
armaan came & helped her out of the sweater... why r u buying this..
she snapped it & put it back in her basket..I like it.
Armaan '
tu kis se baat ka rahi thi
Geet '
pata nahi
armaan '
yeh delhi hain
Geet ' wo delhi ka nahi hain
he gave her an annoyed look. She payed for the shopping & drove back with armaan.
 
 
 
They went to prachi's house. Both armaan & Geet had to be at their best behavior in front of prachi's parents.  Both the parents were central govt employee & have high expectations from prachi. They where really strict with her. But given their daughter everything. Even now they shifted to delhi just for her college. Her dad Mr dixit still has to travel 6days week to reach to his office.
 
But prachi.. kya kahen..
very simple.. sweet hardworking. Done everything to fulfill her parents wish. She made it to this engg college with all her hard work.
 
Geet just loves her simpleness. .. probably.. she is something.. that Geet can never be.. so kind of Geet admires her immensely.
Off course the admiration is vise verse.. even prachi admires her for her bindas maat carefree life. Kind of something she can never be..
bechmain phasa tho armaan.. buddy to both.
 
 
 
Mrs dixit opened the door & looked at Geets dress & gave it an disapproving look. Geet gulped her saliva.. & gave a wide smile. Hello aunty
she nodded '
so tumhe bhi iss college main admission mil gaya?
Armaan was taken a back with the taunt he wanted to stop her..
nahi aunty issen tho...
Geet immediately pinched him.
Prachi came in sweetly & hugged Geet.
They both giggled behind Mrs Dixit & ran into the room.
Armaan smiled weakly & sat there.. even after so many years of acquaintance he was not allowed in prachi's room. But sitting there was also not very comfortable.. he pretended to answer a call & went out. He exhaled sharply & sat in the car.. hearing to music.
 

Geet showed her shoppings to prachi.
Prachi ' high neck? yuck!!!
Main ne tuje high neck main kabhi nahi dehka
Geet smiled '
I am trying something new
armaan peeped from the window..
actually kisi ke advice pe
prachi was shocked '
wat?
Geet rolled her eyes
prachi '
tu delhi phunchi nahi & started all this
armaan '
don't ask yaar.. this was her 20th guy..probably
started with some guy in the Jeep..

Geet proudly offered '
hot chikna
tab se aab taak.. she is been either whistling or drooling & this was hieghts.. na jaan na phenchan.. uska aur aapna pura shopping karvadiya
prachi looked at her in disbelieve  ' wat?
Armaan '
aur thodi der uss changing room main rahethen tho.. shayad ek dosera ka family planning  bhi kardethen
prachi was bit embarrassed.
Armaan managed to jump in by then.
Prachi instantly checked if the door was locked '
thank god
both armaan & Geet shook their heads '
sach main thu bahut dar pouk hain
prachi '
yaar u know mama na
armaan & Geet mocked
..ya ya ya..
Geet ' aacha teehk hain we will leave now...
armaan coolly walks with them
prachi.. pleads him to use the window.
ok.. this is the last time hain.. kal taak aunty ka kuch setting kardena.
Prachi smiled.. this is been the case since so many years now.
Her parents know armaan since they were in 6th std.. still no boys means. No !!!
prachi dropped them to the car & came back in immediately. she was not allowed to stand & talk outside.
Mrs dixit ' prachi
ji mama
Mrs dixit '
I don't want u to lose focus understand
ji mama
Mrs dixit ' dosti yaari sab teehk hain.. lekin... concentrate on studies.
Sure mama
Mrs dixit ' I don't want anything less than the best
she sweetly nodded. She had..they have done so much for her.
 

 
Geet was again & again looking at the tops ..while they were driving back to her flat.
Armaan ' Geet kuch zyada nahi hogaya
she made all kind of faces
.. I needed this.. top for my first day.. & uske saat ki jeans.. yeh sweater..this high neck ..i don't have anything like this. I don't have sneakers to go with jeans. So I brought this one.
Again I had to pick this jeans for my original sneaker.
Aur yeh.. college bag tho..
armaan stared at her ..knowing she was convincing herself.. actually preparing herself for the next firing from mama.
 
 
The moment they entered the flat her phone rang she picked up instantly..
hai mama
rano ' yanha se sareen shopping kar ke gayen thina tum
Geet covered the reciver & whispered to armaan..
itni jaldi.. pata chal jata hain kya?
Armaan nodded sadly
rano '
Geet
stop whispereing to armaan & listen to me
Geet giggled
rano got really angry now '
issen liya I didn't want u to go that college
u get everything easily..thats why u don't respect anything
thoda moo banaya.. tho papa sab le dethen hain
u don't have any respect for money.. or us.
Bas aapni masti
not even once do u think how much effort goes in getting all this up for u
Geet got really hurt...
after I reach here ...this is ur first call & this is wat u have to tell me
u didn't even once ask me how I am?
How is my flat?
Rano '
ur dad arranged everything for u.. I know it will be the best in the world
& abt u... did u even once bother calling me & telling me that u reached safely.
Oh I forgot.. u had to shop..
after all uss credit card ka bill tumhe thodi pay karna hota hain
Geet yelled back..
nahi chahiyen apka credit card.. aapken paisen
she threw the phone & the cloths away.
 
Armaan was shocked at her reaction. He knew she was little upset leaving HP.. even aunty would have been really emotional & bit angry she was never in fav of her joining this college.
 
 
Well this is was Geet.. taking things to heart..which u least expect she would. She could forgive u for a murder but .. choti si baat dil main le kar betjayegi.
 
Armaan cleared his throat to say something.. DON'T .. just get out she screamed. He nodded quietly ..pulling his hand away.. going out.. looking at her one last time before leaving. He knew she had to be left alone.
 
 
precap
maans reaction of meeting her in the changing room. 
-PREV   PART 6   NEXT  PART 8-
plz check for the updates on the Maaneet FF thread
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
PLEASE PLEASE MOTIVATE ME

love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yiipiiieee...!!!! Waiting !!!!
Lol... I was supposed to be waiting...!!!
Anyways... Me first accidentally !!! yipppiieee...

Res for comments πŸ˜‰

ok...so this the combined comment for the previous two updates... Just loved every bit of it !!! The changing room scene was the best di... The way they helped each other in selecting the dresses was awesome !!! Love both of them... They r just sooo adorable...!!!!
Oops.. Rajveer seems to like Geet's bubbly nature...!!! Looks like every one here knows Maan n Geet except them knowing each other...infact not even seen each other !!!
Geet talks so much di... N she literally made me laugh till my sides started aching...all the while she was in the changing room !!!
Good that Maan also understud that there is no use of being shy with this girl...lol

This update was also awesome di... Looks like Prachi is the odd one out among them... But she is quite sweet !!! Awww...poor Geet got scolded by her mom... Ab muh latak gaya bechari ka...!!! Poor armaan also cant do much abt it...
Thanx for thw lovely updates di...
Cant wait to hear frm Maan abt their second meeting...
Cont soon !!!!
    Edited by Sameenaas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
sachhi yaarπŸ˜”...yeh kitni slow story haiπŸ€”...abhi tak maaneet miley bhi nahi i mean amne samneπŸ˜•...maaneet ek frame mein kab ayenge😍

luvd prachi...πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow what a start to the day read ur new ff and just wen I was abt to complete it and u updated it
And above that I got the news of my new job yippee :D
Love u muskan for such great stories
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update loved it
waiting for maans reaction
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
she is so short tempered!!
waitin for their actual meetin