FF: INTEHA ~ completed ~ P.33 - Page 21

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Posted: 14 years ago
Prithvi was always the best among them after Varun...
Prithvi's feelings and commitments were always genuine I felt...
His words and actions this time showed it...
Alas! It always comes to the fact of not speaking or asking the right person at the right moment right...
Half-truths are always dangerous na...
If only they did have asked Ila earlier so much could have been avoided...
Ah well life isn't a bed of roses...
Sad that this has to end soon...
But well it has run its share I guess...
Precap-
Wow a real dhamaka!
Thanks for the PM hun...🤗
Kudos👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thks Tich for the beautiful update. Waiting for the next update as u r going to include prida scene. luved it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nicely written.. and Ila confessing the truth... i liked it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Tichhh...

Nice part...!! I agree with some points n disagree with some...😕 @ Damz behavior with Avni before Pri's truth is out- so unlikely of her...😲😳 Ila's confession- spot on 👍🏼... overall very good part 👏...!! Waiting for nxt part...update soon...!!


@ Precap- Inder's n Chaitanya's truth out t/g...n Prida romantic moments...Damz forgive him so early...😲 Story is moving faster dan CV's stroy...Disappointed...😒
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PS- I knoe v hve already discuss a lot abt dis ff...n its ending soon but for some reason I wanted d story to proceed slowly may b dats why me disagree with its pace...No offense meant...Plzz dnt take it personally😳...U knoe I love ur writing...!!


-Nitika
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the PM 🤗
Its awfully awesum yaar kya bolu i jus loved it👏
but pls dnt end it
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cblover

wow.👏...superb👏...really nice as usual...👏

thanku for the pm...👍🏼
nd the lovely update also 😃

thanks a lot jaan...
for appreciating and commenting..
loved your emos
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prernahazra

Thanks for the PM 🤗
Its awfully awesum yaar kya bolu i jus loved it👏
but pls dnt end it

thanks appi..
waise this ff has already ended but for you all if the demand continues as i have told to nitika i'll be writing a sequel for this may be in another character's pov with a different title coz inteha-2 sounds odd.. suggest a title.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini_s

nicely written.. and Ila confessing the truth... i liked it..

thanks a lot shalini..
i had to make ila confess kya karun...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pia09

Thks Tich for the beautiful update. Waiting for the next update as u r going to include prida scene. luved it.

thanks pia ji. yes, update would be a treat for pridaholics and then later savni track would continue...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: crazypridaholic

Tichhh...

Nice part...!! I agree with some points n disagree with some...😕 @ Damz behavior with Avni before Pri's truth is out- so unlikely of her...😲😳 Ila's confession- spot on 👍🏼... overall very good part 👏...!! Waiting for nxt part...update soon...!!


@ Precap- Inder's n Chaitanya's truth out t/g...n Prida romantic moments...Damz forgive him so early...😲 Story is moving faster dan CV's stroy...Disappointed...😒
😔



PS- I knoe v hve already discuss a lot abt dis ff...n its ending soon but for some reason I wanted d story to proceed slowly may b dats why me disagree with its pace...No offense meant...Plzz dnt take it personally😳...U knoe I love ur writing...!!


-Nitika

nitika damini's behaviour is very much justified because no clean hearted woman would ever raise her finger at her husband who has married her with all the rituals in front of the world. she wanted to know the truth from prithvi's mouth, that's it. that is actually very much like damini because in the press conference damini didnt give a damn inder's proofs until prithvi himself confessed. that's the reason i love lnmdj.
@precap: well precap is just for knowledge not for guessing the storyline or decisions.dont you want to know where prida disappeared previous night???
p.s: this ff ends where the girls give boys a chance that's it. Not until they forgive them completely.

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