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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#191

a superb updt... luved it to the core... so dutta luving nakkus bhaashans and ofcourse acting according to it... Loved Arjun and Dheeps too... Aarohi is a gone case too much pampered which makes her a selfish person... so how is dutta going to say sorry to nakku??? and where is he taking her??? ... updt sooon...

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sinak

@sinak

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#192

That was a good one. So Naku's siblings have arrived. So where is Dutta taking her

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#193

You are really my chamak challooo :P

ahahahhahaahhaha

dayaaa what an update

i was waiting for it like everrr :D

but i have stepped aside being a pain ion the A . - - , like MIshelzzz :P

hahahhahhahha but some time being an ass is best thing u go Missy .

love u for making Daya do it :d

Ok so Miss daya

kahan say aise kameenay ideas ate hai ???

tell me tell me :P

teh officers were Naku brother sioster

hahhahahhhahahha

i was laughing like a maniac and the way Deeps

shout at Dutta

hahahhahahahh

behn kam thi k she also yelled at Dutta ,

Mr, Dutta world feared u but not this family

and bechara Baaji , they way u describd his expressions

wooo

i enjoyed the way u describe each and every one expression

it was hilarious ,confusion , angry , and so much more :D

epiccc

and wooo arjun cant get a better entryyy :D

i so love and best Dutta hates when he feels he didnt know abt Naku :P

that is just too cute of him

and atlast ahem ahemmm

he and Naku in his car , on the way to ummm

and THT I S THE CLIFF HANGER grrr

Dayaaa i hate clif hangers !~%@#%$^

and ur turning master in it

pl zplz plz update soon naaa

plzzz !!!!!!!!!!!11

but all in all , rabchik updateee :D

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Yuvika

@Yuvika_15

Moderator

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#194

haha aww it was arjun n deeps pulling baji's leg...haha n SP asked thm 2...lol...funi incident i mus say...very least expected i didnt think these officers wud b a sham bt i guess wen they r in a hurry 2 leave it made me realise they r dodgy n thn naku interrogating thm confirmed they r her bro n sis...awww so glad tht naku wnt hav 2 work in 3 places, obv wil help out for shalu's wedding as sachin is her best friend...cnt w8 2 c naku's reaction 2 it... cos sachin didnt mention tht he's gtin married 2 her...

wow dutta n naku going out sumwer...i wonder wer? n hw he intends 2 make it up 2 her?

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sona89

@sona89

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#195

nice up 😊once a week plz up ,dutta having feeling for naku ,naku FR soon 😊

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prncz

@prncz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#196

update my comments on pg 26 😉

loved it

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#197

hi Sharmilee! Daya...yes it's me not so late Latti! nearly made it,,oye you are truly on a roll..why ? Iam trying to figure out what has got up her sleeve!...

chapter 5: NTL:

~so straightto the point without beating about bush,Baji under srutiny by a group of CBI officials, and they are not smiling or cracking any jokes either.The charge, uncanny suicide of Baji's 'emmh girl friend in USA. And then followed the battle, of disclosing ,withholding information, official ivestigative jargon versus the complaints of Baji's familymembers.Arohi's shady remark to her brother about the family pulling a few strings here and there to getting out of the hawalaat! was quite funny ,as it so raised more doubts in the minds of the cops towards the complete family..so amusing Daya. ummh , bit of putting the sexist attitude ,woman cop treatment given to the officer by both Baji and Dutta. However the lady gives back as good as she gets, which even lands her in a spot of bother with who else but the keen ,mean , lean man!But I have to admit Daya female cop, and I gather a young attractive one, I have a smug feeling may be she and Baji can hit it off!!... What! a character certificate did'nt know Daya whether this was a requirement or by way of jest?..so good!!! readers guessing👏

~ hey great! Naku cinders arrives but miss brainy gets to work a.s.a.p,thank heavens some one has grey cells that function!! Naku smart challenging all the way..pretty clued on,asking for ID's and warrant etc; and what followed was nothing short of utterly loopy ,lame twisted, mass of hilarious leg pulling .😃😃👏Daya enjoyed the comedy caper!!and so you introduce .very cleverly two more players in this story Arjun and Deepali ,Naku's siblings!...Ok me smart ass! admits you got me!! Well done good thinking in terms of narration and plot, suspence ,comedy

and finally the introduction of two new characters ⭐️ and SP in on all Baji's leg pulling act!

~ so Arjun, wants Naku to quit her three jobs ,that seemed decisive , but amused to note Dutta's insecurity ,would that mean she would stop working at his place? so the man'sinterested. But we find out that she wold continue till shallo's wedding is out of the way ,good that should give Dutta to get on with it!..Oh,Dutta overlooking and softening to Deepali's in act short words towards him...and what's more Naku's work on Dutta is beginning to be evident!

~ this is the hightlight ⭐️ of the UD for me Daya,the two friends together,Dutta making unabashed confessions before his friend Baji ,about how Naku was making a mark on him ,so much so that she has become from, in the words of Baji" worker to a friend" lovely very intial LTL1... also note worthy is how Dutta relays Naku's qualities to his best friend! great Daya well expressed.

~ and then Dutta's sudden need to apologise to Naku...smart move especially if he has other

cards he wants to share with her,and all this before a mighty confused Baji...loved the last bit in the end ..big time memories of LTL1 ..HIS WORDS and her twist of her dupatta corner..awwwh lovely Dya enjoyed the UD...please continue... waiting to see where he takes her? and if we are lucky, what he might say to her? with much love xxx Hammie

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suhana19

@suhana19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#198

Reserved 😉will be back soon 🤗

Edited😃

Mein aa gaye 😆late latiff again😆...But here🤗

Thanx a lot for the wonderful update and Pm🤗Loved it as always❤️

Wow love the way u created the suspense😆 and naku trying to be funny 😉...Sabko Zor ka jhat ka zoro se lagaa😆...The intro os naku"s siblings were good ...And SP and naku was part of the game ...was just too good ...

Awww arjun and deeps wants naku to quits jobs ...and that too every one found 3 jobs ...Dutta was suprised and shocked to find out that they are her siblings ...

Poor him was also getting lil sad that she wont be wrking ..but then deeps said she will stay until shalu"s wedding coz she dnt leave any wrk incomplete ...😉

Loved the last part ...Dutta wanna apologize and is taking naku somewhere ...can"t wait for the nxt part ...pls jaldi update karna ...

Phir milenge chalte chalte 😆

Lots of love and hugs

suhana🤗

Edited by suhana19 - 14 years ago

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

Alumni

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: prncz
resd Edited 😛
Aja my canadian connection 😆

I loved the update yaar...loved the intro for nakku siblings...😆😆😆with Dutta ,Bajji and the entire phamily ,,,,
thank u ...i enjoyed writing it...😛

poor bajji wht a shock he must have gt ,,hope he gets to pay bak ( an idea 😉😆)
haha thanks for the idea will defo keep that in mind 😉

and loved the way dutta is rationally accepting nakku and her character and is liking her bashans and being a gentle man waited for dheeps to reach hme before driving offf ,,, loved it
yup he is so falling for her and he dont even know it 😛
as for the act of waiting...heehee that was to show he cares and is very soft hearted 😆

and ofcourse ,,he wants to apologize and has taken nakku alone sme where ,😳 will he buy her a gift awww
lol thanks to u i have gotten idea 😉 chal the next update is going well...I think all TaSha and only Tasha for this one...😛

,hmm we all lookign forward to this coming update ☺️
heehee u blushing re...what u thinking 😆😆😉

and because you love leaving us on a clifff na waiintg for the parachute to take us thru 😡😡😡
LMAO this is cliff hanger but unintended...kind of just happened 😳

we still love you 😉 and absoulutely love your updates 😉
thank you 🤗
will update soon pakka ...need to work on WOL too

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

Alumni

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: ushankitvc
a superb updt... luved it to the core... so dutta luving nakkus bhaashans and ofcourse acting according to it... Loved Arjun and Dheeps too... Aarohi is a gone case too much pampered which makes her a selfish person... so how is dutta going to say sorry to nakku??? and where is he taking her??? ... updt sooon...

hey hun, thanks for commenting as always 😃 glad u loved it...yup D is falling for her and he doesnt even realize it ...and yup Arjun and Dheeps will surely liven the party going on in this FF ...i feel like there is too many ppl ...i will soon be shippig em off some long lost island 😆😆 as for D taking Naku ...u will see where and why soon 😛

Originally posted by: sinak
That was a good one. So Naku's siblings have arrived. So where is Dutta taking her

thanks hun...i know u were waiting for update ...sorry bout the wait...as for where D is taking N u will know soon enough 😉

Originally posted by: sona89
nice up 😊once a week plz up ,dutta having feeling for naku ,naku FR soon 😊

thanks hun...glad u liked it :) I will try to update once a week ...but can not make promises... FR gee ...i am very confused with how to go about that at the moment 😕
thanks for comments and reading...will try to update soon 😃

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