FF: Chahat ki guzarish (Note p.79) - Page 20

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Originally posted by: -vrshn-

lol! raman di?? aap bhi?! 😆

Originally posted by: punam2712

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GIRLS YOU HAVE ONE MORE CONTENDER FOR THE FIRST SPOT

LETS SEE WHO WINS THE NEXT RACE

I THINK I WILL COMPILE A CHART TO SEE WHO WINS IN THE END

SHOULD WE KEEEP TRACK FOR THE NEXT ONE MONTH😉

RAMAN LOVED THE FACT THAT YOU JOINED THESE CRAZY GIRLS

Hmm...can surely see how anxious and excited Arohi was while dressing up for the moment. i guess she must be feeling she is about to experience something special (sixth sense :P). Loved the saree she wore..like blue :) simple. Shefali caught her :P

you surely know how to tease ur readers...dont ya :P gonna make us wait for the big moment...cant wait how she reacts when she sees Arjun...her heart is gonna beat like crazy. dying to know what exactly happened between them :(

It was a beautiful update. excited for the next one.

Helllooo WHY DID YOU STOP THERE????!!!! 😭

Hey Sanju...mein aagai :D

What a start with background information...already contrasting characters...one has certain dislike with rain while the other loves it...one is singer, rich &famous...the other is spoiled rich brat lol...love that they seem so incompatible ...but opposites attract na :P

So love birds have separated to fly in own directions and it's been four years...wow ..ok so let's see where this journey takes us :P

Chapter One:

- Haila ...I love the description of this hilltop house for ms.arohi aluwalia :)

- Oh she has servants working at the snap of a finger ...running around, completing all her demands... sounds to me like one stone-hearted woman...working people like that :S

- Oh so u clarified that...hard on the outside but soft on the inside ;) aww 'buried her innocence' what a way to put it...so only Ramu & Shefali know her real, true, lovable side...

- She doesn't like her manager? A mysterious side to him ...hmmm...well then will have to wait and see what thats about...

- Hmm so he is smart manager, letting out the right info to get Arohi to agree...singing competition...and company organizing is none other than Arjohi Associations :) good good am liking the way this is going...I kind of expected this company being connected to them...

- I think i will like shefali ...well already do at least...her reason for working and her mind set to make sure work and personal stay separate and that she be treated professionally, although working for her friend...

- I like Arohi's relflection of how she came to where she is and she knows the struggles therefore wants to support those who are going through the similar phase...but then she also explores this unusual feeling of wanting to go there...a girl who made confident decisions changed it in the blink of an eye and her own reasoning wasn't cutting it for the feeling she was getting within...well well I guess we can all guess what that feeling..or who that feeling has to do with ;)

- So betrayal is part of this past...and she can't seem to get over his charming looks, his smile, him in general...even though he poached her heart

Chapter 2:

- Oh wow calling, literally, for her breakfast lol..Interesting...so Arohi wakes up all smiling, because it's the day of the competition

- So the fact that she is so thrilled about this singing competition and then the decision to pick her own outfit...all tells the reader singing is quite close to her heart...very good way to make that evident...

- And then the visible spark in her eye...there is defo more to this then just singing lol whether she knows that or not

- Lol oh suspence...drama...lights going out when she is about to turn to see the organizer...company owner...

- Oh oh oh ...they meet with an eye lock...choco brown eyes...intensely staring at her...what a way to meet ...i think all lights flicker and we get some interesting music and zooming in from all sides now LOL...and you stop! ...I have no choice but to wait and see what happens ...so update soon and do pm me if you can hun..thanks for letting me know about this SS of yours...

All right ...I loved it ...and like I said before...all writers unique in own way...

well done hun 👍🏼

and now its time for me to sleep and get up early morning to head to uni 😕😆

I guess should be morning for u soon ...so Good Morning...

have fun at school while I sleep 😛

take care ...lots of love & hugs...

phir milenge chalte chalte 🤗

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