FF ~In A Heartbeat~update 13 pg39 She is the one ! - Page 25

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice update.. Shaan is going to meet his dad... kuch interesting twist??

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Posted: 14 years ago
cute update...very nice
so shaan ab khanak ko janne ki koshis kar raha hai...gd, very gd
waiting 4 the next 1...sounds interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey awesome update😃 well i guess Shaan is unknowingly falling for Khanak and a CCD date coming up wow that's gonna b pretty interesting...he is trying to do things to jus impress her...a great start to an interesting love story...i wont say update next part soon as i know u hav exams so all the very best for ur exams👍🏼..do well😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
peru it is a good update

dont underestimate urself...

u r a student first then nything else...

well thanks ki apnay papers kay bavjoot u gave us an update

lovd it...they all r catching up on each other...ek dusray ko samajhnay ka wakt hay

i think they shld take time...its the building time of there timeless love...

love yaa
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Posted: 14 years ago
Shaan ko kuch khuch ho raha hai..ab ye khanak kuch kuch smzegi ya nahi...nice n funny update
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Posted: 14 years ago
it's fab prerna...just luvved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank you guys love you loads !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey I added new charcters please see pg 1
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice camaraderie between Shaan and Ducks ... Shanak attraction started already .. hmm

Good ... Seems like Shaan is very attached to his Dad ... nice family oriented kids ya.

Waiting for next ...

~Cheers,
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Posted: 14 years ago

update 10

hey guys I have intoduced two new charaters please see on pg1





Shaan goes up the elevator hoping that it is not a prank played by akshay again if he had played a prank on him he will not leave him but he had to come becouse no one stands between him and his father he can do anything to make him happy

Ducks too is happy that sunil is back

Yaar acha hai ki uncle aa gaye hayee har trip ke baad who jo chocolates le kar aatein hein .hayee maza hi aa jata hai

He pauses for moment

Par tereko kya lagta hai shaan? akshay ne hum par phir se ek prank khela hai .yaad hai isse pehli baar uncle ka naam le kar humein bulaya tha jab auntiee usse poonam bhabhi se milne ke liye bheja tha

Shaan smiles on remembering the incident. He remembers how shy akshay was and was hiding behind him and poonam thought that he was the one to get married to her!

"par ducks!" he speaks suddenly

Agar yeh ek jhoot hua toh tu dekh lena ki mein kya karta hoon !

Kya kar le ga too! Aaj tak bhaiya ne kitna kuch kiya hai too toh unhe kuch bolta nahin hai

Yaar tab baat ala g thi mein school mein tha par ab ! ab mein bada hoon

Toh tere bhaiya bhi toh bade ho gaye hain

Yaar theek hai ducks ! too abhi dekh na mein kya karta hoon !

The lift stops at floor 15 . they both get out fast. They rush to the door and push it open and falldown on each other !

Arre hi shaan hi ducks

Hi bhaiya dad kahan hai

ducks tries toget up .shaan pushes him down and gets up himself

ducks make a dirty face to him

dad kahan hai bhaiya

DAD! Arre who toh ayye hi nahin ! maine bola tune maan bhi liya !

Shaan is very angry now ! he is in the full mood to speak to akshay

Bhaiya ! yeh koi baat hoti hai ! aap bar bar yeh karte ho aur main aa jata hoon ki theek hai bhai hai thoda mazaak chalta hai par ap toh haad karte hoo yaar ! mein busy tha mazee kar raha tha aapko toh problem hi hoti rehti hai !

Akshay gives a sly smile and winks shaans dad behind him . ducks sees sunil too and gives a beaming smile

Yeh aankh maarne se kya hoota hai ?! yeh ducks ke saath hi chalta hai !

Sunil feels the need to step in

Shan shaan !!!!!!! calm down beta !!!

DAD!aap !

Shaan now smiles and is even ashamed at his behaviour

Bhiya aap bhi naa

Kya bhaiya !

Akshay tries to put in some massala

Yeh koi tareeka hai aapna bhai se baat karne ka ! maine tujhe aise hi itna pyaar diya

Bhaiya ! yaar itna melo dramammaatic mat ho !

Akshay laughs loudly with ducks . they do a high five .

Akshay gets up from his sofa beats shaan on his back and goes humming a tune to his room

Ducks to goes with him because he knows that now there will be some dad son talks

Sunil waits till all go and gives shaan a big hug

Shaan is happy that at last his dad had .he hadnt met him once after he had started going to collage

Dad aap kahan chle jate ho . yeh bhaut galat baat hoti hai

Shaan , main toh kal anne wala that par Mr. Grewal ne meeting jaldi kar li and unhone project sign kar liya hai

Wow great news ! wiase bhi aisa hua hai aap kisi cheez main fail hue ho

Sunil laughs

Wiase mon kahan hai?

Madhavi ! bhagwan ke kripa se who tumhari nani ke paas gayi hai !

Who thode deno ke liye wahan hi rahe gi ! bhagwaan ke liye acha hai ! warna sunil you are so LS !

Shaan laughs loudly ! toh aaj apka independence day hai ! aap toh mom ko aise hi bolte rehte ho

Shan ! tumhe pata kya hai .akshay ko bhi pata lag gaya hai iss liye dar raha hai tumhari shaadi hone do tumhe bhi pata lage ga!

Meri biwi bahut sweet hai ... I mean hogi !

Acha chodo . collage kaisa chal raha hai ! teachers kaise hain! Mr.Grewal ke beti bhi wahan hi padhti hai

Padhti hogi(he forgets that khanaks surname is grewal) . Abhi kuch khaas padhai nahin hui hai mein kal kaafi busy tha. Collage toh bahut acha hai

Beta dekho tumhen collage pasand aya mujhe itna hi chaiye. Abhi ache se mehnat kar lo phir ek bar collage khatam toh life apne aap achi ho jaati hai . timh apni poadhai pe dhyaan dena chahiye . bas jaise tum school mein jaise the yahsan bhi waise hi raho apne aap sab kuch acha ho jayega!ab mere baad tumhe aur akshay ko yeh sab kuch sambhalna hai. You are the heir to the khandewal empire

Shaan feels responsible

I promise dad that I will live up to your expectations

Sunils phone starts ringing

Excuse me shaan ! yeh loog bhi na mujhe abhi nahin chodte !

AT THE GREWAL HOUSE

Khanak is clearing the table .ramu kaka is helping her

Khanak likes doing things on her own

Just then the bell rings

She goes and open he door and to her surprise

Mama Papa ! aap

She hugs her mom tightly

Hello beta !

Aap loog toh kal aane wale the

Her dad smiles

Haan beta par humara kam aaj khatam ho gaya

Khanak takes the bag from sanjays hand and gives it to ramu kaka .

She then brings water for them

Aur beta ( sanjay says after drinking water) how is your health

Its good ! aab mein theek ho gayi hoon

Chalo acha hai. waise your cheeks are pinkand you look lively .aakhir tumne meri baat sun li aur walk karne gayi

Her mom smiles

No dad who shaan and ducks mere collage friends who lokesh ko basketball sikhane aye the toh unhone bola ki hamare saath chalo . toh mein chali gayi

Sanjay is happy

Thank god tum bahar toh nikli . abhi rooz jaana pata nhain dunia jahan ki bimarian lagi rehti hain

DAD!

Khanak beats him on his back they all start laughing


Edited by Prernarbofan - 14 years ago

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