|AbhIya| ~~BEAUTIFULLY DEAD~~ | Pg 107 update. :) - Page 52

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow kiara superb update.it was really touching.the way u described jeh's agitation it was awsm.i really loved piya's pov.waiting 4 abhay n piya 2 meet.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesome update now interesting turns are coming .can,t wait to see abhay & piya together thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsmnd superb part.
plzcnt soonh
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey
superb part
glad that jeh saved pia
but felling bad for abhay
he loved pia very much
missing abhiya scenes😭
eagerly waiting for pia's entry as khurana
continue soon...
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
So piya finally is a vampire wow. thanks for pm. piya pov is very touching. i hope abhiya meet soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update dear 👏

loved the khurana part...

hummm so jay is falling for piya...?

the dobrial part was good ...abhay is in pain...so sad...but he shud realise his mistake...want to see him repenting...

waiting eagerly for abhiya meeting...

t.c.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome update kiara,
sorry. . Cudnt comment before. .wasnt well. .
awww. . Poor abhay n kunal. . Finally , they realized their mistakes. .
Pia is a vampire now , superb!
eagerly waiting for the leap & abhiya meeting. .
Thanx 4 d pm
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update👏👏👏
very well written
i was almost in tears thinking about the state of abhay
finally pia is saved but jai is falling for pia😲
i hope soon we will see abhiya meeting
update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: priya.1

awesome update kiara!!!!!!!!! 👏

thnx 4 da pm


Thanks..!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
:: CHAPTER 12 ::



RAICHAND MANSION


Life was the same for everyone.If not the same it was not perfect.One decision 4 years ago on this same day had changed everyones lives if not for the better then for the worse.If not for the better then for the worse.That little ray of hope was still ablaze in everyone's lives even though years had passed the memories didnot fade.Life gives us choices and you have to just accept what comes next after the choice you make.

RAICHAND MANSION

ABHAY:(Thinking)4 years have passed today.. 4 years that you left me..4 years that I lost my love..4 years I lost you All for the mistake I made If i could ask for a boon now That wish would be that you would return..RETURN TO MY WORLD NOW.OUR WORLD.

Panchi woke up.. to see her daughter peacefully sleeping on Abhay's chest, she took the camera and quitely clicked a picture and then left the room to get ready for the day.Today she would celebrate the completion of 4 years of her marriage,mourn for the loss of her sister,prepare to enter into another year of her loveless married life but she had a daughter and she was her daughter happiness.Abhay was never hers not even for a minute.She watched Abhay lose himself for 8 months until Pia her daughter..their daughter came into their
lives.Abhay maynot be the biological father but he loved Pia more than a biological father did.He named the kid Pia and everyone supported his decision 'cause that 'lil angel brought a tiny spark of happiness back into their lives.PIA RAICHAND.Pia Raichand was her daddy's angel who always plotted against her mother.She and Abhay pretended to be a normal mother.They were good parents to Pia and knew how much their seperation may affect her.Pia was the spark in their lives,the spark of hope and happiness.

ABHAY POV
Abhay let his eyelids rest.Pia stirred in her sleep and finally woke up clutching his vest.She saw her daddy sleeping and soon his little princess tried playing with his hairbut soon she got bored and so much that she wanted to wake him up and as everyone knew Pia was known to get her wishes fulfilled no matter how much effort it would take.

"Daddiee.. wake up.. Pihoo borrehd.. daddiee wake up..!!"

Abhay was enjoying this moment .His hard reisitance staarted to fade against her cute doll eyes that with unrestrained and untainted love and joy.She was enjoying herself.He suddenly held her in his arms and placed her on the bed and started to tickle her while she laughed and giggled.

"stop..!!*giggle giggle* daddieee...!!"

ABHAY: Oh..! and what do I get if I stop ... mm what should I ask ..??

PIA: Kiss..!! Pihoo will gib(give) a big fat *spreding her arms while sitting on Abhay's chest trying to show* Kiss .. to her Dadie..!! *bends her neck*

ABHAY: Hmmm Kiss will do will defo(definitely) sweeten my day..! *smiles*

PIA: Kiss...!! *KISS KISS*

Abhay ccarried Pia to the washroom and tried to do impossoble.Brush her teeth one thing she was least
interested in.Iet was like fighting a war... a wierd battle with a three and a half year old.

UPSTAIRS

Haseena was angry today.Her temper had crossed the limits.Today was the day she lost Piya her sweet daughter and today was her son's marriage anniversary.She went upstairs into the room where her husband Chand was present at the moment.She entered the room where Chand was present,he was busy staring at a picture of PIYA & themselves along with ABhay,.This was their "family pic".The one they considered as ther family Pic but it had only one person missing Pia.. their little angel.Haseena was smiling looking at the picture and smiling remembering the past only to be interrupted by the butler therefore further adding to her anger.

BUTLER: Ma'am .. the organisers are downstairs.

HASEENA: Yeah.. tell them to wait.

She gave Chand a sqeeze and went downstairs.Today the whole of Dehradhun was gonna envy the alliance between the Raichands and The Dobriyals.Haseena knew the perfect way to get rid of the anger.. PARTY.. A huge bash.. just to distract herself.

DOWNSTAIRS

All the organisers are standing in a queue.Haseena walks past them and each of them inform her about what they were organising.

Organiser 1 : Thai Cuisine.. Chinese.. Itialian DONE

Organiser 2 : Best floral arrangements DONE

Organiser 3 : Best DJ DONE

Organiser 4 : Most expensive drinks and Best bartender DONE

HASEENA : (Coldly) Good.. and remember I donot want any mistakes. Mistakes are not meant for u.I want perfection.(In a low tone) We are perfect so this MUST be perfect.

Pia comes downstairs and sees Haseena there and then goes and clutches her legs

PIA : Dadi.. choki(chocolate) ... :) (with a 1000 volts smile)

HASEENA : (To Organisers) You may leave
(To Pia) Hello Princess..!! (Picks her up) Up so early..??

PIA : Uh-uh (nods her head) Choki..

HASEENA : Brushed your teeth

PIA : Daddy helpd(helped)

HASEENA : Had your milk and cereal..??

PIA : No bud(but) choki..!!

HASEENA : Ohk..!! but 1st I'll feed you naa..!!

PIA : (Makes a sour face)

HASEENA : Pihoo..

chand comes.

CHAND : Pihoo.. wanna help me have this (pointing at a bowl with a groosed out expression on his face)

PIA : Dadoo... yaay.. (sticks her tongue out of her mouth and shows it to Haseena and get's down)

Haseena smiles.

Chand smiles at both of them and hugs Piya .The maid puts the cereal for Piya and Chand feeds her.

PRECAP:: Kunal to go to England for the weekend. Will he meet Piya..?


hey..!!
Do u want Kabir-Misha dance on

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uDRLvpxOiDs[/YOUTUBE]


sorry couldnot reply to your comments .SERIOUS FAMILY ISSUES AGAIN..!! M FED UP ..!! So I am angry right now and thats not good for commenting.
Edited by iceprincesinluv - 14 years ago

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