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Posted: 14 years ago
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comment edited on page 13 :)
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amazing story..pl continue soon !!!
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amazing story !! pl continue soon !!
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Superb update! Waiting eagerly 4 next part; thanks 4 d pm
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I just read ur ff. i cant believe that happened. i am sooo sorry. i loved ur ffs and especially fanaa. i really wanted you to update them. i hope u can acess ur account soon :)
and this ff was sooo good. i loved it. i cant believe that riddhima fell in love with armaan only to be heartbroken :( soo sad. and ANU? omg what type of woman leaves her husband with another girl? i mean i understand that she is doing everything for a reason and all but still. AHHH... and who is that guy that is kinda blackmailing her? i hope everything goes well and the siddhant doesnt get hurt because then that will be bad. and i also hope that shashank doesnt do something that makes riddhima feel guilty for everything she is doing. i loved the part where atul, anjali, rahul and muskaan came in. YAY THE GANG IS BACK :) and riddhima is pregnant? omg that was fast. now what will happen to them? i hope armaan accepts her and realizes her love for him soon.
please continue soon and please PM me if possible.
thanks
simran <3
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HEYYY :)

THis is just such a goood ff :)

I loved it really!!!!

And ANU! Whats wrong with this woman? SHE BETTER NOT COME BACK NOW!!!

I added you as a friend, so please pm me when you update!!!

and update soon pleaseee <3
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amazing update
so Armaan signed the divorce papers
excited to know wat will happen on the engagement
nice part
continue soon

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hi dear..

just came across ur ff..

n i just loved the theme of the story...

its really amazing..

so plzzz do pm me when u update..

take care..

anu...

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6.Lost My Family, But Gained a Family

Riddhima was looking at her pregnancy reports in her room when she heard a knock on the door. In panic, Riddhima put the reports under her pillow and opens the door to find her Dad. "Papa, aap?" Riddhima asks, nervously as she moves back to let Shashank step in. "Haan, ab toh mujhe tumhare saath time nai milega toh socha kyun nai ke apni beti ke saath thoda waqt bita sako, hm?" Shashank said with a smile. "Haan Papa, bilkul," Riddhima said with a nervous smile. Shashank sits on the bed, near the pillow where her reports were hidden, making her breath hitch in her throat and make Riddhima go pale. "Kya hua?" Shashank asks, noticing the color from his daughter's face fade. "Huh?...Kuch nai Papa," Riddhima replies and sits next to her dad. Shashank puts his hand on Riddhima's head. "Riddhima, jab mujhe pata chala ke tumne shaadi ke liye haan kar di toh main bohut khush tha. Mujhe yakeen hi nai ho raha tha ke meri beti ki shaadi ho rahi hai aur woh bhi itne ache khandan main. Riddhima, tumne mujhe bohut khushiyan di hai sirf haan kehne se. Aur shaadi ke baad jaldi se khush khabri suna na mere Nana bane ki khabar," Shashank said with a grin. Riddhima looks at her dad as her hand to her stomach.

Riddhima's cousins come running in the room. "Riddhima didi, chalo na!" whines one of her female cousins. "Ya Di, sab aap ka neeche wait kar rahe hain," said a male. They grab Riddhima's hands and drag her out of the room. Shashank chuckles as he watches his niece and nephew drag his daughter away. Shashank looks down towards the pillow where Riddhima's reports were hidden.

Later that evening, the hall was full of relatives and friends of both sides. Siddhant and Riddhima were sitting on a couch that was provided on the stage for them to sit. Riddhima looks around and finds Armaan, Atul, Rahul, Anjali, and Muskaan seated at table in deep conversation. Riddhima knew they were getting a way to talk to Siddhant. Riddhima looks at Siddhant who smiles at her. Riddhima gives him a quick smile then looks away. The exchange of ring ceremony will be beginning in a few. Riddhima and Siddhant see Shashank walking up to them on stage so they stand up. Shashank stands in front of Riddhima. He's been wanting to talk to her after their conversation in the room, but didn't get a chance as she was being dragged everywhere. The next thing mad everyone quiet. All of them turn to see that Shashank Gupta has raised his hand on his daughter. Riddhima stares at her father in shock with tears flooding in her eyes. "Yeh kya hai!" Shashank yells, holding up the reports. Armaan, Atul, Rahul, Anjali, and Muskaan's eyes go wide as they see the reports in Shashank's hands. "Tum pichle hafte business trip par gayi thi ya phir..." Shashank left it incomplete. Riddhima looks up at her father then over his shoulder at Armaan. "Tum pregnant kaise hui! Bache ka baap kaun hai!" Shashank yells. Padma walks up on the stage. "Yeh aap kya keh rahe hain?" Padma asks Shashank in a low voice. "Yeh pado," Shashank hands the reports in Padma's hands. Padma reads it then looks at Riddhima. "Riddhima, bolo yeh jhoot hai," Padma begs. "Yeh...sach hai," Riddhima says. Padma raises her hand and slaps Riddhima. Armaan wanted to stop all this, but if he interfered it will make it worst. "Bache ka baap kaun hai!" Shashank yells. Riddhima was looking down as she cries and points at Armaan. Everyone's eyes turns towards Armaan. Shashank walks down the stage and walks over to Armaan. Shashank slaps Armaan across the face making Armaan's friends gasp and Riddhima look at her father in horror. Armaan looks at Riddhima's face and could tell she is more hurt than he is from the slap Shashank gave him. Riddhima truly loves Armaan. "Tujhe sharam nai aayi meri beti ke saath aisa karte ve!" Shashank yells. "Tera naam kya hai?" Shashank asks. "Armaan," Armaan replies. Padma looks at Riddhima in shock. Riddhima steals a glance at her mother than back at Armaan and Shashank. "Tum...Riddhima ke...boss ho na?" Shashank asks. Armaan nods and looks down. "Tumhari shaadi bhi nai ho chuki?" Shashank asks. "Ab main shaadi shuda nai hoon," Armaan replies. "Toh tune meri beti ke saath - " Shashank starts but Armaan cuts him. "Sachayi na jaante hui aap kuch nai keh sakte," Armaan fights back. "Toh sachayi kya hai!" Shashank yells. Armaan quietens down as he didn't know how to explain it. Riddhima looks down with tears running down her face. No said anything which made Shashank's blood boil. "Mujhe sachayi nai batana chathe, theek hai. Lekin main Riddhima ka chehra ghar main ya kabhi bhi nai dekhna chatha. Iss ladki ne humara naam mithi main mila diya!" Shashank yells. He walks back up to the stage. "Nikal jao humari zindagi se!" Riddhima cries and looks at her mother who looked away in shame and disgust. Riddhima turns her head towards Siddhant who stood there with hurt visible on his face. She looks at Siddhant's parents and saw them looking at her disgust. Shashank grabs Riddhima's arm and drags her out of the hall with Armaan and his friends following. Riddhima turns to look Siddhant, but he looks at her with hate and disgust.

All of them were at Armaan's house with Riddhima crying while Anjali was hugging her. "Mujhe nai pata tha ke aise hoga," Rahul said. "Main bhi," Atul agrees. "Ab jo ho gaya so ho gaya," Muskaan said. Armaan looks at Riddhima who had her face hidden in Anjali's shoulder and was crying. Soon, Riddhima fell asleep and all four of them left. Armaan looks at Riddhima when he hears her moving around on the couch. She sits up and takes in her surroundings. Riddhima finds Armaan looking at her. Riddhima starts crying and Armaan sits next to her. "Maine sab kuch kho diya," Riddhima whispers. Armaan holds Riddhima's hand. "Agar tumne sab kuch kho diya toh tumne mujhe aur humare bache ko paya hai," Armaan says, softly. Riddhima looks up in Armaan's eyes and he smiles slightly down at her. Riddhima cries and hugs Armaan, tightly. Armaan was taken aback by the hug so he wraps one arm around Riddhima's shoulders. Armaan looks down after a while to find Riddhima asleep, again. He picks her up and takes her to a guest room and lays her down on the bed. Armaan puts the comforter on top of Riddhima and stares at Riddhima for a while, then walks out.

Riddhima opens her eyes to find herself in an unfamiliar place, but last night comes back to her mind. Tears flooded in her eyes when she remembers her father kicking her out, but then Armaan has accepted to take care of her. Somewhere she felt that this was an obligation for Armaan. He didn't want to do it, but has to. She freshens up for the day and walks downstairs. Downstairs, she finds Anjali, Muskaan, Atul, and Rahul chatting with Anjali and Muskaan with paper and pen and Rahul and Atul doing things on the computer, while Armaan sat in a single couch and watched them.

"Hi Riddhima!" Muskaan said, happily and hugs Riddhima. "Hi," Riddhima replies a little confused. Anjali smiles at Riddhima and gives her a hug, "Good morning." "Hey Riddhima!" Atul and Rahul said simultaneously. Riddhima gives them a smile then looks at Armaan who smiles at her, softly. Muskaan pulls Riddhima down next to her. "Riddhima, tumhe kaunse color ke kapre chaiye?" Muskaan asks. "Kapre?" Riddhima questions. "Haan," Muskaan said. "Kis liye?" Riddhima asks. "Arre tumhari aur Armaan ke shaadi ke liye," Muskaan said. Riddhima looks at Armaan who was looking at her. Armaan looks away and was about to get up. "Armaan, aaj tu kuch kam nai karega," Rahul warns. "Lekin - " Armaan starts. "No," Atul said firmly. Armaan grits his teeth then sits back down. A giggle escaped Riddhima's lips making everyone look at her. Riddhima turns serious on seeing everyone's eyes on her. "Sorry," Riddhima whispers and looks down in her lap. "Riddhima, tumne toh abhi tak kuch nai khaya," Anjali said, shocked. "Haan...iss main heran wali kaunsi baat hai?" Riddhima asks, confused at Anjali's shocked expression. "Riddhima, your pregnant. You need take care of yourself," Anjali said. Anjali stands up and grabs Riddhima's hand and takes her to the kitchen. Riddhima turns her head and looks at Armaan.

Throughout the whole day, Atul, Rahul, Muskaan, Anjali have been preparing for Armaan and Riddhima's wedding. Every time Armaan and Riddhima would get up, they would tell them to sit back down. For some reason the four of them didn't want Armaan and Riddhima to do anything. Maybe its because they want their friends to relax and forget all that has happened and just go with everything that will come up. Atul and Rahul left for to search for good hotels to hold the engagement, wedding, and reception while Anjali and Muskaan left for some shopping.

Riddhima walks downstairs while looking down when she bumps into Armaan and Armaan wraps his arms around her waist, holding Riddhima close. Riddhima's hands landed on his shoulders and her eyes went up to his. Armaan looks down in Riddhima's eyes and Riddhima looks in his. Riddhima was the first one to come back to reality, so she moves back bringing Armaan back to reality. Armaan looks at Riddhima who was looking down, nervously. Riddhima walks past Armaan while Armaan sighs and leans his head back with closed eyes. Armaan couldn't believe that he lost himself in Riddhima's eyes.

Armaan walks in the kitchen to find Riddhima looking in the fridge. "Tumhe kuch chaiye?" Armaan asks. Riddhima turns around quickly with her heart beating fast. "Aap? Aap ne mujhe dara diya," Riddhima said, breathing heavily. "Sorry," Armaan apologizes. Riddhima turns back around and searches the kitchen. "Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai," Armaan said. "Hm," Riddhima said with her back to Armaan. Armaan holds Riddhima's arm and pulls her away from the fridge, and closes the door of the fridge. Armaan walks forward while Riddhima backwards and her back hit the counter. Armaan put his hands on the counter, blocking her way of escaping either way. Riddhima looks up at Armaan with her eyes wide. "Tum chathi ho ke humari shaadi ho?" Armaan asks. Riddhima looks away then down to the floor. "Hm," Armaan urges her to say something or at least a gesture. Riddhima nods with her head lowered. Armaan slides his hand from her arms up to her shoulder. Riddhima shivers with Armaan's touch. Armaan feels her shiver under his touch and knows she is very much affected by him. "Riddhima, main puri koshish karoga ke main tumhe woh har cheez doon jo ek pati apni patni ko deta hai. Main koshish karoga ke main tumhare liye ek acha husband bano ga," Armaan said. Riddhima looks in Armaan's eyes and knows he will stand by his words. Armaan leans down and kisses Riddhima's forehead then leaves. Riddhima stands in her place and looks at the place where Armaan just left. A smile made its way to her lips. Riddhima blushes and turns around with a huge smile on her face.

Armaan sees Atul and Rahul entering the house. "Hey," Armaan said. "Hi," Rahul and Atul reply and fall on the couch. "Tired?" Armaan asks. Both of them nod and Armaan shakes his head at them. "Kisne kaha tha ke aaj hi sab kuch karna hai?" Armaan asks. "Yaar, teri shaadi main sirf char hafte hain aur abhi tumhari aur Riddhima ki sagaai bhi nai hui," Atul said. "Sagaai kis ke liye zaroorat hai agar shaadi char hafte main hai?" Armaan asks. "Come on Armaan, har ladki chathi hai ke uski sagaai ho. Look at it from a girls perspective," Rahul said. "Acha, tu achi tarah se jaanta hai ladki ki perspective pe. Aur bata," Armaan said. "Haan, har ladki chathi hai ke uski bhi sagaai aur traditional shaadi. Jaise ke sangeet, upton, mehndi, shaadi, aur phir ek bada sa reception," Rahul said, looking up in the air while Armaan and Atul eyes were on Rahul. "Kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai ke Rahul ek ladki hai," Atul said and Armaan laughs. Rahul frowns and looks at them with a glare. "Aur Rahul, Armaan se pyar karta hai," Atul said, making Armaan stop laughing and glare at Atul. "Acha, tu toh ek aadmi haina?" Rahul said. "Bilkul," Atul said, popping his collar. "Jo podo se pyar karta hai aur abhi tak Anjali ko apne dil ki baat nai bata paya," Armaan said, hitting the back of Armaan's head. "Ouch," Atul says with a pout and looks at Armaan. "Armaan, mujhe laga ke tu mera bhai hai?" Atul whines. "Mujhe bhi yehi laga tha lekin jab tune mera aur Rahul ka naam joda tab se tu paraya ho gaya," Armaan said. "Armaan," Atul whines. "Atul," Armaan imitates. "Guys stop!" Rahul exclaims.

Riddhima walks downstairs to find all three guys talking with each other. Anjali and Muskaan haven't arrived yet so she goes to the door and checks through the door's window, but they weren't there. Riddhima walks in the living room and sits on the couch. "Hey Riddhima," Rahul said. Riddhima smiles back and replies, "Hi." "Riddhima, tum batao ke tumhe apne engagement pe kaunse directions chaiye," Atul said. "Mujhe nai pata," Riddhima said. "Oh come on Riddhima, tumhari koi toh pasand hogi," Rahul said. "Mujhe sirf simple cheeze achi lagti hain," Riddhima said. "Obviously, tum ho hi itni simple," Atul said. Riddhima smiles and watches Atul and Rahul do somethings on the computer. Her eyes move over to Armaan who was doing something on his phone. Riddhima notices that her, Rahul, and Atul are sitting on the same couch while Armaan sat on a seat couch. Riddhima gets up and sits next to Armaan. Rahul noticed this and nudges Atul. Rahul gestures Atul to look in Armaan and Riddhima's direction. They look in Armaan and Riddhima direction to find them gazing in each others eyes. "Hey guys!" Muskaan says. "Shh," Rahul and Atul get up and walk over to them. "Kya hua?" Anjali asks in a whisper. "Woh dekho," Atul said, pointing to Armaan and Riddhima. Anjali and Muskaan look in their direction and get the point. Quietly, the four of them move into a different room to do their work.


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Installment 1. This part didn't turn out the way I wanted it to but I think it will do. I don't think this part is that great.

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Sorry that this part is short, but I don't want to put a lot in this as a lot has happened in the beginning of this part.
Edited by Passion.. - 14 years ago
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Hey! That was a very nice part! OMG! I can't believe Shashank found everything out like that and threw her out of the house. But I'm glad everything's good now. Can't wait till AR get married! Please update soon and thanks for the PM.

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