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@.Dulcet

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#131

First Of All Dear.. Why Are U Updating So Late Na?
I Missed YOUR update Yaar
But The Update Was Brilliant :)
Arjun Is Too Spoiled And Naughty :D
Love Her :)) Arohi Is Sweet
Thanks For The Update Dear
Update Soon Pls

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#132

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Kudi first of all, thanks for the update. was missing it. this one was very close to my heart.

It is a little toned down from the earlier updates, It is missing the intensity which was there earlier, it is more introspective, but maybe it was needed at this point

The quiet, sulking, sitting in a corner, looking out into thin air Arohi, had splashed a fire making potion onto a strangers face! Turned lesbian after the beats. God - Arohi what you're thinking is normal. This other day dreaming, thinking a lot, building a box around yourself thing is what's NOT normal

great thinking. Arohi wants to be normal like other girls - how true. he brings out strong emotions in her, maybe that will remove the hurt in her heart also.

what a spoilt brat he is, out to break all the rules - but now he has found somebody who will not even give him the time of the day, good for her

Edited by punam2712 - 14 years ago

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@arohi_arjun

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#133

yay u updated... i was missing ur update. wanted to read the next part... it was awesome .. want to know how she became unconsicious and on arjun arm... update next part soon...

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

i loved it as usual! the way you experiment is good!

the first para was ma fav! i do that sometimes! looking outside watching rain sipping coffee! it's the best thing in the world!

abt disturbing us wid pms it's nt disturbance + the fact that i am one of those ff writers who disturbs you with ma pms! wat can i say i am very lazy!

continue wenver you hv time!

tnx 4 the pm...

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Ruky07

@Ruky07

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#135

yes u update
loved it, the description was nicley written
arohi in arjun's arm...
i like the way you present arohi thoughts
do update soon
cheerio:)

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Khadhija

@Khat2027

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#136

i swear i was just thinking of your FF yesterday! & you updated :)

cant wait to read it

--Read it :)

&& loved it :)

it was really nice, and why is Aru unconscious ??

cant wait to read the next part :))

please update soon :)

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love.1

@love.1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#137

ooo interesting!

How does Arohi land in Arjun's arms??? 😉

Loved the way you described the turmoil going on in Arohi's mind!

awww spoilt brat lol!... haha so cute him and his bhabhi gauri hehe 😆

dhak dhak dhak dhak in his heart as well... seriously can't wait for the next update!

Please do update soon 😊

Thanks

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salmankh1

@salmankh1

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#138

I LOVED IT! So well written. I love this Arjun...I can not wait to hear what happens at this party! You've done a great job of hooking our interest. Please, please update soon Harman!

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Kudi_NextDoor

@Kudi_NextDoor

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#139

Thank you Punam. I always look forward to your comments. Yes this update was written to be introspective, as all I wanted to capture were their feelings. A little bit of intensity, a little bit of filmy-ness, a little bit of emotions- I want to experiment with all those different types of writing styles. Let's see how it goes! :)

Originally posted by: punam2712
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Kudi first of all, thanks for the update. was missing it. this one was very close to my heart.

It is a little toned down from the earlier updates, It is missing the intensity which was there earlier, it is more introspective, but maybe it was needed at this point

The quiet, sulking, sitting in a corner, looking out into thin air Arohi, had splashed a fire making potion onto a strangers face! Turned lesbian after the beats. God - Arohi what you're thinking is normal. This other day dreaming, thinking a lot, building a box around yourself thing is what's NOT normal

great thinking. Arohi wants to be normal like other girls - how true. he brings out strong emotions in her, maybe that will remove the hurt in her heart also.

what a spoilt brat he is, out to break all the rules - but now he has found somebody who will not even give him the time of the day, good for her