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Simi

@simikr

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: shalini_s
OMG.. did Anu had a crush on Shaan?? hope she becomes friends with Khanak and we get to see some Khanak-Anu moments as well.. but Shanak take the cake this time 😛

Yes, Khanak Anu moments will be there in the near future.

Thanks for commenting!!😃

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Pooja

@candy84

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

This song is for my special BURTHAL !

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mTKDYSwVd3Y[/YOUTUBE]

HAPPY now with your so called POPULARITY????

PS: Don't expect any kind of SORRY from my side coz i am not at all sorry...watever i said was 100% for you only...Haq banta hai, Aadhikar hai mera! 😉...Right RRG???

Edited by candy84 - 14 years ago

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mystory

@mystory

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

hey czarina

m not back yet

but rok nahi pai apnay aap ko...feeling very sad :(

jab vapis aoongi tab baat karungi

abhi para nahi hay updates

love yaa

bi

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deepalisawant99

@deepalisawant99

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Ohh Simi gone through the update...

it was amazing...

even dis fan fictions category is good...

keep updating...

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shiksha_03

@shiksha_03

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

nyc update pls continue soon

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Krithika

@k.krithika

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Hi Simi 😊

Just read the update Close Encounters loved it so much 😃
Beautifully written as always 👏
Lovely part very sweet liked the new entry Anuraadha 😊
Loved their SMS chat 😊
Loved these lines and the last part of the update simply superb, awesome 👏
Two can play at this game honey
I know you better than you know yourself
We burn in the same flame
We live but for one desire
You cannot survive without me
And I will cease to exist without you

That is the only truth, and everything else is a lie.

A lump formed in her throat when she opened her eyes to find him kneeling down in front of her with a beseeching look in his eyes as he took hold of both her hands and stroking her wrists gently kissed her palms.

Now will you forgive your teddy bear and give him a kiss and a hug or will you make him beg?

I thought teddy bears don't beg, they demand or take by force!

Do they?

He raised his eyebrows in mock surprise as she slid down to kneel in front of him and putting her arms around his neck drew him up to her.

Now will you do it or or..

Or what? He whispered softly, coming closer his eyes sweeping over her beloved face.

Or will you make me cry?! She sniffed her eyes brimming with tears collapsing exhausted in his arms.

My poor little love, this human will not allow that to happen.

He said, gently bundling her up in his arms before kissing her deeply on the lips.

Let this burthal take you home!

Thank u for the lovely update 😊
Love u 🤗

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

simi updated my comments in page 2..😃

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n_gem

@n_gem

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Hey Simi,

Loved the Update...Close Encounters... apt title.

New entry-- Anuraadha...she is a chef...but she seemed upset over finding Shaan being married.

Agree with u Simi...About people with disabilities being exceptionally intuitive.

Khanak is having a very hectic day...poor soul...loved her convo with Nurse D----I couldn't have gotten a better person even if I had him custom built !-...Totally agree with her.

Shaan came when she needed him the most...just perfect.

Loved the lines Simi---

Two can play at this game honey

I know you better than you know yourself

We burn in the same flame

We live but for one desire

You cannot survive without me

And I will cease to exist without you

That is the only truth, and everything else is a lie.

Luv,

Nehal

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souryadeep

@Sanaya-hi-Rani

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

hey simi y did u move to the ff section...y dint u write@the rbo 4um...watever be it its ur decision and we haaians are always wid u...and now coming to the updt...well i will lyk ur new male entry opposite khanak and shaan getting jealous and 1 more thing dont show that every other girl is falling for shaan...it reduces the sq of the ff...(its ur decision dear we r not 4cing u ...i know he s irresistible and all that...ur pick dahling)...anyways as always great ff ...luv u

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Simi

@simikr

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: RB81
hai dear,
ok here i am penning my comments..
shaan coming out of the bathroom with just a towel..(reminded me of jab se tere naina..n i drooled over just imagining that..LOL!!!)
his self thought were wonderful..thinking of his angel's upset mood n correlating with what nurse D'souza said n he really want to see that..LOL!!! he wanted to see his fierce she dragon..
LOL!!! shaan u'll never get better self control..his talk with her photo on the side table n thaking palak for capturing that wonderful pic..he wants to know her better as a little sis like khanak is with akshay..so sweet of him..already his saali is on his side..she loves his jiju..not in a bad way though..
shaan planning abt setting up the kitchen..haaye..i so love this side of shaan too..who takes care abt household too..shaan loves her cup too..he is an absolute goner which we know very well..his question wat will u do abt that, smack me?? i so loved it..
planning abt his career..always love this side of shaan..he is trying to pull all the possible ropes..n there rings the door bell n thinks it should not be mom..LOL!!!
n there comes our new entry..anu..wow!! i never expected u to wove such character..ie,person with disability..but the way u portrayed her i loved her..head held high n least bothered abt her inability..n no one knows abt that unless they dont look at her while talking..coz she needs to lip read..she came with brownies to welcome shaan..her instant disappointment knowing he is married but seeing khanak's pic she too felt happy for the couple..thanks for clarifying the situation for anu at the start itself..
there is our poor darling..not at all feeling good after having a bad day in rain..but really simi y did u make her fall in the ditch..(a childhood thing..i was studying my 4th r 5th..once someone crossed by me unknowing pushed me into a ditch..😭😭😭😭 i feel bad for khanak..now i laugh thinking abt that..but that was really bad..thankfully that ditch was not too full r stinky r watever..but however ditch is a ditch..😭😭😭😭)
simi really do u name ur regular patients like this??😆😆😆😆(looks at simi innocently)
but here i love the names u give them..
khanak really did u do that??thought of ur hubby when u thought abt Mr.Macchar..but he is too much..😆😆
oh khanak when u needed a massage u thought of ur sweet darling shantanu..u just have to say him dear..he'll be at ur service..poor thing drowning too many adrak wali chai without having any other thing..nurse D'souza was too sweet to know abt her doc..she was happy knowing that Mr.Dhak Dhak took good care of her..
btw wat is f/u??😕😕 her last patient has serious problem but i feel it funny..
aaye..haaye..how does he know that she'll be sleeping that he msged rise n shine at 7 PM...their SMS was so cute like them..i so loved it..
wow!!! really was he there after her fasting SMS r it was her imagination..
n he was there..tht chotu poem was cute..especially "You cannot survive without me;and i'll cease to exist without u"..
he implied him as a teddy bear n gave her options n her reply for that was aaye..haaye..
teddy bears don't beg; they demand r take it by force..lovely simi..
ahhh..poor khanak collapsed in his arms all exhausted...
"Let this burthal take u home.."
sure sure she just needs a hot bath along with a soothing massage..hai na simi??😉😉😉
after that a good dinner...n peaceful sleep in her darling's arms...