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Posted: 14 years ago
batashe gun gun esheche phagun
bojhe ne tomar shudhu chuain atto je agun😳
kya bataun bonu jabse chapii padha hai all i can think abt is kesgul scenes😳loved the morning scene and the 2nd para of your chappi was awesome😳gullu avoiding kesu and me too want aarti wala request 😳kesu looking at gullu while driving and accident ho gaya rabba rabba😆tera kesu purre chappi mein mesmerized hi raha, next chapii mein hosh mein la aur dhansu scenes dal de😳mai tarsing for ur next update abhi se😉chalo ab update karo jaldi😃
mai to kab se khadi iss par ye ankhiyan thak gayi panth nihar
aa ja re ee ee ee piyu
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Posted: 14 years ago
Piu, thank you for romantic but emotional chapter. They slept until 12.00 noon. 😳, the new loveydovey couple. I love the Yogesh remarks.

He continued.." kya tu bhi na'Hum ne socha'ke newly wed couples ko thodi privacy de aur tumhe disturb nahi kiya..par tum log to sare record tod doge yaar'

I will have to agree with yogesh, yeh dono nah nah karte sab record tod denge. 🤣

I confused why Gulaal got irritated by the others' people talk of being them pati and patni knowing that she herself accepted to go ahead with this marriage. 😲

Is she falling for kesar too? 😉Why she dreamt that Kesar embraced after giving her peck on her forhead? Will she be able to contemplate her feeling first or rather his feelings for her first?😕

When you fall in love, small things matter such as the who is sitting where so that you can sit with the person you love and enjoy her company and enjoy the ride. Kesar is doing the same. ❤️ He likes being around with Gulaal but Gulaal on the other hand is avoiding him. Hope that her confusion is well sorted out on next chappie because I am too getting hurt with her aloofness towards Kesar.


I am feeling sad for the Kesar and very lost as Kesar is not knowing why Gulaal has suddenly behaving strange.😔😭

I just want to share one incident with you, where I called a guy Kesar. His actual name was Kishore ( married guy). I was calling him Kesar Kesar come here, come here and help me out. Then suddenly it hit me that his name is Kishore not Kesar. I felt so embarrassed 😳and laughed at myself. Dreaming in daylights. See I am going really nuts.🤡



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PKYEK12

wow i just starting reading your FF and it's so intriguing..

Aww nita 😳..thanx yaar🤗 where were you..😕we soo missed you😭

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Posted: 14 years ago
Waise ye bhavana tho holiday pe gayi thi na...waapas kab aayi...? I love bhavana...😳chahe woh pavitra ho ya paapi...😕
Main kya bol rahi hun...
N main yahan kya kar rahi hun...😲
Yaad aaya...piu...i loved that 10:30 ko alarm rakhne waali emo...😳ye kehne aayi thi...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: scarletthara

Wow... I had read through the the last few parts without even commenting, I just realised... well, it was more to do with reading through my ipad, which does not allow me to comment, wierd, I donno why ...😕

Hi minks 😳I was wondering where were you..😕anyways..I kn ow you always hit the like button...so still was satisfied and glad.😃.that you are still interested and reading it😆


Anyways, the main point is that your story is going through so beautifully. I loved the whole description of the camping point, you are making us see the whole of Garhwal through your depiction now.. Piu, special thanks for all the mention of the food, culture and things - it is quite interesting to know so many new things about a a different culture...
Thanx so much..🤗actually minks TV shows only concentrate on marathi,gujrati ,rajasthani and bengali..or marwari cultures but the culture of Garhwal is so rich..so thought of introducing something new..which ppl have very little knowledge about😳Glad you liked it

And to come to our fav bits of Kesar-Gulaal, wow !!! So, the friends have enough trust on each other, and they dont mind sharing a cot... but oh poor Gulaal, one peck on forehead causes so much uneasiness, tsk tsk... bechara Kesar, he cant even speak to her and sort it out, she is being the vintage show Gulaal, so typically Gulaal.
Yes Gulaal is comfortable..now but a small peck actually gives her jitters😆

I hope that they fight it out or similar, so that they can be back to being good buddies at least... and Kunnu shayar badnaam seems to have a significant role in being instrumental in making Kesar understand the plight of his heart through his shayari... good good... lets hope that he understands them soon enough...

Minks😉...actually I have put my soul in Kunnu shayr badnaaam so the character is inspired by me...🤣

Thanx for commenting..😳lubb you🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely chapter. I felt like I was watching a movie. The morning scene was superb. I love the pace of this story(plz dnt compromise with ur pace or creativity feeling that it might make it boring or stuff). I love the way u potrayed, Gulaal's awkwardness and finally her outburst though bechara Kesar was only caring abt her...it reminded me of a real life case. The rear view staring was awesome and so was the dream sequence. Thanks for posting the meanings of the shayari, it adds some more magic to Gulsar. Brilliant Piu just brilliant.👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bioinfo

batashe gun gun esheche phagun

bojhe ne tomar shudhu chuain atto je agun😳
Oh bonu😛..
Ayi raat tomar amar
ayi chand tomar amar
shudhu dujone😳
my mamoni..🤗lubbed the lines👏
kya bataun bonu jabse chapii padha hai all i can think abt is kesgul scenes😳loved the morning scene and the 2nd para of your chappi was awesome😳gullu avoiding kesu and me too want aarti wala request😳kesu looking at gullu while driving and accident ho gaya rabba rabba😆tera kesu purre chappi mein mesmerized hi raha, next chapii mein hosh mein la aur dhansu scenes dal de😳mai tarsing for ur next update abhi se😉chalo ab update karo jaldi😃
shotti you liked it..KG IS SO FASCINATING..NA...thanx...
haan yaar piche dekh k gadi chalayega..to accident hoga hi na😆
are bonu.😲.main rajni uncle nahi re..pls wait kar..chappi jaldi laungi😆
mai to kab se khadi iss par ye ankhiyan thak gayi panth nihar
aa ja re ee ee ee piyu

Jaldi chappi laungi kar le thoda intezaar

ho gaya hai dil bekaboo par kar kuch sabra yaar...😉

mamoni..I lubb you...muaah🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Part 17

Ye jo halka halka suroor hai...ye teri nazar ka kusoor hai

The next morning...Gulaal lazily opened her eyes.She could hear the sound of the flowing water of the ganges...the only difference being..that it was faint and dampened by the noise of the camp site whichwas now bustling with activity..

She could feel the same warmth?the same ..comfort and ..she was there embraced by the same arms?But?the only difference was that her face rested on the chest of Kesar and kesar's chin rested on her forehead? " was she dreaming",Gulaal thought and tried to move a bit?But kesar held on to her as if she was the most precious thing in his life and letting her go..would have been impossible?even while he was still sleeping..Gulaal still dazed and lazy?buried her nose again..and closed her eyes again?Kesar twitched a bit..slightly due to this gesture..and involuntarily placed a small peck on Gulaal's forehead?Gulaal and Kesar suddenly realized what just happened as they both opened their eyes..

Let your breath seep into my breath a little
Let your gentle heartbeat increase a little
This is the moment's request, come close
for me
Let me come into your eyes a little
Let me melt into your arms a little
This is the moment's request, come close
for me
Gulaal was shocked ?Both looked at each other still..embracing each other?Gulaal had a confused look and fluttered her eyelids still looking into his eyes?Kesar was mesmerized by her..She looked very pretty?with her hair all fanned messily ..But he could not..take his eyes of her intoxicating pair of eyes..Normally she used to wear spectacles?andhe had seen her even without them? But she was so close to him?Her eyes..were wreaking havoc on his mind?How could he have missed those eyes?He felt intoxicated..although .effect of alcohol..from last night had vanished long ago?
In your eyes
there are caravan of my dreams
Let our bodies and souls burn a little
Let our modesty stray a little
This is the moment's request, come close
for me
Touch my body, but in such a way
As if it were a melodious musical instrument
Darkness is hidden in your hair
Let it open, so the night can go free
Let my scarf fall from my bosom a little
Let the dewdrops slide a little
This is the moment's request, come close
for me

Kesar,kesar,kesar,,,are gulaal bhabhi?Kitni der soyoge.."Their brief eyelock was interrupted..by the mixed and loud voices..of Rewa ,yogesh and Devika..They both quickly got up..and Gulaal quickly managed her hair?as they both came out? oh no kyu khatam hua

The sun was playing hide and seek..with the dark clouds which gave an indication..that it was going to be a rainy day..i hate rains

K: " Good morning",said Kesar lazily?while still rubbing his eyes

Y: Good morning..ghadi dekh idiot..its 12:00 noon?,Yogesh laughed at Kesar's innocent Good morning? arey baapre noon tak kaun sota hai ok kesar is lazy and drank par gullu sach mein badi waali lazy birdie hai omg she broke all the records yaar

K;..kya?.Kesar was shocked?pp..par aapne uthaya kyun nahi.Kesar said still in disbelief that he almost slept till 12:00 noon kyu jaldi uth kar kar kya tea banani thi zoro k gulam

He continued.." kya tu bhi na?Hum ne socha?ke newly wed couples ko thodi privacy de aur tumhe disturb nahi kiya..par tum log to sare record tod doge yaar?Ghar bhi jana hai?ab jaldi se tayyar ho jao?It's almost a 3-4 hr drive..shaam ho jayegi..ghar pahuchte..pahuchte?aurphir it will start raining again?Driving would be risky..so chalo bhi jaldi karo?

so sweet
Gulaal felt shy and uncomfortable as Devika and Rewa were constantly giggling and giving her a teasing look?

G: wo ..wo meri thodi tabiyat kharab ho gayi thi..na isliye..main bas abhi?She did not complete the sentence and she ran inside?To get ready?

bhaag jaa nanad are good thank god star plus par yeh show nahi hai nahi to poora month gullu k lazyniess par saas bahu k drama chalta
KG tent 12:30pm

Both Gulaal and Kesar..got ready ?No one had spoken a single word to each other There was.an unusual and awkward silenc in the tent?

chup tum raho chup hum rahe khamoshi ko khamoshi se baat krne do
Gulaal was wearing a light yellow salwar kameez?

He felt intoxicated and dazed?

her beautiful eyes had not left her since morning..The more he tried not to think about those moments..they again came back to haunt him..

Kesar saw her getting ready..and packing her bags ..He was about to say something?but Gulaal suddenly said?

G: "wo maine saman pack kar liya hai..Main Rewa aur Devika k paas ja rahi hun,she walked away without even looking at him?

Camp site Car parking 1:00pm

Gulaal ,devika ,Rewa had reached the car?and started taking their respective seats?Yogesh andkeasr were still a few steps..behind?and were carrying all the bags..

Gulaal saw them coming,thought for a moment and sat on the front seat..as she knew Yogesh would be driving?.

Gulaal had not stopped thinking..since morning ..the thoughts of the peck and whatever happened last night didn't leave her mind..she felt uneasy..,and confused..and upset?She wanted some peaceof mind so she sat on the front seat..paagal ladki

Kesar saw that ?they all came near the car?He paused for a second..saw Gulaal on the front seat..and said to yogesh

K: yogesh bha..aap keys mujhe dijiye..main drive karunga..cute bacha

Y: kya?tu drive karega?Are tujhe to car driving bilkul pasand nahi?,Yogesh was surprised and then saw Gulaal sitting on the front seat?He smiled sheepishly and and said? "Oh theek hai..theek hai..carry on?,"Rewa ,devika,giggled as yogesh handed over the keys to Kesar..haye haye yeh young couple ko kitna tang kar rahe hain

Gulaal saw this..quickly opened the door and said almost like announcing in a seminar.." wo yogesh bha main to bhul gayi ki mujhe chakkar ayenge samne baith k?.aap pls samne baith jaiye..," and she almost pounced on the rear door opened it quickly,,sat there and breathed a sigh of relief..

idiot duckling
Kesar saw this and was hurt..but he now could not change his place..so decided to drive

anyways?He opened the car door with a heavy heart..and sighed while started?.He looked at Gulaal through his rear view Mirror?she was looking aimlessly outside..The smile which she had on her face..last night had vanished..He set the rear view mirror to have a better view of her?and started Driving?Rewa and Devika ..were busy chatting..and the journey began?Kesar kept on giving furtive glances at Gulaal who was still looking outside?The view ouside was breathtakingly beautiful..and it had started drizzling again..Gulaal was enchanted by the beauty of the nature?She completely forgot her uneasiness and relished each and every moment of the journey?Kesar saw that beautiful smile again..and was happy again?He kept on checking through the mirror..Gulaal involuntarily looked at the mirror and was surprised to find Kesar looking at her?There was a twinkle in her eyes and she smiled at him?That smile almost killed him?Her intoxicating eyes?and equally intoxicating smile..accelarated his heart beat..He was ecstatic?and in his excitement took a dangerous turn..and lost control..but somehow managed to stop the car Just on time?by suddenly applying brakes.

arey baapre yeh to sach mein gaya tha
Everyone was shocked ..Kesar was relaxed though?

R: are pagal age dekh kar gadi chala?'she shouted angrily..

D: lagta ?raat ka nasha abhi utra nahi hai?Kyun Kesar,"devika taunted him..and everyone started laughing?

Gulaal felt uncomfortable and lowered her eyelids..

R: Kesar tu pls koi music chala de?na..warna ..hum sab bore ho jayenge?

K: wo mere bag mein kuch CD's hain Kunaal ki..koi bhi de de?main chala deta hun..

Rewa handed over a cd to kesar..he played it and started driving again?.He again..looked at the rear view mirror to check if gulaal was still smiling?He relaxed when he saw her admiring the beauty of the nature?oh no y shayari mein hoti to would have jump out of the car

The song played on..It was Late Nusrat fateh ali..khan's qawwali?

Kunal had some weird taste Kesar thought?Yogesh exclaimed?Oh I love this song..he is wierd fateechar shayar

Kesar took turns at driving and gazing at Gulaal..he was mesmerized,intoxicated and dazed?and song played on..

" ye jo halka halka suroor hai

Ye teri nazar ka kusoor hai

Tere pyaar ne teri chah ne

Teri behki behki nigah ne

Mujhe ek sharaabi bana diya..'

acha ok whatever...mujhe shayari nahi achi lagti all i think abou kunal chiii
Kesar gave a silly smile and thought.. " how much he hated Kunal's shayari and chice in music?and now it was all making sense naow..he thought?
no he is senseless

Meanwhile ?Eveyone was sleepy..and Gulaal fell asleep too?

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Kesarlooked into her eyes came very near to her and placed a small peck on Gulaal's forehead?and embraced her?.

Gulaal was shocked?as she opened her eyes and saw herself sitting in the car ..yogesh rewa and devika still talking and Kesar driving..

ok i will get talli gulaal scene pulling kesar towards her kyu to mere dimaag mein kyu ghumta rehta hai😆
She had been dreaming?" she thought..but she became very upset,confused and the very thought of her dream?made her freeze with fear andconfusion?.

Dhaba on Dehradun road

They were tired so yogesh suggested that they should at least have some tea nad snacks?as still half of the Journey was left..Everone..rushed to the dhaba chairs and ordered tea and pakoras?

Gulaal was still lost in her own world..She seemed clueless of her surroundings and stood like a statue near the car door..oye hoye hanky panky nahi hua tha yeh bhi talli thi kya kal paagal

Kesar saw her standing there alone ..and she had an unusual?frown on her face..He decided to talk to her..He slowly walked towards her? kis pagal k chakkar me fass gaya

Gulaal saw him coming and she quickly moved towards the whole group completely ignoring him?Kesar felt bad as he could not figure out what was wrong with her..

They all were taking sips of the piping hot tea..and relishing..veg pakoras..Everyone was gossiping and chatting..Gulaal didn't speak a word or ordered something?

Kesar noticed this and said..

K: Gulaal I think you should drink some tea?You were unwell last night..this will soothe your congestion..,he said lovingly and ordered for some tea ?and said to the dhaba owner " bhaiyaa zara adrak (ginger)dal k banana"how sweet

Rewa and Devika ..started giggling..and Rewa cstarted complaining..

R: Dekha Yogesh ise kehte hai acha pati?Dekha kesar Gulaal bhabhi ka kitna acha khayal rakhta hai?She is so lucky..Tumhe bhi sikhna chahiye?

Everyone agreed ?But Gulaal sulked and got up hastily and walked towards the car..Her mind was not at rest..everthing was so unexpected for her..She was confused and upset and now all this pati talk ..made her fume?

Kesar quickly followed her .Gulaal was still sulking..

u and i in the beautiphool borld
G: kya baat hai Gulaal?,he saked with care and concern..as he had noticed her turmoil since morning..

Gulaal needed to went out her frustration?She shouted?

G: Get lost Kesar?I am not a kid anymore..I can take care of myself?mera picha mat karo..zaruri hai mere age piche ghumna..Just leave me alone?.Mujhe tumhari shakal se bhi irritation ho rahi hai?,She said without any pause..Her turmoil,delimma and Frustration?and her confusion..made her burst in anger..and she rebuked Kesar in a very harsh manner...😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡@#%^@%$#%$^@$@^

Kesar was in deep pain,hurt ..and unable to fathom thr real reason of her anger?😭😭😭😭

He didn't say a word?and walked awy from her..still shocked and hurt?

All of them sat in the car again..Kesar started driving again..Gulaal was very upset and kept on looking outside the window?Kesar again gazed at her through the rear view mirror ..There was no response from her?His heart was in pain?and there were tears in his eyes?The song continued as he kept driving..

" Maine to awwal..unke samne khanjar rakh diya.

Dil rakh diya..sir rakh diya

Aur ye arz kiya..

Mere baad kisko sataoge

Mujhe kis tarah se mitaoge.

Kya yun hi teer chalaoge..

Meri sabra ko tum duayen do..

Tumhe ek katil bana diya..

yeh shayari abhi bhi kunal yaad a raha hai
Tears kept rolling Kesar's eyes...as he kept driving and thinking about those harsh words?while everyone else slept..It was 7:00pm?and they finally reached home?
beautiful chapii loved the beginning hate our galool and loved our kesu gullu u need a tight slap.😡...

and piyu i love u for ur such a romantic and emotional chapii and jaldi jaldi bring new chapii👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Gman

Piu, thank you for romantic but emotional chapter. They slept until 12.00 noon.😳, the new loveydovey couple. I love the Yogesh remarks.

Hi Gina..🤗thanx for liking it😳


He continued.." kya tu bhi na'Hum ne socha'ke newly wed couples ko thodi privacy de aur tumhe disturb nahi kiya..par tum log to sare record tod doge yaar'

I will have to agree with yogesh, yeh dono nah nah karte sab record tod denge.🤣
Yes Gina..duniya k liye they are newly married couple and normally ppl tease like this only...and yes..Wakai..they are on the verge of breaking all records🤣

I confused why Gulaal got irritated by the others' people talk of being them pati and patni knowing that she herself accepted to go ahead with this marriage.😲
Actually Gulaal agreed to marry due to some extraordinary circumstances...Imagine her plight..she being force fed with dreams of Vasant at the tender age of 14..then this fiasco..Her turmoil and confusion..and then suddenly this new found attraction,care and attention from Kesar..and she also being drawn towards it...Too much to handle for anyone..I hope it makes sense😳

Is she falling for kesar too? 😉Why she dreamt that Kesar embraced after giving her peck on her forhead? Will she be able to contemplate her feeling first or rather his feelings for her first?😕
Well she certainly has found a comfortable bonding with Kesar..and normally ppl tend to dream..about whats been constantly going on in their mind..so since morning she had been thinking about..those moments with Kesar..so this dream...Well its too early to say..that is she falling in love😳

When you fall in love, small things matter such as the who is sitting where so that you can sit with the person you love and enjoy her company and enjoy the ride. Kesar is doing the same. ❤️He likes being around with Gulaal but Gulaal on the other hand is avoiding him. Hope that her confusion is well sorted out on next chappie because I am too getting hurt with her aloofness towards Kesar.
Yes Kesar has been hopelessly giving signs..of a person..in love..from the very beginning..He is yet to fathom his feelings but ya Gulaal matters a lot for him😳


I am feeling sad for the Kesar and very lost as Kesar is not knowing why Gulaal has suddenly behaving strange.😔😭
Ya ..One has to feel for that Poor Guy😭

I just want to share one incident with you, where I called a guy Kesar. His actual name was Kishore ( married guy). I was calling him Kesar Kesar come here, come here and help me out. Then suddenly it hit me that his name is Kishore not Kesar. I felt so embarrassed 😳and laughed at myself. Dreaming in daylights. See I am going really nuts.🤡
OMG..Gina...😲.can't stop laughing...🤣OMG we are all crazy here.🤪.see What this TV serial has done to us😆



Thanx Gina🤗..for your comment..Lubb you..🤗.Feel so proud that you actually read it and try to understand the little emotions which I try to potray😳

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Originally posted by: Keithuu

Waise ye bhavana tho holiday pe gayi thi na...waapas kab aayi...? I love bhavana...😳chahe woh pavitra ho ya paapi...😕
Main kya bol rahi hun...
N main yahan kya kar rahi hun...😲

Yaad aaya...piu...i loved that 10:30 ko alarm rakhne waali emo...😳ye kehne aayi thi...😊

Yes yes we all love bhavna.😉.hai re meri sleeping beauty..🤗.Lubb you😳 tu bhul gayi thi..🤣.kya kehne ayi thi..😲.Aww itna na soya kar🤣

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