ok..firstly before i talk about the update or whose fault it is...i would like to thank raman first for a very very long update.👍🏼
The moment, she had written about Arjun seeing riya at the day care center, i was scared that raman would end the update there itself and would leave me anxious for God knows how many days...so i dragged down and when i saw a long update...the words in my mind were, "luv you raman"...seeing the long update did calm me down and i started reading rest of the update, most of the time thinking that what i think is a long update would eventually come to an end, leaving me with lots of suspense ahead. but thankfully, u didn't stop the update when arjun and arohi met, or when arjun found out the girl was his. You did continue and made your readers relax a bit. But still we are looking forward to the story, the way you are going with the story is fab. I never thought SWTE would regain my interest again so much...because most of the stories are ended with a happy note...but the twist brought my attention back to this FF.👏
There is no doubts whatsoever in my mind when i say that the update was fabulous.⭐️ The things i liked the most about the update was that you didn't drag the part where Arjun finds out that riya is his daughter, otherwise most of the serials i know take ages or even take a generation leap for the parents to find out about their own sibling. 🤣
You kept it quite sensible,without dragging it, hats off to that!! 👏
Every sequence in the update was nicely written.
well, now when Arjun knows about Riya, he has also heard from Arohi that she kept this a secret because she didn't wanted her daughter to be with a guy who commits adultery. I think Arjun is angry now but eventually during the night, he should realize that it was his mistake too and taking riya away from arohi isn't the best solution. If riya needs the love and care of a father, she needs her mother too. Even tough arohi wanted to abort the child before, but she didn't do it and she has been a lovely mom to riya. I think Arjun should have riya by winning back Arohi's heart again and having both in his life and not by court case. by being the same old flirtatious arjun with lots of passion and love. ❤️ .the one who made the enemy fall in love with him and want him. That would be like our Arjun.😉
Now when everyone are thinking about whose fault it is, I on the other hand has now started thinking that the one person to blame for all this is Arvind Jiju...he was with Arjun all the time, he knew very well that Arjun didn't sleep with natasha, even that same night he was the one who took him home...he should have cleared arohi's misunderstanding. Even if he would be unsuccessful in that, he should have told Arjun that arohi didn't abort the child the next day...Arjun would be happy and would have tried to clear the misunderstandings between him and arohi after knowing it...one thing let to another and when it came to divorce still Arvind didn't find it sensible to step it and clear the misunderstandings?...when clearly he could see two of his friends who truly love each other were committing a huge mistake. I know arohi told him not to tell this to Arjun...but c'mon, if she was acting immature, is it necessary that he should act stupid too??
Edited by addictive_kmh - 14 years ago
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